Author's notes:
Before I start, I might have changed up the story a bit…well not entirely but yeah I made a few changes so please check…and if there are any suggestions you want me to do please tell me because it would be nice to know what my readers would like to see. The characters might be OOC so please bear with me.
Yes! Two people now reviewed…thanks by the way, it made my day and it inspired me to write some more. Anyways this chapter was once again created during my boring English class…anyways hope you like this and yes I love doing disclaimers so here's my version.
Disclaimer: I do not own Peacemaker Kurogane…because if I did I'd add myself in it and Okita-kun would not die instead he'd be living happily in my fictional world…all I own is the idea of turning the men into women…how weird is that?
Chapter III
Discovering the changes part I: Susumu, Heisuke, Shinpachi POV
Yamazaki Susumu awoke with a yawn, his head had been throbbing the entire night all caused by a drinking dare by a certain 2nd division captain. Groggily the young shinobi stood up from his futon, lazily making his way out back to where the watering well was.
While walking to the well, the sleepy ninja earned quite a few stares from the men, causing his nerves to twitch in anger.
"Oh my…"
"What the…"
Susumu ignored the comments as he continued to walk on, "What the hell are they gawking at?" Susumu thought as he pretended to not hear the comments.
Upon reaching the well the young shinobi came face to face with an awe-stricken soldier, his jaw dropped the moment he saw Susumu.
"H-h-h-h-…" The soldier stuttered, the words not coming out
Susumu now fed up, gave his trademark piercing "I'm-going-to-kill-you" look to the young soldier, only causing him to falter.
"H-h-h-ho-ho-ho-hol-hol-"
"What the hell are you…" before the young shinobi could even finish, his puzzled question was finally answered.
"Holy Shit! Ayu-nee lives!" The soldier screamed, flailing his arms like a mad man.
Susumu looked around and saw no ghostly apparition of his deceased sister, "Soldier, if you're drunk go back to sleep…"
"Get away from me zombie!" the soldier screamed as he backed away quickly.
Susumu fed up with the soldier's insane claim of seeing ghostly apparitions, walked to the water well and nearly fainted at what he saw. His reflection was not what he had expected, his trademark spiky black hair was replaced by a lock of flowing raven hair messily tied up in a low pony-tail, his lips were in a soft shade of pink, his complexion pale and flawless and his body, his body was that of a woman. Slim yet curvy.
"Aaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!!!" Susumu screamed as he grabbed a lock of hair, yanking it as hard as he could.
"Shit! This isn't one of my disguises! This is…this is…this is real…" Susumu panicked especially at the realization that he now had breasts.
"Kami-sama it's real!" Susumu screamed once again, his eyes wide and fearful.
The young soldier looked at the distraught Ayu-nee look alike with fear, slowly grabbing his bucket as a mean of defense.
"Eh…Ayu-nee…"
Susumu turned to face the soldier, "I am not Ayu-nee! So stop calling me that!" He fumed
"Um…I…I know that you're in denial that you're dead but please return to Kami-sama…or to your grave…"
Before the soldier could finish three piercing screams were heard just 2 corridors down, with his shinobi instincts Susumu dashed to the scene and to his horror he was not expecting the sight that was before him.
There before the young shinobi stood the three comedians, except just like him they had turned into women. Shinpachi whose trademark spiky orange hair was now replaced with wavy orange locks, Heisuke whose trademark was his topknot now had a head of long dark brown hair.
"Shinpachi you're a girl! An unusually cute girl!" Heisuke screamed as he pointed his finger madly
"Look whose talking lady-boy" Shinpachi retorted
Quickly, Heisuke grabbed his mirror and nearly fainted at what he saw. "I'm a woman!" he groaned but then he took another look and grinned stupidly, "A gorgeous woman!"
Susumu had felt like sticking a kunai in his heart from then on. "Whoa! Susumu is that you?" Heisuke said as he noticed his shinobi friend smacking his forehead.
"Yeah…and apparently it looks like I'm not alone in the whole woman trouble"
"Way to go Susumu…compared to me you don't look so bad as a woman…in fact you could totally pass as a woman…but I'm still number one of course" Heisuke said with a grin as he swished his long hair, hitting Shinpachi in the face.
"Do you hear yourself? You're actually okay with this? Hello! We've turned into women, doesn't that concern you?" Shinpachi said his voice fuming.
Heisuke smiled flirtingly, "Of course it concerns me" he said sweetly, too sweet for Shinpachi's taste.
"Moron!"
"You're just jealous because I got turned into a gorgeous woman, you look like one of Okita's orphan friends…"
"Shut up!"
"You're just jealous" Heisuke said in a sing-song fashion
"Am not!"
"Are too, I mean even Susumu is prettier…Shinpachi's jealous!"
"Both of you shut up!" Susumu screamed angrily, finally causing the two bickering captains to freeze.
"Nothing will be solved if we argue and bicker…first thing is first…we have to find out how we turned into women….who did this to us….how do we change back…and if there are others who turned into women as well…"
"Well…if you turned into a woman and Shinpachi and me as well…then…"
Before Heisuke could finish the shoji doors flew open and revealed a looming shadow of an overgrown person…or was it even human…
"Oh shit its Yoshida!" Shinpachi screamed loudly (AN: Just imagine that scene with Tetsu in the closet and Yoshida's creepy eye)
Heisuke then clung on to Susumu for dear life, "Don't let him touch me!" Heisuke squealed.
"There's two of them…run for your life" Shinpachi screamed as he began running madly in his room
"Idiot…their blocking the exit…save the pretty newly transformed women first!"
"Don't start with that Heisuke!" Shinpachi said, his eyes twitching
"Susumu…let's team up and give these creeps what they want…Shinpachi the sacrifice…"
"Ahou! Shut up!"
"Baka…all of you..." Susumu sighed as he pried the young captain off his arm.
"I changed my mind...since Susumu wants to be brave let him be...his out you're the new pretty...come here ugly sacrifice"
Finding no one else to hold on to Heisuke grabbed hold of Shinpachi who began shaking with rage.
"Sacrifice the ugly eh? Just watch out Heisuke...better sleep with one eye open from now on..."
Susumu sighed as he approached the two looming figures,
"How's a guy able to sleep with all this noise?" The large figure spoke as it entered the room, the three young men gasped as they saw who it had been. The large looming figures had been, a still asleep Harada Sanosuke and a changed Saitou Hajime.
First thing's first...I'm done with the whole discovering they're women scene...no just kidding...that was just the POV of Heisuke, Susumu and Shinpachi...anyways did you like it? I hope it was good enough...I really should be doing my homework but instead Im writing my fic!!! anyways today's thursday and yes when the weekend comes I shall write like their is no tomorrow...anyways here's a preview of Chapter IV
Chapter IV
Discovering the changes: Saitou, Sano and others POV
"Holy Tokugawa! Sano you're a woman too!"
"Saitou you too!"
Anyways just some sneak preview lines...lol...anyways my readers...which I love...I know they were bit wild and OOC especially Heisuke and Susumu...kinda...but yeah Heisuke I made him a narcissist...if you watch Bleach and that character named Yumichika whose such a pretty boy, yep that's who I based him off... anyways sorry if you found them OOC but hey wouldn't you go wild and crazy if you woke up one day and discovered you've turned into the opposite gender? exactly my point...anyways please review and read my next chapters...
