Chapter I: The Battle Of Ring Station.

Hello again fellow readers! I am SO, SO, SO SORRY that I haven't uploaded anything in so long! One reason is because I was working on my Bakugan and FNAF stories, I was busy with going to some summer camps, one was at a rustic campground in southern Delaware that doesn't have adequate electricity and we had to hand over our electronics. Plus I was at a motorcycle convention in Reno, Nevada (It took several days of rushing to get out there and back). The final nail in the coffin was a computer reset that was done by a member of my family (I know who it was) that destroyed Every. Single. File. On our computer so I'm having to start over every chapter that I was working on. But nevertheless I decided to rewrite my Star Wars: The Clone Wars story because I have come up with some things that I could use in the story plus I realized that there are some things that I could fix. So here we go, please enjoy this rewritten version!

Disclaimer: I do not own star wars. George Lucas did, and now Disney does; I will also use music tracks in this story if I feel that they fit with whatever section that I include them in, so I will give credit to those who created the music, who posted the video, as well as any other respective owners that I forgot about: be it for Star Wars, the music, or wherever else credit is due. Anakin: "We're missing something." Obi Wan: "Oh not to worry, we are still riding half a disclaimer!"

Announcer's voice: Ring Station. Republic and Separatist forces are locked in heated battle at this massive battle-station that surrounds the entire planet of Ringo Vinda with neither side advancing. Recently promoted Jedi Master Anakin Skywalker and Jedi Master Twixst Slough leading the 501st aided by the twin sister Jedi masters Tiplee and Tiplar commanding the 458th bravely lead their men in an effort to finally break the stalemate.

Twixst POV:

"You know I'm winning, don't you?" Emerald stated. "I've got 100."

"Come on! You know that I took down 10 more supers than you!" I told her. "And don't forget those 4 Droidekas that I took down! That makes 114!"

"Well as a Droideka myself, and with how long I've known you-10 years since you built me-I think I would know how many droids you and me can take down." Emerald replied.

"Oh really? And how many is that?" I asked.

"You: 93." She said, then she started laughing. "Me: more than you!

"Well that's cause she can practically bowl over them." Anakin said, deflecting lasers from droids as he casually talked to us. "Now let's get moving. 98."

"What was that?" I asked.

"Alright men! Push forward, to the command post!" Anakin commanded to our men.

"You heard the guy! Send those Seppies to the scrapyard!" I shouted.

"Uhh Twixst." Emerald spoke up after getting a turkey on 3 squads of regs.

"What is it Emerald?" I asked slashing down some more regs.

"Fives just contacted me saying that several commando droids are heading towards Tiplee and Tiplar. You know how dangerous those things are." She reported.

"Yeah you should too. You command the ones in our squads." I told her as we raced to intercept those commandos.

"Thing is... why are they on the battlefield?" Emerald asked.

"What do you mean?" I asked her confused as to what she meant.

"Well you know how they have tougher armor, crazy agility, and way higher intelligence?" Emerald listed.

"Yes, and?" I said.

"Well that would make them really expensive to produce, so that's why they're reserved for Special Ops missions." She continued.

"What are you getting at?" I asked.

"Why the heck are we seeing them in the field?!" She wondered.

"Probably because we're near the command post, and they're job is to seal the doors before we can get to them." I answered.

"Then we had better hurry." She concluded.

"Right, let's move." I said.

2 minutes later we caught up to the commando droids. I hid behind a corner while Emerald did her thing.

"Hurry, we've got to intercept General Skywalker's forces before they get to the command post." The captain of the commando droids ordered the others in their usual deep voice.

"Roger roger." The others acknowledged.

"Watch out you're about to get shot." Emerald said to the commandos.

"Thanks for letting us know about those clones Droideka." The captain of the commandos thanked. "We'll go deal with the twin generals now if you're ok with that."

"Oh." Emerald said arming her blasters. "I wasn't talking about them and by the way we do mind."

"What do you mean... we?" A commando droid asked.

"Exactly what you think it does clanker." I said firing the blasters on the lightsabers that I custom made with DC-17 hand blasters attached together.

"Get to the generals!" The captain ordered while pulling out its vibroblade.

"Emerald stop them!" I told her. "I'll deal with these clankers!"

The captain tried to slash at me in an overhead arc but I sidestepped it and slashed at it with my green lightsaber. Unfortunately the captain leaned back and dodged my slash but I picked him up with the force and shot him in the head, the only 1 hit kill spot on the commandos.

"Emerald, come on!" I shouted to Emerald. "We've got to catch up to Anakin!"

"Coming!" She said catching up.

"So Anakin." I said catching up. "How many clankers do you think are going to be in there?"

"No more than we can handle." He answered.

"We'll let's get in there then!" I suggested.

"Right!" Anakin responded.

"Blast them!" A battle droid shouted as the doors were opening. Once the doors opened we were met with some blaster fire, but it wasn't much and we didn't lose any men against the 8 battle droids in the room.

"Don't get too comfy men, we haven't won this battle yet." Anakin reminded.

"Master Skywalker, we must get to the command center, Admiral Trench has called for reinforcements... we have to take his command center before they arrive." Tiplee noted.

"Alright here's the plan." Anakin said kneeling down in front of a hologram map. "Master Tiplar will head down this pathway right here, Master Tiplee will head down this corridor on the right, Rex and I will head down the center corridor. If we all time our charges right then we should arrive at the command center at the same time and the droids won't know what hit them."

"General Skywalker?" Doom asked.

"Yes Doom?" Anakin answered.

"My men are severely depleted." Doom noted. "If we're going to be making a run for the command center then I'll need reinforcements or my men won't be able to hold up."

"Alright... Fives, I need you and Tup to take 10 of your best men to support Master Tiplar and Commander Doom." Anakin said.

"You can count on us sir!" Fives said.

"We'll get right on it!" Tup followed.

"What about me and Emerald here?" I asked. "3 corridors for 3 Jedi and their units."

"I'm going to need you to take your men and commandos and exit through this airlock and head over to here." Anakin said tracing the path with his finger. "Unfortunately since Emerald can't use her magnetic footholds while she's rolling, she won't be able to spacewalk with you."

"Darn." Emerald said crossing her arms. "Oh well, I'll go with Tiplee then."

"Twixst," Anakin said. "You should re-enter through this airlock here. All right, we should hurry, those reinforcements won't be that close to our cruisers, only in their range for about 5 minutes, so let's move!"

"Yes sir!"

"Let's take down some clankers!"

"I'll buy us a round of drinks when we get home!"

Our men shouted proudly.

I noticed that Tup was holding his head and I got worried for him.

"Is he worrying about the men we lost? We did loose a lot of men already." I thought to myself. "I hope that he hasn't forgotten that me and several other clone troopers as well as clones take up the duty of removing the brave men's bodies and handling the memorials. Don't worry Tup, I'll take care of it."

"Anything I should watch out for while we're spacewalking?" I asked Anakin as we were heading towards the corridors on the map.

"Um, let's see." Anakin said while splitting a reg in half. "While there may be some regs and rocket battle droids out there, Admiral Yularen has contacted us recently saying that Super Astronauts have been attacking the cruisers by trying to get close to the guns and planting bombs. But you really have to watch out for the Vulture droids."

"Thanks!" I shouted switching my left lightsaber into a reverse grip so that I could stab a super battle droid to the side. "See you at the command center!"

"See ya in 10-15 minutes!" He shouted back.

"Stay safe Emerald!" I shouted.

"You really think that I'll get into trouble?" Emerald responded sarcastically.

"Nope you shoot it." I answered.

"Yeah I do." She said before rolling off while firing her blasters.

I smirked before catching up to my men.

"This the place?" Iron, a commando droid of mine asked.

"Yes it is." I answered. "Alright men, gear up!"

"We already are." My men said.

I looked back and saw that they already had their breathing-masks on (except for my droids).

"Well done men!" I commended. "Now lets get out there!"

"Yes sir!" They shouted.

Once the doors opened we activated our magnetic boots and continued to move along the station towards the command center.

"You think any of those star-fighters are going to shoot at us?" A battle droid fixing an antenna asked another droid.

"You're worrying too much." The other droid said.

"No he's not!" A rocket droid higher up said. "RUN FOR IT!"

"Boss!" A battle droid quickly activated it's comm. "We need rein-."

I shot the droid that was trying to call for back-up while Iron handled the two on the bottom and Kix took down the rocket battle droid.

"You think anyone heard that?" Kix asked me worriedly.

2 vulture droids that were passing us quickly turned around.

"I'd say those clankers mean 'yes they did.'" I said, jumping over to where rocky was unfortunately once standing to deal with super astronauts were taking his place.

After I'd dealt with those clankers I heard Kix shouting to me.

"How do we deal with these vultures?" He shouted to me firing at the vulture droids.

"Just keep them busy!" I shouted back, pushing myself over using the force.

"Well we seem to have their attention!" Kix shouted continuing his attack.

I jumped up onto one of the vulture droid's heads and cut it off.

When I landed I felt lasers coming my way with the force and ducked to avoid them. I quickly turned around and using the force to lift the other droid; turned it around so that it's engines were exposed and my men promptly shot them resulting in a beautiful explosion if I do say so myself.

"Alright we're almost there!" I said.

"How do we get this open?" Kix asked.

"Don't worry I got this." Emerald said through my comm.

The next thing I knew the door to the airlock opened up. I jumped in with my men following me.

After the door to the outside closed and the door to the inside opened up my men began taking off their breathing-masks while Kix walked up to Emerald.

"Only astromechs can open those kind of doors." Kix stated, confused. "How did you do it?"

Emerald re-arranged her fingers into the shape of an astromech keyhole then had the tips slide back. "Cool huh? A gift from Twixst 6 years ago."

"You really know your droids huh?" Kix said turning to me.

"Yup." I said before turning to the rest of my men. "Now let's move! Anakin's waiting for us!"

"Yes sir!" They responded.

It wasn't long before we got to the command center. As we were met with heavy laser fire I began deflecting lasers while making my way over to Anakin.

I saw 2 things while I was reinforcing him.

1: A explosion outside the window connecting the wall to the roof. Since a vulture droid and an ARC-170 were so close together I had no idea which fighter fell.

2: I saw Tup shoot Master Tiplar in the back of the head. Point-blank.

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So what do you think? Did you like the new, re-written version? I think that it's better because it's longer than the original and it's less rushed. But even more so that I now have an amazing editor: Mozart's Fantasy! She has done such a great job with my other stories, except my Bakugan story (because I haven't asked her to look at that story because... well you know)! But what do you guys think about it. Leave anything in the reviews if you think I missed something, or if you would like to see a new droid introduced, or if you just want to say hi! I can't wait to write the next chapter! I'll also do my best to be more active. See ya next chapter or story!

Just a reminder that I don't own anything Star Wars or music related except for the plot and any Ocs that I use.

Bio (This is something I'm going to be including in the description):

Name: Twixst Slough.

Light-saber colors: Green & Blue.

Age: 20

Wields two light-sabers

Hair color: Brown.

Eye color: Green.

Height: 6'02"

Weight: 160lbs