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"hmmm" Tenten groaned.
She opened her eyes with ease for she had 10 hours of sleep. Reason: Saturday.
She had every right in the world to slack off. Amen to Saturdays!
She opened her little cupboard beside her bed. The previous night, she remembered to turn off her alarm clock for she was about to sleep like a god.
She saw the time. 10 am.
She dully went to the washroom and did what she had to do.
She ate break fast……but that was before she begged her parents for forgiveness.
When she was done, with the drama from the folks, she looked at the clock and her heart suddenly started to pump faster.
11 am. She remembered her conversation on the phone with Hinata. They had agreed to have Tenten over to hang.
I'll be out of the house by 12 and…at Hinata's house at one. Oh please god let Neji be there! And give me a good reputation in front of him! PLEASE!!
OH MY GOD ITS 11:02
I gotta get dressed! Tenten, today shall be marked as the day you didn't dress like a boy.
Where something…cool. And straighten your hair and let if out.
No! that might be a bit overrated.
Maybe I should…
I don't want to over do it! It'll be too obvious
Though maybe I should…
NO!
But…
Nahh don't want to risk it.
Tenten ran up the stairs in fast speed; to match her heart beats.
When she entered her room, she let out a giggle and threw herself onto her bed.
Even though she'd already brushed her teeth, she decided to do it again. All the while thinking: I'm such a loser…
Then she put on a tight black shirt, giving her curves a notice as it slid to her hips.
The shirt had a little hood at the back and tiny sleeves. It was sexy and cute. Genius.
She wore tight pants, which she rolled just below her knees.
The outfit simply stated: yeah I know I'm hot, but it comes naturally.
She left her hair as it always was and will be: buns.
Then she sneaked to her parents' room and sprayed some fragrant called Intuition on each side of her neck. Then she left. After a few seconds, she sneaked back, grabbed the fragrant and sprayed under her armpits.
She checked the time: 11:30.
Shit, I got 30 minutes left!
She looked both ways in hesitation. Her heart beating as fast and hard as ever. She could have sworn her parents could hear it.
Ah I know! Tenten ran back into her room, she opened her little cupboard, where her alarm clock was last placed. She tossed it to the side as her hands dug deeper.
"uh huh" she said approvingly, getting out two silky baby blue ribbons.
She dashed to the bath room and curled it around the hair bands holding her hair into two perfect spheres.
she smiled in satisfaction. She wiggled her head just to see the ribbons flow. She let out another giggle and looked at her alarm clock.
11:42
For crying out loud!
She sighed…
Maybe some make up?
OK buddy, you pushed the limit with the shirt, your ribbons, totally overdid it. No way are you going to put on make up she disciplined herself.
In the end, to kill time, she joined her mom in the living room, where they watched Passions.
Holy shit, this is one hell of a shitty show!
I hope I won't watch these craps when I'm older
After a while Tenten looked at the clock just above the TV.
12:15 pm.
craaaaaaap!!!!
Stupid show distracted meeeeeee!
I swear if I ever get a time machine and meet who ever made soap operas, I'll punch them until they completely forget the idea.
But secretly Tenten was relieved she had something to distract her, no matter how desperate it was. She didn't want to reach Hinata's house early and seem like a loser with nothing better to do.
Better late than early, that what I always say. she snickered.
Finally she left her house. She couldn't help it, she just could not swipe the smile off her face. She was too excited.
I get to meet him without the "intention" heheh
Ohh please be there!
She sped walked to the bus stop.
As she was on the bus she reached out her pocket and read the wear-about of Hinata's house. When she understood, she placed it back into her pocket.
The bus took quiet a while.
After exiting the bus, she looked at her watch: 1:03 pm
She took a deep breath, taking in the tasteful smell and started walking.
Finally, she was there. She stood before house 196 in staggered amazement.
It's a freakin' mansion!
She hesitantly took steps toward the huge azure building. There were gates, and at each side of the gate were statues of miniature hungry lions made of grey and light-blue marble, with bulging muscles and front paws on top of a sphere.
"eh!" Tenten was startled as her admiration was interrupted by the sudden opening of the gates.
She walked through carefully, not to damage the perfectly raw-umber pavement.
She estimated the time she reached the front door way about 30 seconds.
The front door was just a beautiful as the golden gates.
She rang the door bell, sending out a harmonious tune throughout the house.
It took a matter of seconds before Hinata slyly opened the door. She gave Tenten and sad smile and welcomed her in.
Tenten held her breath. It was astonishing.
The floor was designed with square blocks covered with cloudy patterned lavender.
The walls with swathed with sparkling thistle.
There were beautiful peachpuffed vases supporting decayed Welches. Giving the setting a more calm and humble presence.
"Welcome Tenten" Hinata whispered, her cheeks as pink as dahlias.
Apparently she was ashamed of her house…?
"W-would you like to go upstairs to my…room"
"That would be great!"
"F-follow me please"
On their way to the stairs
"So…where are the other Hyugas, Hinata?
If you don't mind me asking. It so quiet for such a big house…though that might be the reason it's so quiet"
" um…some are attending errands, some-some are working, some are in there room and s-some are outside"
Tenten took a dive
"…and um, and Neji…?"
Hinata didn't seem to notice anything strange. It seems like a perfectly ordinary question; to want to know where your class mate is while you are in their house.
"I'm not sure… I think Neji-kun is in the gym"
Tenten: by himself?
Tenten didn't notice they had reached the stairs and are mid-way to their destination.
Finally they had reached Hinata's room.
It was just like Hinata. Light cyan walls, indigo carpet and Gainesboro furniture. Except, there was one big difference: it was huge.
"It-it's so…you!", Tenten dashed about.
Hinata let out a tiny laugh.
"ehm…Tenten, what would you like to do?"
I WANT A TOUR! And stop as soon as I see Neji's room!
"Um… anything you would like to do Hinata"
"Eh, please, you choose" Hinata hesitated. The pressure…
"Um….ugh!", Tenten was struck. She looked outside of Hinata's yard. There before her was lots and lots of land, there was a pond, a cherry tree farm, a tennis court, an outdoors swimming pool, a basket-ball court and an outdoor gym!
–but never mind those things.
Tenten saw Neji.
No. Tenten saw Neji without a shirt on.
No no no. Tenten saw Neji's abbs.
She realizes she was in a risky spot, as hinata gave her a specitcal look.
"oh, ahem, your… your yard! It's magnificent! I wish I brought my camera!"
I really do.
Hinata also moved close to her window.
"T-thanks… and-and there is Neji-kun…"
"oh and didn't notice!"
"if you'd like to say hi you— "
"waiiit, he lets people say hi to him?
SHIT... she knows!
Tenten's eyes were popping out. She saw Hinata blush again and look sideways.
Tenten had quiet a stupid face expression; her lips we curled in, her eyes wide and aware, her hair some-how looking messy.
Hinata couldn't hold it in. She let a giggle escape. She quickly turned around and hid her mouth with her hands, with a terror-struck face. Oh no! What have I done? Tenten won't feel safe around me! I'm so horrible…
Tenten looked embarrassed.
"yeeeah… sooo…you ..know...heheh" she said hesitantly smiling.
"Please Tenten, I'm so sorry! I promise I wont let anyone know, please trust me. I wouldn't do anything to hurt you…I'm…I'm so sorry"
wow, she makes me feel like I own this mansion.
"Hinata, you're my best friend, you don't need to reassure me, I trust you 100, I should be the one apologizing… for putting you in such an uncomfortable situation", she sighed,
"not to mention…having a crush on… your cousin."
It feels so wrong saying that!
Awkward silence.
"…so, if you would like, I –I could show you to our back yard and…"
"Besides me…you know…liking him n' all… I also have to thank him….he kinda saved my life"
"…..oh…em….ok, please follow me", Hinata chose no to question.
Tenten hated this, hinata and her had been befriends forever! And because of her wild hormones, the honestly in their friendship was hard to control.
They went to the basement where there were two transparent slid doors to the outside.
Tenten was about to crash into them if it wasn't for Hinata opening the lock.
They walked toward the outdoor gym.
There he was… lifting weights…
During school Tenten always saw him wearing simple short sleeved shirts, so she never realized his muscles. Every time he pulled the weight up a big lump of muscles bulged out with large pumping veins on top.
Tenten was impressed by how Neji's abs still showed while he was sitting down.
He's is ripped!
"h-hello Neji-kun" whispered Hinata.
"Hinata" Neji didn't even bother to look up even though it was rare to be saluted by his incredibly shy cousin.
There was silence. Hinata looked at Tenten, she saw the uncertainty on poor Tenten face.
"ahem" Hinata shyly signaled.
"h-hi Ne…ji" Tenten said.
Neji didn't notice Hinata had company, actually, he did notice. He simply didn't care. He thought they didn't want to consult him like he didn't want to consult them. The change of his predicted plan silently surprised him.
He first looked at Tenten's shoes then slid his eyes all the way to her face. He recognized her. She was the carefree daydreamer, which put little effort in everything she did.
He hated that.
Shewould have been headlines if it wasn't for him.
Tenten's heart was beating so fast it was about to break her ribs. Her throat was dry , her skin; transparent. All because of a stare.
He looks incredible…squinting his glorious eyes from the sun… almost looks like he has no pupils. The small drops of sweat running down his face…down his handsome body. God I wish I was Hinata.
Why did I think of myself so highly? Did I actually think I would have him fall in love with me? God, I'm so stupid!
"Hmmm", He replied dutifully.
Silence.
"ehm…I don't know if you remember, but, ehm, at-at the plaza—near our school, you-you saved me from three men… I'd just like to thank you…so …thank you very much.
I don't know what would have happened to me, if-if you hadn't shown up"
He nodded in acceptance and went back to what he was doing.
Tenten latent her sorrow.
Hinata bowed to Neji, even though he did not see, then she looked at Tenten to see if she was ready to leave. Tenten and Hinata, as if on cue, slowly turned around and ambled back to the mansion.
"I hope you called the cops", Neji said.
Tenten was startled and slowly turned back.
"y-yeah", she lied.
Did he try to make conversation?
No don't be dumb! He said the most appropriate thing to say.
He did not attempt to further converse with you.
Tenten didn't give up.
"Well bye Neji, hope to see you in class on Monday"
He gave her a bored expression while tilting his head up, in agreement.
I didn't know he was so social!
As soon as they reached the Mansion, Tenten let out a giggly laugh and reached up on her tiptoes like a child reaching for candy, with a big drooling leer on her face.
Hinata let out a little giggle. She was happy for her.
They looked at each other let out another wave of giggles.