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I was going to include this stuff with chapter 5, but then the title wouldn't work so here's chapter 6...
Oh I sort of edited chapter3... in one little place...
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Neal's POV
Sir Nealan of Queenscove couldn't sleep. Every time he closed his eyes he saw his deceased wife's face like she was mocking him. And the strange part was Yuki would slowly turn into Jzet and she would say the same words again and again. 'But you lied to me this whole time! I can never forgive you for what you have done to me!' These words tormented him and he couldn't stand it much longer. So he decided to take his mind off things and write to his best friend.
Dear Kel,
Jzeliette found out about Chuck and Heather today. She's really upset with me. She ran away from me after I explained what happened. Kel, she called me a liar and told me she could never forgive me. It hurts Kel, it truly does. I feel like a failure Kel, my only daughter hates me! I feel like a total meathead right now. How are the kids? Please right back Kel, I need you right now.
Your meathead,
Neal
Neal reread the letter several times before calling a servant to bring it down so the letter could be shipped out with the next post. After that was said and done Neal took a walk in the garden's to let his mind wander.
Neal found it to be very cold and retreated to the practice courts. He swung his sword around in anguish and disgust. I let down my only daughter and now she hates me. I must be the worst father ever. Neal's thoughts were interrupted by a voice.
Neal looked up and saw that it was Jzeliette's training master, Lord Padarig of haMinich.
"Sir Nealan you look as upset as your own daughter." said the older man. "What seems to be the trouble?" The training master took a seat on top of the fence and motioned for Neal to join him.
Neal didn't want to pour out his heart to this almost complete stranger, but went over to him anyway.
"My daughter hates me my lord." Neal said bitterly. "She's really upset that I remarried another woman after my wife's death."
"You didn't tell her did you?" the older man asked. "She thinks you're a liar."
"Exactly," Neal said. "She ran off on me when I told her the truth."
"You didn't follow her?" the training master said his voice hinting a little displeasure.
"I had to stay with her step brother and botch things up with him." Neal said. The older man met Neal's gaze directly.
"I think you need to talk to your daughter." said the training master. "You better go to her now before she goes to sleep."
"You're right my lord." said Neal getting up. "Thanks,"
Neal ran off and knocked on his daughter's door. He heard a grumble and a few banging sounds.
The door slowly opened to reveal a bewildered Jzeliette.
"Oh hello," Jzeliette said grimly.
"Jzeliette I am truly a bad father." said Neal. "I lied to you. I lost your trust completely. I want you to know that I have never felt so bad in my whole entire life."
"Father I don't think I have ever been lied to so badly in my life." Jzeliette said keeping that god forsaken Yamani mask on her face. "But I know you probably lied to me to protect me. So I forgive you and I promise I will forget this ever happened."
Neal hugged his daughter and kissed her on the forehead. "You are the person that I care about most in this world and I never want you angry at me. Now get some sleep and train hard tomorrow."
"Yes oh father of mine." said Jzeliette. "Now good night to you," Neal kissed his daughter good night and then watched her close the door behind her. Neal felt a tremendous weight get off his chest and then made his way back to his quarters.
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-caiti-