Hi I am sorry that I haven't been working on my story and I have been thinking about this chapter, so here it is, and again I am sorry.
Chapter Four
Back at the Tardis, the Doctor asked Rose to sit on the sofa and relax, while he got the Tardis ready to going into Rose's mind. "Doctor is this safe?" Rose asked. The Doctor had done the best he could on the Tardis and now he turned his head at Rose and smiled"of course it's safe, well I think it is safe but don't worry I be here." The Doctor answered, Rose half smiled and closed her eyes knowing that she is safe in the Tardis.
Rose opened her eyes; she was standing in her bedroom in the flat in London. Her bedroom was abit off a mess, toys and pencils were all over the floor. Her bed was made fresh and it made Rose's nose twitch beacuse it was perfume. Just then her bedroom door slowed opened and her younger self came in to the room, Rose saw her pyjamas which had red flowers on, then she heard her younger self shout out to her mum, "MUM CAN YOU GET ME A DRINK OF WARTER PLEASE?"
About ten minutes later Jackie came in to the bedroom with a cup of water, then her younger self went in her bed and Jackie put her drink on the small table next to her bed.
"Now Rose go to dream land and dream, I see you in the morning good night." Jackie wisped and closed the door. Rose's eyes were getting used to the darkness, and then the temperature dropped down making Rose shiver. Then came a low growl from the dark and then Rose saw it's eyes which were blood red , and its teeth were fangs coming out, then it shocked in a different language which thanks to the Tardis can translate. "Little girl I know you can hear me and soon I can hear you!" Rose and her younger self screamed.
Rose opened her eyes and saw the Doctor looking at her. "Rose it's o.k. you are safe now and I am going to help you fight this." Said the Doctor and gave Rose a cuddle.
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