A/N:
twilightfan21: oh geez, really? I haven't really read much Twilight FF but I hope mine ends up differently!!
emo supremo girl: updating! Right now! I'm glad you like!!
cnohero: oops on the fang thing. I must have misread but I thought they had visible fangs when their venom was flowing, but then I realized it said "razor sharp teeth"... well, bear with me please!
Katie Cullen: I would have thought so as well, but after reading Stephanie Meyer's story from Edwards POV (well, the first chapter anyway) it seems possible, plus, I know where it;s going & you don't! Hehe, I hope you like it better as it continues.
dark fairy79: I will tell you...now!
blueblackangel: I like nifty! I'm glad you think my story is nifty... I think you are nifty!
ileamc: yayyy I'm glad you like it!!
Katchelle87: thanks, it just kind of popped into my mind... I hope you enjoy it.
lizziemcclure: yay I am so happy!!
girlwholikestwilighttomuch: thanks. (One word answers are so much more awesome, don't you think? Do the perentheses count? I hope not! Ahhhh!)
Vampire's Love: bad keyboard! Bad! Ahhhhhh!
Bri: I am so glad you hear that, I hope you like where it goes!
pheobesapphira: ok! I'll update! Really soon! Like... now!
Chapter 3:
"Please, no, Edward, please," she sobbed as she felt the searing fire burst through her neck. He couldn't be quite sure what it was - perhaps the tone of desperation in her voice - but whatever it was, it made him hesitate. He pulled away from her delicious tasting blood, & he stared at her.
She looked up at him, his black eyes with a faint hint of crimson, blood dripping from his mouth. & for the first time, he really looked back. As magnificent as her blood tasted, the faint remains still resting on his tongue, it faded in comparison to the instant remorse he felt. He looked at her writhing figure, her face twisted with pain & the terrible look of fear in her deep brown eyes. He noticed then, that she was absolutely & positively beautiful, even with her face disfigured by the searing pain within her. He shuddered at what he had just done. He scooped her up into his arms, not breathing, & ran stealthily back to his car, trying to think with his mind instead of his senses. How could I be so weak? As he ran, he thought of the poor, innocent girl in his arms, the only child of a lonely man, lured away from her first day in a new school.
He placed her gently in the backseat of his Volvo, & threw it into drive. He contemplated rolling all of the windows down, to lets the freezing cold air sift her scent out of his car, but decided against it, knowing the bitter air from the outside wouldn't help ease her pain. Instead, he let her warm, delicious aroma fill up the small car. He didn't take a single breath.
It tortured him to think of the pain that he had caused her, almost sucking her dry, & to what he had almost destroyed, (or had he already?) for his family. They were happy in Forks. They had built a life, they were civilized. How could I? He wondered again.
He glanced again at Bella's writhing form in his backseat, moaning & crying out in pain. He felt like the most despicable creature on the earth who had absolutely no right to live.
A/N: dun dun dun. Twists, turns, oh my! Ha ha. Ummm, I guess I just wanted to say that it kind of sounds like Edward's going to try to kill himself, but that isn't where this is going, I was just trying to get a feeling across, of disgust with one's self. More coming soon...:)