Caught in a Venus Fly Trap

by demented cookies

Kinda sucky title. Peter and MJ have absolutely forbade their daughter May to continue as SpiderGirl. But she is determined to stick with her identity. To prove herself, she decides to go after a duo that commit murder for fun...it may cost her her life.

1. No More SpiderGirl

This is my very, very, very, very, very first Spiderman fan fic so please no flames! (But just because this is my first Spidey fiction doesn't mean I just started reading Spiderman comics!!)

DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT own Spiderman/Peter, MJ, Spider-Girl/Mayday, Felicity or any other character. They all belong to Marvel Comics (MC2). Neither do I own Geloth, for he belongs to my friend (who had no part in writing this EXCEPT for making up the bad guy). I do, however, half own the Venus Fly Trap. My friend and I share her.

Chapter one: No More Spider-Girl

Thick strands of webs shot out of the web-shooters on her wrists as May "Mayday" Parker swung over the tall buildings of New York. She knew she wasn't supposed to be out here at two in the morning but she couldn't stand to be in that household any longer. Ever since her parents found out about her nearly getting killed after a battle, they absolutely forbade her continuing her costumed identity.

What's the big deal? She thought. Dad used to be a super hero. Why can't I?

After a few short minutes of swinging around she decided to go home. She needed her beauty rest.

"I don't get it," May said to her friend Felicity Hardy during lunch the next day. "I mean, what kind of former super hero doesn't let his daughter fight crime?"

"I totally agree with you," Felicity said. "I was in the exact same position with my mom."

Felicity was the daughter of Felicia Hardy, the former Black Cat. Felicity had discovered May's identity and had been determined to become her partner. It didn't last long.

"You know what I think?" Felicity went on. "You should go out there as Spider-Girl and show your parents that you can do it. You can."

"I appreciate the support, Felicity, but I tried before. They'll kill me everyday until I die if I do that."

"Your choice," Felicity shrugged. "See you in class."

As May slowly finished her lunch, she pondered over Felicity's words.

No flames please! And sorry about the short chapter. The next one will be longer!!! Again, this is my first Spiderman fan fiction. R&R!!!