Alrighty chapter two probably the last chapter.. i feel like im digging my self a deeper hole as i add to this story.. anyways suggestions are welcomed and deeply apreaciated.

Chapter Two

Sora gazed into the black sky. an ocean crashed onto the shore where grey sand lie. Sora dragged Riku by the arms neer a tall black stone. he placed Riku face up causing Riku to groan.

Sora kneeled down and held his head to Riku's chest. ' good he's breathing..'. Sora was no doctor, but knew Riku wasn't in very good shape. His cheeks were rosy and stood out from his pale face. Riku's expression had pain and he felt clammy to the touch. His body lay still, except for the occasional movement from his chest.

Sora removed his head from his chest. he wiped the blood from his face and frownd in discust. "Sick!"

He ran to the ocean and rinsed his hand. Sora cupped the water and splashed it to his face. The water was cool and refreshing to Sora. he sipped the water, expecting it to be salty. to his surprize, it tasted fresh and crisp.

" So we are by some lake or river. How lucky!" He looked back at Riku hoping for some response.

Riku's body lay in the place Sora had set him. he frowned. " Riku, I don't think I'm gonna last if you keep on laying there like that."

Sora ran over to Riku. his breath quickened and Sora felt his forhead. For Riku the cold hand against his hand felt releaving for the second Sora could handle placing it there. "Oh man Riku, your forehead is on fire!! ill go get some water to cool you off"

Sora ran to the river and plunged his hand into the water. grabbing as much water as he could keep. he tried to run back to Riku but was stopped by a beam of light shinning behind him. He turned and gasped. The light began to swallow him. Sora turned to Riku's motionless body.

"Riku!! Wait no, I can't leave!! Riku wake up!!" '

Sora extended his arm out to Riku. He blinked and glanced at what was around him. he was engulfed in a sea of orange. Sora looked down, seeing blue waves crashing against eachother. Gravity took its take on Sora, and he began to fall backwards and into the ocean.
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Kairi, Selphie, Tidus and Wakka looked out to the blue sea. They stood on the wooden docks. It was about five and the sun was setting.

Wakka looked to Kairi and sighed. "Come on Kairi, i think we should probaby head home. The sun's setting ya know?"

Kairi glazed at the Sky clutched her arms together. " I know they are coming today, they'll be here at any minute! Promise"

Tidus rolled his eyes "Oh sure, its like this everyday.. Yeouch!!" Selphie whacked Tidus in the back of the head.

She placed her hand on Kairi and smiled. "its okay Kairi, we'll stay for as long as you want."

fithteen minuts passed. Tidus moaned "You guyss, i think we should go back..im getting hungry!"

The gang stood up, including Kairi. They all started to leave, when a large splash was heard. Tidus and Wakka turned and looked to the ocean. "Could it be?!"

A spikey head emerged from the ocean. his brown hair drooped to his eyes. Through the hair blue eyes looked to Selphie Kairi and Tidus.

bad? good? please help me by telling me what you think! thanks