So I plan on having this story be around for about 30-40 chapters. And I hope I do get to finish it, cause then this would be the first story I ever finished.

Ch.5

Previously on All Who Come to this Magical Place, Welcome:

"So we get to meet Mickey, this is so exciting, I cant believe I get to meet Mickey Mouse." Brooke was jumping up and down like a little 5 year old, the whole group started laughing hystarically.

"Brooke you do know that it is just a guy in a big mouse suit who gets payed to do this right." Nathan said as they were next in line to meet Mickey.

"Ya I know Mr. Hot Shot, thanks for ruining my fun." Brooke said with a pout and crossed her arms.

"Your welcome." Said Nathan.

"Next in line, please come this way." Said the worker there.

Meeting Mr. Mouse himself and "The Disneyland Limited"

"Look you guy's it's Mickey!" Brooke pointed over to the mouse who was standing in the corner waving towards them.

"Come on lets get our picture take." All the girls got up next to Mickey and the boys just stood there.

"Oh come on you losers, he not going to bite or anything, its just one picture." Peyton said as she tried to convince the boys

"You guys just better not show anyone these pictures." Said Lucas as all six of them went up and took there picture. They were done with Toontown since half of the things they were to big for, so they started walking towards the Toontown train station.

"Ok, so once we get on the train we should decided which stop to get off at, we can get off at Tomorrowland, Main Street, or New Orleans Square." Said Haley as they started to here a voice come threw the speakers.

"Your attention please, the Disneyland Limited now leaving for a grand circle tour of the Magic Kingdom, All Aboard." The man over the speaker said

"That's so cool, come on you guys lets get in the front." Said Jake as they all got into the front of the train. Within a few minutes the train started to pull out and they were on there way.

"So I think that we should split up for alittle bit, like you guys can go to where ever you wanna go, just be prepaired to go on the rides again, and we can go our own way." Said Haley as she looked over at the guys.

"Hales, do you not love us enough to hang out with us?" Nathan joked.

"No, you guys are just party poopers and Haley just thinks that we can spend a few hours away from you fun suckers." Stated Brooke as they girls looked at the map.

"Well we are going to get off at New Orleans Square since there is a lot of shopping there." Peyton said as the girls all looked at them.

"Ok then we will get off at Tomorrowland, which is right here." Said Lucas as the train stopped at Tomorrowland. The boys got off.

"We will meet you infront of the castle in 3 hours. Ok?" Nathan said as he looked over at Haley and she nodded her head. The groups went off.

"Finally, we can go have some fun without the boys ruining everything." Peyton said as they looked at all the senery. Soon they arrived at their destination. They got off and walked around.

"Hey look the Haunted Mansion, lets go." Haley suggested as they started to walk threw the yard of gravestones.

"Look at this place, it seriously looks like a real house, its amazing." Said Peyton as she was looking at all the texture of the building. They went into the house and came into the room filled with a large amount of people standing shoulder to shoulder. All of a sudden a voice started. "Welcome Foolish Mortals." The voice continued to talk, the wall started to streach and then suddenly the lights turned off and when they looked up at the ceiling they saw a dead body hanging over there heads, everyone screamed.

"Oh my god, I did not expect that." Said Brooke as they walked threw the open door to the ride. The got in the black cars and started there tour threw the Haunted Mansion.

In Tomorrowland

"S what ride should we go on?" asked Jake. As they all looked around at the different rides.

"Well lets go on the Star Tours ride and see what that is about." Suggested Nathan. They boys got in line and waited there turn to ride "The Endor Express."

Spoilers for the next Chapter:

-The girls run into some familiar faces after there trip from hell and back.

-Who do the girls run into…

VOTE AND TELL ME:

Should they see….

-Mouth and Shelly.

-Skills and Bevin

-Anna and Felix

-Rachel, Mouth, Skills and Bevin.

-Chris Keller