Thank you, for telling me if you like it or not! Now I am going to continue with chapter two. I had someone asking me what this story is about! I will tell you in chapter three what it is about. Thankyou
Chapter two watching them!
Outside the Tardis there were trees and birds. The birds were singing quite happily when a gust of wind came though the trees and they flew away. The sun had began to rise when the Doctor came out holding Rose's hand. The Doctor was wearing a black t-shirt and black jeans; Rose was wearing a light blue top, with shorts.
"Right," said the Doctor, "let's find out where we are." Whilst he was looking around to see if any people where about.
Rose was standing near the Tardis not sure what to do when a high pitched sound came into Rose's mind. It sounded like someone using their fingernails on a blackboard. She clenched her hands over her ears to try and stop the noise.
Then the whisper started "Rose, Rose, I am going to get you and then you wish you should have told the Doctor." Rose's heart skipped a beat, should she tell him!
Taking a deep breath to let her voice relax, and not sounding too scared as the Doctor came towards her. Her nerves had gone cold. "Doctor," she begin in a whisper but the Doctor stopped her!
"Well, I couldn't see anybody, sorry Rose you were going to say something," Rose sighed and muttered "it's nothing Doctor, So you saying that there is nobody here," "No it's a bit scary is an it?"
Rose nodded and felt the wind at the back of her neck prickle like a warning. "Come on, let's walk a bit and then we stop for a rest," "O.k." Rose smiled as they began to walk, but had a funny feeling that they are being watched. They were being watched as glowing eyes followed them…..
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