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Chapter 11

"Well I don't know!" Answered the Doctor, and Jackie slapped the Doctor across the face! "Oh what was that for?" Shouted the Doctor. Jackie went up to the Doctor's face and spoke in a angry voice, "You have lost my Daughter, Doctor and you say that you can't find her! Of course I slap you across the face and I will do it again if don't tell me where she is?" and with that Jackie marched back up to the flat, the Doctor sighted and slowly followed Jackie up the flat.

When he got inside the flat Jackie was in the kitchen making a cup of tea for her, and then she turned her head around the door and slowly looked at the Doctor. He was looking at school photos of Rose smiling, "Doctor I am sorry that I shouted at you but hey rember last year you and Rose went somewhere and then you came back one month later and I slapped you across the face The Doctor hold his face with his hand and thinking that first slap and smiled, "yes I rember and Rose smiled." Jackie smiled and finishing making her tea.

The Doctor looked around the flat then his eyes saw an open Door and it had a name on the door and it said Rose Room,

Making sure that the room was clear he went inside. It was not the cleansed room in the world, it had lots of books and clothes spread all over the floor. Even her bed was unmade as well. The doctor had a look at the walls there was lots and lots of drawings not from magazines but from Rose's hand,

The Doctor put on his thick glasses on and had a look at all of the Drawings, he was about to go when one of the Drawings caught his eye. This Drawing was different to the other Drawings that the Doctor had seen this one had a Black round shape and it had stars all around it.

The Doctor pulled down this picture from the floor and put it in his pocket, He came out of Rose room and closed the door shut and went to see Jackie who was watching the telly. "Jackie asked the Doctor Jackie when did Rose done this Drawing?" and the Doctor took the Drawing out of his pocket. Jackie's eyes slowly moved from the TV screen

"Oh Rose did that picture when she was six, and she called it a made up name!" The Doctor was interested "What did she call it?" Asked the Doctor, "She called it, BlackanDoom!!" Said Jackie

The Doctor leap up from the chair that he was sitting on and left the flat.

Meanwhile Rose who is out of her cell was now working in an old Room (which was near her cell) all Rose had to do was dig with her hands to move the soil and then plant some flowers which are Different to the flowers from home but thinking about home made her home sick.

"HEY YOU!, GET BACK TO WORK!!" Shouted a guard who was near by, "No" answered Rose back. "RIGHT!" said the guard and he came right up to Rose and hit her across the face six times! Then the guard pushed Rose to wards her cell. There was another guard outside the cell door and he pushed Rose in the cell. Then Rose saw a long piece of rope in his hands and he began to tide her hands thought the bars on the window and locked the cell door. Tears came pouring down Rose's face as night came.

Rose begin to sing in her cell to her self

"I am a lone at this place

And I wish I was at home.

I rember I was working at a shop

In London and then went down

To a cellar,

I was so close to Death by a shop window dummy

Until I meet a man

Who is not scared by any thing?

And I hope he will find me!

"MY FRIEND THE DOCTOR!!"

Rose closed her eyes and hoped that the Doctor will find her before it will be too late to save her. "Doctor find me?" And with that Rose said no more.

Right what do you think about this chapter. Now this is a very long chapter but if you scan this chapter JUST this chapter you will see what I have put in this chapter. So read this chapter and Tell me what you think and have you seen what I have put just in this chapter than the other ones. Hope you like this chapter, thank you for reading!

From SuppperMagicGirl