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Chapter 11

"Chloe!" The older brother shouted while hobbling closer to the red Toyota.

Sam left his brother's side and walked around the car with his gun out, encase the monster was there. He got to the front of Chloe's car and as he jumped around he saw a black figure. It was on top of Chloe, who was all sliced up. The monster turned it's face towards Sam with blood dripping off of it's white fangs, as it had started to eat her.

He quickly shot the monster in the head. It then collapsed backwards, over Chloe's remains, and onto the ground. Sam looked down at the remains of the woman, there wasn't much left of her after the monster had hacked her to pieces with it's fingers and started to feed on her. There was a large pool of blood around the pieces of her body, which the creature had fallen into.

"Dean. It ran away and killed her." Sam sadly shouted across the car to his older brother.

"We could of stopped it." He said with the sadness clearer in his voice.

"We didn't know Sammy. I thought she had gone. She said she was gonna call the breakdown crew. We couldn't save her." Dean yelled.

"We could of tried."

"Damn it Sammy. We couldn't save her. We can hunt this thing down and kill it, but we can't save everyone."

"But we can still try."

Dean started to hobble over to Sam to give him one, very rare, brotherly hug, only to stop when he saw Chloe, well what was left of her.

"Ugh, that's just nasty." Dean said looking at the pieces of Chloe spread out on the floor.

"We can't just leave her like this." Sam said sadly.

"You can call 911 in a moment. Well after we've sorted this thing out." Dean said, looking at the monster in the pool of blood.

"What are we gonna do?"

"Well you said earlier about lopping it's head off. That may work."

"I guess. Should I go get the shovels to use?"

"Yeah they should do. And if this thing starts moving, I guess I'll have to keep on shooting it."

"Right. I'll be back soon." Sam said as he ran away to the Impala.

"Oo. If I were you, I wouldn't of let poor Sammy go alone." Came the eerie voice from the monster, not long after Sam had gone.

"What did you just say?" Dean said while threatening it with his gun, which was aimed at the creature's head.

"Letting Sammy go alone. You never know what can be lurking in the shadows." The creature said as it then started to do an evil laugh, which was stopped as a bullet pierced through it's throat.

"OH CRAP! HURRY UP SAMMY!"

At the same time as the monster started talking Sam had only just got to the Impala and opened the boot. He reached in when he heard some footsteps coming closer behind him. He grabbed a knife from the boot and quickly swung around and slashed the figure behind him. It was the black creature.

'Surely the creature is with Dean now. Unless it got away. Dean must be in trouble if it got away.' Sam thought as he had stabbed the knife into the creature's chest to then yank it out.

It didn't affect the creature so it lashed out at him. It just scratched Sam's cheek, which made it bleed and drip down his face. It lashed out again only this time he ducked, so the creature jabbed it's fingers into the Impala and got them stuck.

'Dean's gonna kill me.' He thought as he looked up at the creature.

The monster kept trying to pull it's fingers out of Dean's car but with no luck. Sam took the opportunity to grab a shovel and swing it at the creature's head. As the monster flew to the ground it made four huge slashes into the Impala.

Sam whacked the creature again in the head and was going to stab the shovel in the creature's neck, but couldn't. It was still a living thing and he couldn't bare killing another creature, especially after Madison.

Meanwhile, Dean had grabbed the monster by one of it's legs and had started to drag it behind him, while he hobbled down the Route to his car.

He had gotten close enough to see his brother leaning against a shovel, standing over a figure which was lying on the floor.

"Hey Sam! A little help here."

Sam quickly looked up at the sound of his brother's voice. He saw his brother coming through the mist dragging something. As his bother came closer he noticed it was the monster.

'But how? Oh great. There's more than one.' He thought as he looked at the creature at his feet, then to the one being dragged by his brother.

"Fine. Don't help me." The older brother said as he slowly hobbled closer.

"Oh. So you've made a new friend." He said as he dragged the creature next to the one at Sam's feet.

"I was gonna say the same to you." Sam quickly answered back.

"Great. So there's more than one. Hopefully not more than two."

"Well, they can talk, so we could ask them."

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