Thanks everybody who reviewed. I took some of your advice and changed the way I wrote the chapter.
Chapter Two- Greggo
Kristy walked out of Grissom's office and looked at Sara. "Aunt Sara?" she asked.
"Yes, Kristy." Sara asked.
"Are you going to show me around the lab?" Kristy asked.
"Yeah, if you want me to." Sara said.
"Yeah. I would like that." Kristy said smiling.
"Good. We'll go see Greggo, first."
"Greggo?""Oh, he works in the lab. He's a friend of mine. He's name is Greg, but I call him Greggo."
"Oh, okay." Kristy said as Sara walked down the hall. Kristy jogged to catch up. They reached the lab and a guy with spiky blondish hair poked his head out.
"Hi, Sara. Who that? Is she your clone?" he asked in an almost childish voice.
"Hi Greg. This is my niece, Kristy. She's not my clone. Kristy, this is Greg." Sara said.
"Why did you bring your niece to work?" Greg asked confused.
"I went to check on her dad and found out that her parents were dead and she had no where to go, so I brought her here and she is going to help me find out who killed them."
"Oh, I'm sorry. If you need help, feel free to come to me." Greg said as he held out his hand to for her to shake it.
"It's okay. I will." Kristy said shaking his hand. Greg took a pen out of his pocket and wrote his phone number on her opposite hand.
"Call me if you need anything." He said as he put the pen back in his pocket.
"Kristy, we have to go. We still have a lot of lab to cover." Sara said as she started to walk down the hallway.
"Coming Aunt Sara." Kristy said. She looked back at Greg and took a pen out of her pocket and wrote a number three on his right hand. Then she wrote her cell phone number on his left hand. "You call me if you need anything." She said as she put the pen back in her pocket. Then she started to jog after Sara.
"So, what's the three for?" he asked as she walked away.
"You are the third person I've meet today." She said back, smiling. Greg smiled back at her and she jogged to catch up to Sara.
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