Chapter 2: Part 2 – "New Abilities Displayed, the Fight Continues (Naruto and Sasuke)
Not a lot happened during Naruto and Sasuke's fight while Tomoshibi and Orochimaru were fighting, that being the reason. But now that the fight was over, they were about to go again.
"Even though Orochimaru may be dead," Sasuke stated, "I'm still not returning to Konoha. I will continue to search until I find Itachi, or I will die trying. That is why I must go, to train and gain more power than Konoha had to offer me.
"Well I guess I'll just have to knock you out!" Naruto replied, determined to get his friend back. "But this time, I might go hard on you."
"We'll just have to see about that." Sasuke replied as he activated his Sharingan. Naruto charged at him, and Sasuke dodged his attack easily stabbing Naruto in the back with a kunai. "See, I told you, you are weaker than me!"
As soon as the final word left his mouth, Naruto disappeared in a puff of smoke. "Stupid Kage Bunshin no Jutsu," Sasuke thought to himself as he looked around for the real Naruto. Then, seconds later, Naruto ejected out of the ground right in front of Sasuke and gave him a killer uppercut. Sasuke went flying into the air, and landed on the ground with a loud smash, falling through trees and bushes and stuff. "I see I am going to have to get serious now," Sasuke thought to himself as he got up.
"I will keep my promise!" Naruto yelled. "You will come back, no matter what the cost."
Sasuke's cursed seal started to take over again, but this time, only his eyes changed into the cursed seal form. "I see you noticed my change, Sasuke said, forming some hand seals, making the Chidori "I now have the ability to change parts of my body into cursed seal, and I have more control over it."
"This fight is going to be a little more difficult," Naruto thought, seeing his former friend's state. "Well let's get started then!"
Naruto charged at Sasuke, creating more shadow clones. Sasuke sighed, "I am really starting to get tired of these clones," he said, as he took out the clones with his Fireball Technique. As the smoke from all the clones cleared, he watched as Naruto came rushing at him with his Rasengan ready. Another clone came from behind Sasuke and held him by his arms and legs. Naruto was there now.
"Rasengan," he yelled as he hit Sasuke with it. But before Sasuke could be flown back, he disappeared in a puff of smoke leaving only a log in his place. "Well, that's the Substitution Jutsu for you," Naruto thought to himself as four kunai were thrown at him. Not having time to look for Sasuke, he jumped back as one hit his Kage Bunshin, making it disappear in a puff of smoke, and the other three were blocked by Naruto's kunai.
"It's time to end this," Sasuke thought using his hand seals and grabbing his arm. "Chidori," he yelled as flew at Naruto with blinding speed.
Naruto tries to dodge out of the way but the Chidori still grazed across his upper abs, slicing across them. Naruto was bleeding horribly. He fainted from the unbearable pain. Then he appeared in front of those familiar bars, and coming into sight were those big, red, narrow pupil eyes.
"Be thankful to me," the Kyuubi said, looking at an unconscious Naruto, "Be thankful to everyone that has helped you the all the time I was in you."
Back on Earth, Naruto was slowly gaining consciousness, as the red chakra seeped out of his cut and healed it. Naruto then transformed into the Naruto-Kyuubi form, with the claws and the fangs and the red eyes (you get the idea). But with the training he did, he was way faster in Kyuubi form than all of the other times.
"Sasuke thought now was the time to act. He charged at Naruto, throwing shuriken at him, but he was too late. Naruto jumped out of the way and reappeared behind Sasuke, throwing some kunai at his back. Sasuke tried to dodge them but couldn't. He fell to the ground.
"You will come back with me, and that's final!" Naruto said, as Sasuke got back up. Naruto formed an Odama Rasengan, while Sasuke used the hand seals and made the cursed seal Chidori. The both charged at each other with blinding speed, and history repeated itself (The Valley of the End Fight), but this time, Naruto got the first and final hit, right in the chest knocking Sasuke out. As the light cleared, Naruto could be seen lifting Sasuke's head, pulling out the scratched forehead protector, and tying it around his head.
"I knew I would bring you back with me," Naruto said, aloud, "after all these years of searching and training for this day, I finally get to bring you back." After these few words Naruto, too, passed out from exhaustion. Shikamaru then contacted the Hokage to send jounin to carry Tomoshibi, Naruto, and the newly retrieved ninja.
"That was a nice way to end things," Sakura said.
"I guess," Shikamaru replied. " It was still would have been a lot less troublesome if Sasuke would have waited a little before actually trying to fight Orochimaru, so we wouldn't have had to be dragged in this."
"But still," Sakura said, as two ANBU members showed up. "It was still a nice way to end things."
"Whatever."
So how was my first ever fan fiction? Did you like the new character? Should I continue with this story, or leave it here?