Author's Note
Yeah, I know we all hate these and whatnot, but I need a Beta tester, and I've had an offer, but I'm not sure if she'd want to do what I'm looking for:
I need someone who loves to write and is not afraid to tell me what I'm writing totally sucks and that it doesn't flow right. Because that tends to happen alot, and now that it's at fighting scenes (yes, the next chapter is written and yes there is a fight) that I'm no good at writing I think I need a second opinion. I also stink at grammer. So if anyone is interested leave me a review. I'll post the next chapter tomorrow or later today. :)
-forbittenlove