YAY~! 5 reviews! *dies of happiness* :3 I have chapter 3 written up, I shall post when I get more reviews, and it wasn't gonna be a two shot,
Barley opened his eyes and blinked. "What?" he meowed dazed and confused. "Foxdung!" I yowled and ran off. I can't believe our friendship is ruined. Where do I go now? The forest was destroyed by twoleg monsters, and the clans left hundreds of moons ago, there's no way I can go back. I kept running, not caring were I was going, I just kept moving forward. My whole life ruined by just 4 words. Barley I love you. I could hear him running after me, probably to tell me to never come back. That only made me run faster. I could hear him panting behind me, he was so old. I slowed down and he caught up to me.
"Barley, I'm so sorry, I'll leave now," I said looking down at my paws, not wanting to face him eye to eye. "Ravenpaw I-" he never finished his sentence. A fox came out of nowhere and attacked Barley.
Well that was chapter 2 :p well theres more im just to lazy to type up ~w~ now that you red, review?