Right! I know I said by the 27th of November, however I didn't know I was going to my granny's and that meant no internet for 24 hours :( I no it sucks! I then got sick and haven't even done my science h/w on computer yet so feel priveledged since i'm risking half an hour to an hours detention here!
ZarosianElf, thank you for your review and yes I also think Ted is cute,
LittleMissJasperWhitlock, no problem, I do want reviews tho
Well anyway this is chapter 3 and this is when their lives start to get happier :)
Chapter 3
A policeman and a policewoman walked together up to the house of Daniel James, a career of many children including the two children that they needed to talk to, immediately. They opened up the gat and walked up to the front door, their hot breath colliding with the cold air particles.
Daniel opened up the front door of his house and smiled at the two officers. "Evening officers, what can I do for you?" Dan asked as he opened the door wider and leaning on the wooden front door. "Good Evening Mr. James, can we come in please?" The male officer's voice was a monotone, a funeral voice, as if someone had died recently. "Of course, right this way." Dan pointed to the living room door just down the hall from where he was as he let the two officers in.
"Mr. James, you are the temporary career of Collin and Edward Reeves, correct, while their father was in hospital?" The female officer asked moving straight around the bush and asking an immediate question. "Yes, I am currently looking after Collin and Ted," Dan answered as he sat on his arm chair opposite the two officers. "Well, due to recent events, we must take the kids of your hands." The male said answering the questioning tone in Dan's voice. "What? Why?" Dan demanded as he looked between the officers in question.
Dan wasn't going to give up these kids unless it was completely necessary, no way would he allow them to live with the miserable excuse for a human being as the children's father or anyone else for that mattered, they belonged here in their natural environment. "Mr James, Mr Reeves died earlier this afternoon due to alcohol, we would like to move the kids to an orphanage as fast as possible." The female officer answered, her words making Dan's fist curl in utmost anger. "But they're fine here, I can adopt them, I'll do it right now!" Dan replied raising his voice in defiance
The policeman and woman let out long sighs, this was going to be more difficult than they thought and they wanted out without difficulty or too much information given away. Recruitment missions weren't always this difficult, but apparently this will be one of them. They had hoped for almost instance removal, skipping the whole orphanage scheme and take the two brothers over to the CHERUB campus to see if they could pass a few tests.
A few days ago while James Adams was on a recruitment mission he had found a special interest within the Collin boy when he had token on those three beefy sixteen year olds on his own, managing to break one's nose and knock all three unconscious within two to three minutes. James had then followed Collin home and watched as he became hidden within his own clothing and his weaving through crowds as if too loose any followers.
James had continued to watch him as he followed him as he went to pick up his baby brother, Edward Reeves from school and could tell the boy was shaken up when Collin had put his hand on the boy's shoulder and James became worried, however was relieved when it was obvious that the boys were brothers.
After finding out where the brothers next went James had called his mission controller Freddy Johnson and had arranged a meeting with him in a cafe nearby. He had told Freddy all about what he had witnessed and all about Collin Reeves. He had told him all about the fight between the bullies and Collin, he told him about how he got home, how he got inside and what he had done after.
Freddy wanted to be able to somehow press charges on Gary Reeves so to get the boys out of the man's care, however an opportunity had shown its self when Gary Reeves had died the previous night leaving the boys orphaned and in the temporary care of Daniel James. It seemed so easy now to get the boys and make it seem like they just went to an orphanage far away, however that wasn't the case as Dan proved to think otherwise and want the kids to stay with him.
After two hours of debating with Dan the boys were in the care of CHERUB.
I'm sorry it's short again.
Anyway I've been thinking, I know were nowhere near the end but I was thinking about following Collin for the rest of this story up until he gets his grey shirt then end the story, however I could focus on Ted, but it'd be boring or I could focus on both. Bearing in mind there will hopefully be a sequal to this story but I'm not sure if it will be Collin's first mission or second mission, however I wont have a lot too right about if it is in this story. I also think that instead of the sequal going up first we could switch to Ted and see what life as a red shirt is, but I'm not sure so I'm gonna start up a poll
1st poll
1) Follow Collin
2) Follow Ted
3) Follow both
2nd poll
1) 1st mission in second book
2) 1st mission in first book
3rd poll
1) Sequal with Collin
2) life as a red shirt with Ted
This will finish either when I choose or when I finish this story so you got a while however the first poll will finish in 1 week after I put up either one or two chapters, I'll decide
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PLEASE, I 3 reviews and remember to take part in the poll it's in your hands now lol :P
I will TRY to update between the 2nd DECEMBER and the 4th DECEMBER!
YOJ