Wow, guys I am sorry about abandoning this story. As I do have a bit of free time coming my way, I think I may take it up again. It's been a while since I've written anything, but I've been bitten by a writing bug unfortunately so look for some kind of update(s) eventually! I will be working on it this coming wednesday/thursday and I am very excited.
I may re-work what I've got so far before adding any new material. And it might even go into a different section on the site - horror or something. I am going to do some massive amount of planning so it wont be for a while. I'm not sure how things are going to go, but we'll see and I hope to give you guys an awesome story that you enjoy reading. I am shooting for fantastic here!
Oh and if anyone wants to be a beta, I'd love you for it!