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Chapter fourteen

The Doctor looked at all the guards that had surrounded him; they were all different sizes than the ones he had been talking to. So he decide to talk to them first and to explain why he is there, But the guards spoke first.

"Right said one of the guards who the Doctor fooled his the physic paper. Tell us why you are here and why have you lied to me and my friend here?" he asked the Doctor andpointed to his friend who smiling to himself as if he was proud of himself somehow.

The Doctor cleared his throat and said to the group of Guards "Right said the Doctor I am here to find my friend Rose Tyler who has now been missing for ten days

I have a machine called the Tardis and I gave it a drawing and it scan it and drop me here!" The doctor paused for breath.

One of the guard that the Doctor never talk to said "Exercise me but have you got the drawing with you?"

He asked. The Doctor slowly put both his hands down but all the guards pointed their swords at the Doctor, all expert the middle size one that had asked the Doctor if he has the drawing with him.

"NO shouted the middle size guard, Put your swords away! Or I have you lot fired!" He said, and then the guards slowly and carefully put their swords away. The Doctor went in to his coat pockets and had a good look. He pulled out his sonic screwdriver and his physic paper and a last a piece of paper, which turns out to be Rose's Drawing.

Then he gave it to the Guard, who spread it out and had a look at the drawing. "MMMMhe said then he looked at the Doctor and said "Well sir this Drawing you gave me is ten years old and u….mmm…. Do you know what the planet is called?" He asked The Doctor thought long and hard then he said "it is called " BlackanDoom! . All the guard gasped including the Doctor guard,

Looking puzzle the Doctor asked "what's wrong?" The guard who likes the Doctor had to explain why they all gasped "You see sir backanDoom it is a very dangers planet and when someone is taken there, they don't EVER COME BACK!" Said the guard.

Suddenly an evil laughter came behind the Doctor and everyone turned to see that the Guard that looked so pleased with himself had a gun with him and now was pointing it to the Doctor. "Well well Doctor you have done well better than I accepted for that I must say well done" The guard voice had change as if someone is speaking though him. The Doctor was getting a bit angry

"Who are you?" Asked the Doctor. The guard smiled evilly and said. "You don't know me Doctor no one knows me expert Rose Tyler you see your friend knows more than you ever know!"

"What dose that mean?" Shouted the Doctor, Her mum is worried sick! and I care about her so if you kill her or hurt her I will kill YOU!"

The guard laughed and laughed and then he said "Well Doctor you better find me then and your friend then We will met face to face, Good bye Doctor, See you soon.."

The guard woke up and said "Oh what's this gun for?" And before the Doctor could stop him. The guard short himself thought the head!

That is chapter fourteen hope you like it. getting very scary and I have done more pages this time so read carefully and enjoy, please review thank you! Oh and who do you think is the person that was talking though the guard, put your guess in your review thanks

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