Well, my little story is over!
First of all, I'd like to thank everyone who's been reviewing this story. It means a lot to me and makes me feel great. Thanks. Here's a shoutout to all my regulars:
-mystic-Hoshi
-Jo
-heaven-monument
-Dawn-of-the-phenix
-AuthorLittle
-lupi loop
-Venusgurl5
-DevilKidd
-Half-elf
-areku26
-relyna
You all ROCK!
Stuff I was pleased about in this story include
-the climaxes,
-the detail which I think has improved,
-the adjectives and speaking words
-the metaphors
-the characters of Taki, Tornado and Madam Sarene,
Now I'd like to outline how non-perfect this story is and where I need to improve.
-Planning
-Yunsung's character never properly defined
-Antagonists more defined and more 'fun' than the Protagonists.(IMO)
-Too much fluff and filler (as much as we all love it)
-Flow (nod to heavenmonument)
-sub-plots (Mina's chat, Weakness, beauty of women) never properly defined.
-Tornado was too weak to be a supervillan (she was just TIED UP!)
I could go on but I forget all the other ones. And that makes it look REALLY BAD! But apparently, according to the 96-or-so reviews so far it was a pretty good story. But I couldn't have continued it without my reviewers. Yet again YOU ROCK ALL YOUR SOCKS!
Now, another story, huh? Well, it might be a while before I think up another which has the proper plot and stuff. I have one in planning but I might not be able to think up a good climax- the characters and setting are going well though. If I do try making it you will find it is completely different in every way to this one. It will be set in modern day, but I assure you it won't be one of those "omg its your characters but set up in all kindsa weird modern situations omfg FUNEE!". Yeah. Anyways, see ya around!