Thank you for letting me know what you think about chapter 11 and I could tell you that Rose's song was from series one of Doctor who with the ninth Doctor and the drawing which was in Rose's bedroom was from series two with the tenth Doctor so here is chapter 12 for you.
Chapter 12
The Doctor was back in the Tardis after leaving Jackie's flat he now knows where Rose is but he doses not know where about she is. "Tardis I am going to give you a piece of work that Rose did when she was six." Said the Doctor and he reached in to his coat pocket and pulled the Drawing out, when he opened it he thought of Rose and how she could remember the planet and the stars around it.
Then he shock his head and put the drawing on the control of the Tardis and the Tardis began to scan the Drawing. As The Doctor just about to sit on the sofa, The Tardis begin to shake and The Doctor went up to the Control and said to the Tardis "Tardis what is happening? He asked. "I can hear something in the air" Bleeped the Tardis. "What is it? Ask the Doctor, "I don't know" answered the Tardis..
Rose stayed in her cell, still tied up to the bars. Guards came and guards went, some feed Rose and some untied the ropes so Rose can go to the toilet, then after back to being tied up to the bars. About 10 weeks of that Rose was cut down. A guard who was new and scary came
Up to Rose and said "Right you Get back to work
And DON'T YOU ANASWER BACK TO A GUARD! UNDERSTAND?" He road and Rose nodded as a yes. "Good said the guard and left, Rose was back where she worked last time and began to dig and dig and dig. The sun was betting down on poor Rose it made Rose so ill that she fainted under the hot sun.
Meanwhile The Tardis landed on a different planet so the Doctor can get more food and more things for the first aid box. While he was looking at the food, Two guards came in to the Market and flopped on two chairs "Oh sighed the first guard what a day I had. I had to boss these guards because they just stood there not doing any thing and I had to shout at them to get on with their work and then I saw this young girl and she looked ill!" The other guard said nothing and he looked around the market and saw the Doctor and said "HEY YOU what are you doing?" The Doctorwalked up to the guard that had shouted at him, so the Doctor put his hand in his coat pocket and pulled out the Psychic paper and gave it to the Guard . When the guard saw what was on the psychic paper he had turned red as a apple, "I … am sorry for shouting at you sir…. Please come with us!"
Said the guard and the Doctor smiled as he put the psychic paper back in to his pocket….
Hope you like this chapter sorry I can't do any more my hands are a bit sore tell me what you think about this story and chapter thank you.