Why didn't anyone review chapter5?

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akasailorsea:

thanks! it's nice to hear people was i am a good writer. i can't help using the dub names because i watched ONLY the dub episodes. though when i read a story without dub-anything i have somehow "trained myself" to instantly translate them to the dub version, i always ignore Mamoru and Motoki for some reason though...

I AM SORRY FOR NOT DOING THE CHAPTER 5 SHOUT OUT!!!!!!!!

katie-baby-3X7-21

thank you very much! like i keep saying (at least i THINK i keep saying) it's always good to hear how good i am and how good the story is going.

Chikyuuhime

a very faithful/loyal reader you are! thanks a lot for reading my story! about the e-mail...i don't remember what we were talking about (it was seven months ago) so could you refreshen my memory!

starangel07

i attempt to, but sometimes it never works! ;

ON WITH THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chapter 7- Telling Shaun

Lily, shaken up, was now walking down the street in the correct direction to the construction site where Shaun was working. Right now Lily was almost in tears, she couldn't believe a horrible man, such as him, was alive.

If Lily had ever truly lied to her brother it was her memory of their long-gone parents. Lily might have only been three, but she still remembered them. For example her and Darien's hair color came from their father and that their deep blue eyes came from their mother. She could remember her mother's Spanish accent and their father's musky smell from his cologne.

There is a reason why Lily thought Ollie Connigan was such a terrible man...he was the reason Mr. and Mrs. Shields were dead.

She had known for nearly eight months. She would have gone to the police, but who was going to believe someone who's been sent to juvenal hall twice and that this same person has no memory of her parents? About a month ago she told Shaun, he knew she could still remember her parents. A few days after she told him he came up with some weirdo plan.

FLASHBACK

"Remind me why we're doing this again," Lily asked. Surprisingly, she was a nervous wreck, which was usually the opposite of herself. Here she was with Shaun on some empty bridge with someone Lily had never met before. They were waiting for the evil, devious, crack head, bipolar Ollie Connigan, who was coming back from some charity auction, probably drunk, as usual.

"You know exactly why we're doing this," Shaun replied, he forgot to mention that this man that Lily had never met before couldn't speak English (A/N: I know the series takes place in Japan, but go with it. I never watched the Japanese version of the show. Except for PGSM, but that doesn't count). This "new person" was supposedly on "the force" and had owed Shaun a favor. He handed Shaun a wire, "Okay Lil's, lift up your shirt."

"What?!" Lily yelled, "Shaun I'm-"

"Relax, I just have to wire you," he assured her, "Besides, it's not like it's the first time I've seen you naked."

"SHAUN!!!!" Lily yelled surprised that he talked so loud with the unknown guy so close.

"Relax, he can't speak English," Shaun replied.

"You could have told me that before," Lily yelled. Then she started talking of the earlier subject, "Besides that night we were both drunk and it's not like we knew what we were doing…after all we were both virgins."

"Yeah, now lift up your shirt," Shaun said as she finally lifted her shirt blushing. He was soon blushing at the sight of her lacey dark red bra. "I do remember a grin on your face though," he teased.

When he finished wiring her she finally adjusted her shirt, "I remember one on yours too."

All of a sudden, they heard a big screech and a crash come from the road. The next thing they knew was Ollie Connigan's car, was sinking in the water, with him in it.

END FLASHBACK

That night had brought back hurtful memories to Lily. It reminded her of the night her parent's death. For the next few weeks she had started acting up in school and started getting into trouble again. Her foster parents thought it was time for the Shields siblings to reunite…forever. That was the cause of the big move.

A few minutes later she finally made it to the construction site. Most of the construction was finished, though the window panes, and doors weren't intact yet. Lily walked in hoping that finding Shaun would be easy . Then something tapped Lily's shoulder. She turned around and saw am alarmingly tall man behind her. He had large, bulging muscles with a tattoo of an anaconda on one arm and another that said "Big Daddy" on the other arm. On top of his bulging upper body he wore a white muscle shirt and on his large bulging legs he had on blue jeans. On his face he wore 5 o'clock shadow. He also had a cleft chin and beady eyes, that had the look of kill in them.

"Hey Jerry, how are you?" You look like you've been working out," Lily said calmly.

He gave her a friendly hit that knocked her back a few steps, "Hey Lily, I'm doing great, and you're right I have been working out." Jerry Brooks was one of the very large, but friendly workers of the construction staff.

"And the wife and kids?" she asked rubbing the sore spot of Jerry's punch.

"Great as always," he said, "But I bet you're looking for Shaun, right? He's down in the basement."

"Thanks, but how did you know I was looking for Shaun?" she asked, but received no answer, but a look, "I don't like him."

"Lily? What are you doing here?"

Lily turned around to see Shaun coming towards her with his foster father. Shaun was also wearing a yellow hard helmet, but he wore a open, red plaid shirt over a black muscle shirt and blue jeans.

"Lillian, how wonderful it is to see you again," Shaun's father said. Shaun's dad, Samuel Carver was a very simple man. He had a lovely wife, a nice house, and a successful company. His hair gray with age as was his mustache and beard.

"Hi Mr. Carver, it's great to see you too," she said as they shook hands, "You don't mind if I take Shaun away for a few minutes, do you?"

Sensing the distress in her voice, "Go ahead, keep him if you like. He's been very slow today."

Taking a double-take Shaun yelled, "Hey!"

Lily laughed as she grabbed Shaun's hand and dragged him away. It was her slightly fake laugh. Sometimes she would use that as a distress signal when in public with Shaun.

"Ooh your slightly-fake laugh, what happened?" Shaun asked as they went to the far end of the house.

"Well originally I came over to say hi and see if you wanted me to bring you some lunch later, but something very, very bad happened," Lily explained, "He's back, he did not die in that car wreck."

"You mean-" he asked, but he sis not have time to finish because Lily nodded her head with tears in her eyes. Shaun then embraced her as she broke out in tears. Little did they know, Mr. Carver was spying on them, but he could not exactly hear…he was getting old after all.

"What are you going to do?" Shaun asked pulling her away to get a good look at her face.

"The same thing as before. Live a slightly normal life while doing his dirty favors," she sniffled, "I just have to be more careful. He knows about you, the girls, and my brother. And with his unlimited amount of resources he can do anything."

Shaun froze as he thought about the dirty favors Ollie would ask, "Speaking of dirty favors did he ever force you to-" he was of course referring to sex.

Lily looked at him like he was crazy when realization hit her, "OH! Um…no he would never force me to…that. He said I look too much like my mother for that action. Apparently my mother was as innocent as a nun or something. Besides I think you of all people would know considering…" she trailed of thinking about the party where they both became intoxicated and had drunken sex…wonderful drunken sex, but drunken sex none the less. They both blushed thinking of that night.

"So when are we going to finally sit down and talk about that?" Shaun said embarrassed.

"Soon, soon," she said just as nervous and embarrassed, "Everyone is waiting for me at The Crown so I'll see you later?" Before he could say anything else she left.

'It amazes me to no end how strong she is,' Shaun thought, 'She cries her heart out and she still has enough strength to meet up with people and act as if everything is okay.'

"Son, is there a problem with Lily?" Mr. Carver came into the scene.

"Yeah, something happened and I am her shoulder to cry on," Shaun was worried. He wanted to go out and comfort her, to be with her, to protect her.

Mr. Carver knew his son had secret feeling for the girl, "Go. You aren't exactly needed here. Let her cry on your shoulder."

And with that he ran after her.

"But there is a catch."

Sorry that it took me so long to update...i kinda lost the book i was writing in ;

i might just put it in a folder...

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