Yes, the characters are pretty OOC. D: Sorrehh! But yea, just give me tips on what im doin wrong so my next story can be better. :)

Ino opened the door, and in came stumbling their senseis. Kurenai, Asuma, Kakashi, Gai, Anko, Tsunade, and Jiraiya all came in.

"Give me sake!" Tsunade ordered. When nobody listened, she went to find it herself.

"Um, what are you guys doing here?" Ino asked. How did they even know about the party? Dam nosey teachers.

"We're here to party!" Asuma said, flicking his cigarette out the window. By the way he talked, you could tell he was drunk. His words were slurred. Kurenai giggled for no apparent reason.

"Uhh.. Okayyy" Ino said, still a little unsure. But hey why not? As she turned around he bumped into Gaara.

"Oh! Gaara. When did you get here?" Ino asked. Garra looked up at her and shrugged, then walked away over to the stage with Lee.

Tenten and Neji were over on the cute pink couch, which they were making fun of.

"How girly." Tenten laughed. She wasn't drunk though, just a bit tipsy. Neji seemed a little tipsy also. Neji laughed. Tenten stared at him.

"You laughed!?" Tenten said in surprise. Even though she trained with Neji, did missions with Neji, and hang out with Neji almost 24/7, she had never heard him really laugh before. Neji laughed again. Then Tenten laughed. Then they both just couldn't stop laughing. It most likely was because they had gone outside alone and smoked a bowl. Light weights.

"Your cute." Neji said smiling at Tenten. Tenten blushed and giggled. Neji leaned over and kissed Tenten on the lips. Tenten kissed him back and then it was blown into a full out makeout session.

Naruto was standing alone. Hinata had gone to the bathroom. He then saw Tenten and Neji. He giggled. Naruto snuck over to the side of the couch they were on, hiding behind it. He kept his head down and lifted his finger up to poke Neji in the back of the head, then quickly put his finger down. Neji didn't seem to do anything. Naruto did it again. Same thing. This frustrated Naruto so he poked him one more time but a little harder. Neji let go of Tenten and smacked Naruto across the room, then went back to Tenten. Hinata came out of the bathroom and looked at Naruto, who scratched the back of his head nervously.

Hinata knew it was time. She had been working with her friends on this since she knew there was going to be karaoke. It was only a couple days but she knew she was ready. She breathed in deeply and got onto stage. She walked over to Lee, and whispered the song to him. He nodded and smiled. Hinata took the mic and walked onto stage. She could see everyone looking at her. She hoped she wouldn't faint. She breathed deeply and the music started. She looked at Naruto and smiled. He was so cute. Then she started to sing.

"You are fine
You are sweet
But I'm still a bit naive with my heart
When you're close I don't breathe
I can't find the words to speak
I feel sparks

But I don't wanna be into you,

If you are not looking for true love, oh oh
No I don't wanna start seeing you
If I can't be your only one

So tell me when it's not alright
When it's not OK
Will you try to make me feel better?
Will you say alright? (say alright)
Will you say OK? (Say OK)
Will you stick with me through whatever?
Or run away
(Say that it's gonna be alright. That it's gonna be OK)
Say OK.

When you call I don't know if I should pick up the phone every time
I'm not like all my friends who keep calling up the boys, I'm so shy

But I don't wanna be into you, If you don't treat me the right way
See I can only start seeing you
If you can make my heart feel safe (feel safe)

When it's not alright
When it's not OK
Will you try to make me feel better?
Will you say alright? (say alright)
Will you say OK? (Say OK)
Will you stick with me through whatever?
Or run away
(Say that it's gonna be alright. That it's gonna be OK
Don't run away, don't run away)

Let me know if it's gonna be you
Boy, you've got some things to prove
Let me know that you'll keep me safe
I don't want you to run away so
Let me know that you'll call on time
Let me know that you'll help me shine
Will you wipe my tears away
Will you hold me closer

When it's not alright
When it's not OK
Will you try to make me feel better
Will you say alright? (say alright)
Will you say OK? (Say OK)
Will you stick with me through whatever?
Or run away
(Say that it's gonna be alright. That it's gonna be OK)
Say OK
(Don't run away, don't run away)
(Say that it's gonna be alright. That it's gonna be OK, don't run away)
Will you say OK
(Say that it's gonna be alright. That it's gonna be OK)"

As the song ended, Hinata looked at Naruto. He was smiling at her. As she walked off the stage, Naruto picked her up and kissed her.

"I'll always be there for you." He promised, looking into her eyes. She blushed and smiled back. Then they noticed everyone was looking at them. Hinata giggled and Naruto put her back on her feet. He held her hand and walked outside to the balcony. Sasuke and Sakura were there. They stopped and listened to them for a little.

"I was going to ask her out tonight." Sasuke said sadly to Sakura.

"Oh. You like really like her, huh?" Sakura asked quietly. She was hurt by this. She was in love with Sasuke. She couldn't deny it, and for him to be in love with her best friend, really hurt. But then Sasuke shrugged.

"I don't know. Maybe it's just because she's always swooning around me like the other girls." Sasuke paused, realizing something. "But neither does someone else."

Sakura smiled, thinking he was talking about her.

"Tenten." He said smiling. Sakuras mouth dropped.

"WHAT!?" She screamed. Sasuke burst out laughing.

"I was just kidding." He said quietly, then kissed her softly. Sakura was surprised. 1. that he laughed. 2. That he was kidding. But she happily kissed him back.

Naruto and Hinata smiled and went the other way, figuring they should leave those two alone. So they walked over to the front door and were about to go out there. As Naruto opened the door, Sai and Karin were standing in front of them. Naruto and Sai nodded to each other, while Karin and Hinata waved. Then they walked past each other, Sai and Karin into the party, and Naruto and Hinata out the front door, into the fresh cool air. Naruto held Hinata in his arms when he heard someone yelling.