Thank you for all those who reveiwed my first chapter. I will try to post up the next one faster then this one.
Luke: Bold
Thought: Bold Italic
Lorelai: Italic
Thought: Italic Underline
Rory: Underline
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Luke's:
door bells chimes
What are you doing here?
What does that mean?
I mean that you are never here at this time of day.
Well, for you information I am about to go to pick up Rory from school.
Lorelai drops purse, her things fall out. So she bends over to pick up her things.
Wow! That looks so HOT! I wonder why she is still single, what if she isn't, I should make a move just like Rachael said.
What can I get you?
I think I'll just take a coffee to go.
Ok. Here you go. I'll see you later.
Bye.
Bye.
I wonder if she is dating anyone. I need to make my move soon. If not she is going to be gone.
Chilton:
Mom!
Hi, hon. how was school?
Let's go to Luke's!
Ok!
Luke's
You are back again.
I thought that you would appreciate it.
I do. Hey. Lorelai can I talk to you for a second?
Sure.
Lets go over there.
walks over to storage room
So you wanted to talk.
Yeah, I did.
Sooo about what,
I wanted to ask you if you want to go out with me to dinner tonight.
Is it for pleasure or for business?
It is for both.
Ohh, really?
So is that a Yes or a No?
Yes.
Ok then I'll pick you up at 7.
Yes. I'll be there.
Please tell me what you think.