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This is nakima-chan and chapter 4 is finally up! Sorry for all of the grammar mistakes, I usually write these late at night. I'm looking for a good editor, so sit tight the errors will be gone soon! Here is the fourth chapter! Read and Review, even if you are anonymous!
"KAZUNE-KUN! WHAT HAPPENED?" Karin shouted! She was in total shock. Not only was Kazune stuck to Micchi, but he was sprawled over Karin (a/n to those of you who don't get it, Micchi was on the right bed, Karin was on the left. The attached hands were in the middle. Kazune was on Karin's side, so when the ring reacted he got pulled toward the middle. This explains the sprawling.) Just as she began to grasp the entire situation fully both of the boys fainted (a/n why is Karin surrounded by girly men, hmm?) "Aaaah! Don't pass out now, how am I supposed to get out of here?"
Then Jin came out of the window Kon Kon Kokon style. "What's wrong, I heard Karin yelling and ... Omigosh! Karin, what happened?!" Instantaneously Jin passed out. 'Why am I surrounded by girly men?' Karin wondered to herself.
Then Himeka came through the ceiling landing daintily on the floor, "Aaah, it's okay, Q-chan will take care of it," Himeka said to no one then she turned to Karin and analyzed the situation. "Karin-chan, I can't believe how bad you are. I mean it is bad enough getting attached to two boys hands twice, but to sleep in the same room with three boys, that is just naughty!" Himeka teased as she carried Jin to the living room. She came back soon with a huge jar of butterflies.
"This should do the trick," she said as she opened the jar in front of Kazune.
"Graaaah! Bugs!" he yelled as he ran out the door pulling Micchi along with him, no sooner did he exit the room did he run into the wall, did he pass out, again.
"Well, at least he is off of you now!" Himeka said laughing, "Hey, why don't we go out to Starbucks?"
"Okay that would be fine, I mean the boys aren't do to wake up for two hours!" Karin said.
"Change and meet me downstairs as soon as possible!" Himeka ordered walking out the door, still laughing at Kazune.
'Hmmm, what should I wear? I guess that I should wear something cute ... duh Karin' she smacked herself in the head for being so stupid. Just then she found the outfit that she would wear. It was the outfit that she wore with Kazune on there 'date.' 'I know it's a bit dressy for Starbucks, but I want to look extra cute for Kazune today!' And with that she ran down the stairs only to find that Himeka wasn't there.
"Himeka-chan, I'm ready to go to Starbucks! Where are you?" Karin yelled.
"Yeah, okay..." Himeka said. She was in the kitchen on her phone.
'Oh, Himeka-chan is on the phone, I better leave her...'
"Remember not to tell Karin-chan. CLICK" Himeka hung up her iPhone (a/n Nya! Himeka is so lucky). She walked out of the kitchen and ran in to Karin, "Oh, Karin, ready for Starbucks?"
"Yeah, umm, Himeka, what were you doing just now?" Karin asked quizzically.
"Just talking to Miyon-chan, why?"
"Oh, it's nothing. Just wanted to know what you were doing, that's all."
"Let's get going, before the guys wake up, 'okay?"
"Okay," Karin said, 'It was probably something personal, I mean they have known each other a lot longer, there must be lots of things that Miyon-chan knows that I don't, it'll be okay. Karin thought to herself glumly as they went off to Starbucks.
On the way to Starbucks Karin and Himeka talked about the current situation. Little did they know that the infamous Kirio Karasuma, also known as Mr. Glasses Man, was stalking them?
'Finally,' Kirio thought, 'Kujyou's Himeka and the novice goddess are alone! I have been waiting forever for Kujyou to leave them alone! And they are usually with Nishikiori or Kuga, so I haven't been able to have an opportunity. Ah, they are walking into Starbucks are they, I know what to do.' He pulled out his Starbucks Barista for Dummies book, and his Super-Secret-Barista costume out of thin air. 'Know that I'm prepared I will go in and make them a nice cup of coffee!' And with that he walked in the back door. There were five women in working just then.
"I'm with the Barista's Union and they have started a new program, you will now get a 30 minute relief."
"Great, time for a coffee break," they all said.
"Great, time for a coffee break," they all said.
"Wait," the woman in the black apron said, "Are you sure you can handle it on your own?"
"Of course I can," Kirio lied, "I've been making coffee all of my life! Besides, it isn't very busy, now you guys enjoy your break." he said rushing them all out the door.
'Fantastic they are all gone! Now all I have to do is make coffee.' He turned only to find Himeka, smiling and waiting for him to take her order.
"H-how can I help you?" Kirio asked. 'Thank goodness that the novice goddess isn't ordering, she would see through my disguise in a heartbeat.' Kirio thought, remembering the last time when he was trying to spy on Kujyou's friend, and the novice goddess had seen through all of his costumes.
"Hmm ... oh, Karin-chan said that she would like to have a venti green tea frap and a maple out nut scone, but I'm not sure what I would like to get, any suggestions?"
"Why don't you a strawberry crème frap, with an old fashion glaze doughnut Himeka-san?" a boy said behind her. He had purple eyes and glasses.
"Oh, Ren-chan, is that you?! How are you?" Himeka asked (a/n okay, here's the deal. Ren is just a character there is no Kokon or Umi Bozu, he is just a character!)
"I'm fine, and you?"
"Great, why don't you join me with my friend?" Himeka offered.
"I think I'd like that, but it's my treat," he turned to Kirio, "Ah, and I would like to get a Venti decaf with room."
"Alright, and since your the only ones, it's on the house," Kirio said. He was trying in vain to work the cash register, but all he did was make the cash drawer open and close! Fortunately for him Ren and Himeka didn't notice him at all.
At the table Karin was surprised to see Himeka with a boy 'I have a bad feeling about this, he looks a bit like Mr. Glasses Man. I better keep my eyes peeled.' Karin thought, but smiled anyways.
"Oh, Himeka-chan, who is that with you?" Karin asked.
"Ah, Karin-chan, this is my old friend Hinonishi Ren. He went to our school in 6th grade, but he moved to mountains. He transferred back to our school for 8th grade! Isn't that exciting?" Himeka said happily, "Oh, Ren-chan, this is my friend Hanazono Karin."
"It's nice to meet you Hanazono-san," Ren said. He held out his hand for Karin to shake. Karin took the hand and shook it with a firm grip.
"Yeah, it's nice to meet you too Hinonishi-san. You can call me Karin," Karin replied blushing. 'It's nice to finally meet you ... where have I heard that before?'
"Fine and you can call me Ren," He answered, giving her the coolest look he could muster.
'Wow, this guy is so cool. Maybe he isn't like Karasuma after all.' Karin thought, 'Why am I blushing so often now-a-days?'
They all talked and talked for about half an hour when Ren said, "I wonder where our drinks are?"
While the three were talking Kirio was attempting to make the cursed frap.
'Curses,' he thought, 'What to do? I have no idea how to make any of this!' After a couple more minutes of struggling he got an idea. 'I know what I'll do. I'll go to another Starbucks and order there, so that I don't have to make anything! Brilliant.'
He got onto his bike and road to the next intersection, where he found another Starbucks. 'Thank you for making so many stores Mr. Starbucks Man!' Kirio though, then he shuddered, 'I'm starting to sound like that novice goddess! No amount of therapy will ever be able to fix that!' Kirio walked in and ordered the drinks.
"Okay sir, that all comes up to 1,596 yen," the barista said. She was eyeing Kirio suspiciously since he was still wearing his apron.
"WHAT?"
"1,596 yen sir, what is the problem?"
"That is outrageous? What has this world come to? 500 yen to get my coffee fix? OUTRAGEOUS!" Kirio ranted, as he fished through his wallet. 'Well, at least my father left me set for life.' Kirio said to himself trying to calm himself down. When he got the drinks he rode back to the Starbucks where Ren was saying, "I wonder where our drinks are?"
Karin turned her head and looked at Ren, "We have been waiting awhile.
"I'll go and check on them," Ren offered. He pushed in his chair and walked inside, (a/n they were sitting outside) then he waited at the counter.
Meanwhile Kirio was panting as he stumbled through the door. 'Never will I, Kirio Karasuma, become a barista!'
He took out a vile labeled X of his pocket, 'No all I have to do is pour the sleeping potion into the coffee and the plan will be complete!'
"Excuse me is anyone here?" Kirio hastily poured his concoction into the drink. He didn't know that he had put the mixture into the pink frap not the green one!
"Here pant you go pant..." Kirio managed as he handed the boy the drinks.
"Thank ... You," the boy said as he took the drinks. At that moment they both looked up and saw each other.
'He looks like me!' they both thought.
Not only did neither of them say anything, but they also just thought, 'Must be a trick of the light!'
And so Ren brought the girls there drinks like the true prince he was. Meanwhile, his look alike was passing out on the floor like the true wussy girly Mr. Glasses Man he really was, 'Boy am I tired!' he thought as his world slowly went black.
"Where do you live now Ren-kun?" Himeka asked as he handed her his drink.
"Um, well, I'm looking for a-,"
"WHAT?" both girls yelled cutting him off.
"I have an idea, you can stay with us!" Karin suggested.
"Hmm ... are you sure?" Ren asked, "I mean I don't want to be a bother."
"Oh, Ren-kun, you're never a bother, you are one of the best friends that Kazune-kun and I have had. The least we could do is help you in your time of need," Himeka assured him.
"Well, if you insist."
"Of course we do," the two girls replied in unison. Then they both took a sip of there fraps at the same time like they were twins or something.
"Ha Ha Ha!" Ren laughed at the two girls act, "Arigato!"
"You're wel ... commmme," Himeka passed out.
"HIMEKA-CHAN!!!" Ren yelled.
"Let's take her home!" Karin ordered, "Kazune will know what to do."
At home both of them watched Himeka; her fragile face was peaceful and unmoving.
'What happened to you Himeka-chan?'
"This is entirely my fault! I could have stopped this from happening! I know I could have!" Ren cried. Karin just turned her head toward the distraught boy.
"Ren-kun, there is nothing that you could have done. These things happen, all we can do is try to fix them," Karin told him trying to calm him down.
"I love her Karin," Ren replied quietly. Karin looked into his eyes, he was telling the truth, and she knew he was.
"I love how pure and happy she is, how she always cheers me up and helps me get my mind off of things that trouble me (a/n this guy is obsessed with monsters)."
"I know," Karin replied.
"Thanks Karin, you're the only person that knows. I'm so glad you understand," Ren hugged Karin really tight as he thanked her.
Karin was shocked at first. It wasn't an awkward hug like Micchi's. It wasn't a perverted hug like Jin's. It wasn't a romantic hug like Kazune's. It was more of a fatherly hug. Karin loved the feeling. 'I think I just want to stay like this for awhile.' Karin thought to herself.
Unfortunately for Karin, she rarely gets what she wants.
"What are you doing to my goddess?!" Jin asked. Karin turned only to see Jin livid at what he had seen.
"Jin, it's not what you think-," Karin began.
"Of course it isn't my goddess," Jin said as he snaked his arms around her, making her a very pretty shade of pink, "I just don't like seeing you with guys I don't know."
Just then Himeka moaned, "Ah, I'm going to get her another comforter, could the two of you watch her while I'm gone."
"Well-," Ren began, unsure if he wanted to be alone in the same room as the guy who was sending him those we-need-to-have-a-serious-talk looks.
"Of course we would," Jin said, cutting Ren off. He rested his arm on Ren's shoulder, "You go off and get another comforter, and Himeka-san is safe with us."
"Okay, Arigato!" Karin said happily leaving the two of them. 'Well, this is good at least this will give them some time to talk.' Karin thought as she ran down the stairs in search of a comforter.
'Great, this will give him time to talk,' Ren thought to himself as he sweat dropped.
"Okay pretty boy, what your name?" Jin demanded in his most fierce tone.
"I'm Hinonishi Ren, I just moved back here form the mountains, and was invited to live here by Himeka-chan and Karin-chan earlier this morning.
"Hmmmm ... Well, I'll let you slide since you seem to be on Karin's good side, but heed my warning, do NOT touch Karin, she is my ... inspiration. You've been in the mountains for awhile, so you probably have never heard of me. I'm Kuga Jin, the most popular teen idol of the day; I guess you can say that Karin, as my inspiration, gives me the wisdom of Athena. This is why I refer to her as my goddess. So she is off limits." Jin said, with emphasis on off. He wouldn't have made up the whole inspiration thing, but he realized the Ren had no idea about the transformation rings.
"Look man, I like Himeka, not Karin. Karin is like a sister to me and -,"
"Look," Jin said, cutting Jin off for the second time that day, "I don't care, just stay away from Karin!"
"Okay, consider her taboo!" Ren said his hands were in a surrendering gesture. Himeka moaned again. 'Himeka, please stop moaning, don't you know that every time you do, I'm tortured?' Ren thought to himself as he turned toward the pale girl. Then her eyes fluttered opened.
"Jin-kun? Ren-kun? How did I get here?" Himeka asked softly.
"You fell asleep at Starbucks and Karin and I carried you here, did you know how strong she was? She is totally strong, but not at all muscular. It's like she's been pulling concrete wheels with metal geta of something. Does she do weight trai-,"
"Ren-kun," Himeka said cutting Jin off (Jin: Why do people keep cutting me off? Nakima: 'Cause I feel like it, that's why.)
"Yes."
"I just noticed something about you."
"What?"
"Come down here so I can tell you, I don't think that you would want Jin-kun to know."
He bent down next to her so that there faces were only a few inches apart.
"More."
He bent even more so they were only centimeters apart.
"More."
He bent down more. His now read cheek was touching her soft pale one, so that his ear was right next to her lips.
"Jin-kun..."
"Yes Himeka-chan."
"Examine Your Zipper."
"Ah?" He looked and saw that she was right. He quickly did as he was told. "Arigato, Himeka-chan," Ren said politely, but was blushing madly.
"Betsuni," Himeka replied naively. Jin tried desperately not to laugh.
"Ah! Himeka-chan you finally woke up!" a huge comforter said.
"Gah! The comforter is speaking!" all three of them screamed.
'Could it be a comforter yokai?' Ren thought (shi-chan: a yokai is a japaneeese word for mooonnnsters!)
"You guys are so silly," the comforter said again, "The comforter isn't speaking I am." Then the comforter was moved to the side to show a petite girl with pigtails.
"Oh, Karin-chan, it's you." Himeka said. 'Thank Goodness."
'So it wasn't a comforter yokai?' Ren thought dismally.
"Really Kazune-kun, if you can't think anything nice about me don't say anything at all!" Micchi cried as the two boys walked down the hall.
"Micchi? Kazune-kun?" Himeka turned her head towards the two boys who where storming through the halls apparently looking for everyone else.
"Himeka, Karin, Jin. Why did you leave me and Nishikiori in the hallwa- ... Hinonishi-kun, is that you?" Kazune asked as he saw the purple eyed boy hovering over Himeka.
"Kazune-kun? Is that your boyfriend?" Ren asked staring at the boys hands.
"Hinonishi-kun, I think that we boys need to have a talk, Karin you stay with Himeka, okay?" Kazune ushered all of the boys out of the room leaving the girls there all alone.
"Okay Hinonishi how much do you know about Greek mythology?" Kazune asked after they had alls settled into to the study/ basement.
"Not much, why?" Ren answered. 'I wonder where Kazune is getting with this, what does this have to do with him going out with that guy?'
"Let me start with this, I am NOT dating Nishikiori, second, we all have the power to transform into a 'gods' form.
" ..."
"It's true, that is why I call Karin my goddess, because she really is, I am Hades, nice to meet you!" Jin said offering Ren his hand.
"What?! Do you seriously expect me to believe this?" Ren asked thinking they were all playing some kind of trick on them.
"It's true Ren-kun, why don't you trust them?" Himeka asked as she walked down the stairs.
"Himeka-chan, you're saying that this is all true? How?" Ren asked.
"Professor Kujyou and Professor Karasuma were tying to create a way that humans could borrow divine powers, eventually they were able to, but only under certain circumstances..." Micchi explained.
" ... You need to be a teenager," Jin said.
" ... You need to have a ring," Himeka said.
"... and you need to be ... be an orphan," Karin finished as she walked down joining everyone. She had stumbled over the last part.
"Really, can I see?" Ren asked finally believing.
"Okay, but you might not be able to see us," Kazune answered, "EGO SUM DEUS!"
"I AM GOD!"
"(a/n I have no idea what Jin says to transform. I you know, tell me in the review, thanks!) -Insert battle cry here-"
All three of the divine were standing there before Ren to see what would happen next.
"... That was so awesome!" Ren yelled, "That was cooler than anything I could have imagined! It was mind blowing! Like the entire universe was opening up!"
'Where have I heard that before?' Karin wondered to herself. Meanwhile Jin was giving Kazune a look saying this-dude-can-see-us-what-the-heck-does-that-mean? Kazune didn't catch the look though, he was to busy staring at Karin's new goddess form. It's not like he hadn't seen her in it before, he just never noticed how much nicer it looked on Karin than her other form.
"Kazune, if you think that Karin looks hot in her new goddess form why don't you just tell her?" Micchi suggested.
"Huh? Kazune-kun, what do you think of your my new goddess form?" Karin asked a blushing Kazune.
"Nothing ... Nishikiori, what did you just call Karin?"
"Karin of course, that's her name right?"
"Well, yeah, but you never called her Karin."
"Well, last night she asked me to,"
"What?!" Kazune screamed as he went into extreme jealous mode.
"Kazune you aren't going into extreme jealous mode are you?" Jin asked mischievously.
"NO! I AM NOT!" Kazune screamed as the stomped out the door, pulling Micchi along with him.
"Yes you aaaarrrrree," Micchi teased as he was dragged up the steps. Himeka and Ren both sweat-dropped, 'He is so totally in denial,' they both thought.
"So, let me get this straight, you guys have the power to borrow the gods?" Ren repeated, apparently still skeptical.
"Yeah, and Karin is my goddess," Jin said slyly as he slipped his arm onto her shoulder. They had both transformed back by then and Karin found that her clothes had not fully changed back yet.
"JIN, GET OFF OF ME!!! WE ARE NOT TOGETHER!!!" Karin yelled slapping his hands.
"Really? I thought that you two were cute together," Ren said.
"WHAT?!" Kazune said. As he ran back in the room still dragging Micchi.
"Ren said that Karin-chan and Jin-chan look cute together," Himeka told Kazune who was extremely upset.
"Well chap you can't really blame him, she isn't officially your girl, she is still up for grabs," Micchi said smiling that creepy smile of his.
"Shut it Nishikiori! I don't need this right now," Kazune snapped back.
"But it's true Kazune, she isn't your girlfriend. Which is why I'm free to do this," Jin said as he grabbed Karin and gave her a soft kiss.
"Jin! What the heck was that for?" Karin asked as she punched the offender.
"I think I'm going to like staying here," Ren said to Himeka. They were both sitting in a love seat watching the scene with a big bucket of popcorn.
"I think you will too, there's so much drama!" Himeka replied, "Red vines?"
"Sure, I'd love some," Ren said. Kazune was currently trying to bite Jin's head off and Micchi was being pulled left and right like a rag doll. Karin just stood to the side sweat-dropping. 'Why is it that a bunch of crazy maniacs are always trying to kiss me?'
Then out of no where the Kazune-Z came flying through the ceiling.
"What did you do to our Kujyou-sama?" they all asked (a/n I think they should call him -sama not -kun)
"N-nothing, I'm not the one he's chasing am I?" Karin replied backing up.
"Yes, but he's not himself and your in the room, so it's all your fault!" they screamed. 'What kind of logic is that?' Karin thought as the Micchirians came crashing through the ceiling (a/n poor ceiling, I think I'll give it a break).
"Kazune-Z! Where have you been, you are late to gang war 2,257!" they screamed. Then the Jin's spoofed into the room ninja style, ending up between Jin and Kazune.
"Hey! Stop you fiend! How dare you try to bite our Jin-sama's head off!" they yelled.
On the love seat Himeka and Ren were confused, "How did you know all of this was going on?" they asked in unison. The leaders of the groups turned their heads, "We read it on they replied. As they saw Ren half of the girls mouths dropped open, 'Who is he?' they thought. Jin stood up and gave the coolest look he could muster.
"STOP!!!" he yelled.
"..." the Kazune-Z, Miccirians, and Jin's all stood in silence.
"I'm Hinonishi Ren, and I'm telling you all to leave! This is not your house and if you persist to harass us we will call the cops," he stated in an as-a-matter-of-factly way. A quarter of the girls got hearts in their eyes.
"WE LOVE YOU REN-SAMA!" they cried.
"TRAITORS!" the three other fan clubs yelled.
"YOU CAN'T TELL US WHO TO LOVE!" the protested. It looked like war, the Kazune-Z was getting there samurai swords ready, the Micchirians stretched to get ready for their martial arts, the Jin's were pulling out their poke' balls, and the newly made Ren-agade …
This chapter is exactly 4,000 words. I know it seems like most of this chapter was a waste, but eveything that happens here is crucial! You'll see. I'M NEVER WRITING A CHAPTER THIS LONG AGAIN! Anyway Review! You must review! Even if you are anonymous!