Thanks for reviewing! I feel better! I think I put Stranger a little out of character in this chapter. Can you Oddworld fans give me tips on his personality? Thanks!
Chapter: 2"Heh, haven't been here in a while." Stranger said as he entered Gizzard Gulch. He wore the same outfit he wore the last time he was here. He went to the 'newly built' bounty store, which still looked a lot like it was before, to see if there were any outlaws wanted. The clakker at the desk greeted him. "Hey, Stranger!" He said. "Long time, no see, huh?"
"Cut the small talk, clakker. Any outlaws that need to be taken in?"
"Well…" The clakker said, showing Stranger a wanted poster.
"Who the heck is this?" He asked.
"This is Six-shooter Sam. He and his gang rampage through a different town every day, trying to get our moolah. Luckily, you showed up. He's coming to our town today."
"Well, that's convenient. It'll be like the good old days. Just have my moolah ready when I bring him in."
"Sure, Stranger."
Outside the bounty store, Mystique made it into town, although she wasn't chased into town like she planned it. "Where are those gunners?" She thought. "This is so not going according to plan. Oh no, did SHE get to them? If that dork did, then-then… Oh man!" She spotted the town's general store and walked toward it. "Better not attract too much attention. I'll have to make do with what I have. I just hope Stranger's in town." She adjusted her scarf to cover her face, except her eyes, and entered the store.
Stranger left the bounty store and went to the general store to get some live ammo. When he entered the store, Mystique purchased a pack of arrows. Each arrow was about 8 inches long. He couldn't tell if she was a girl since she wore a large poncho. At least, not until she lifted the front part of her poncho with one hand to get the pack of arrows with the other hand. Doing this revealed her feminine features, which really caught his attention. He may be looking from the side, but he could tell that she has a slim waist, wide hips, and large breasts. "That woman has quite the body." He thought. She wore a tight fitting mid-drift tube top, tight pants, high-heeled boots, and long fingerless gloves, which were all black.
After she got her arrows, she headed for the exit. She gave Stranger a quick stare with her icy blue eyes, as she passed by him. He stared at her, too, only it was more 'down hill.' "He's staring as if he's never seen a woman before." She thought to herself. Just after that little thought, she felt a pinch on her butt. Then she heard Stranger snickering. "You're lucky I'm pretty busy, otherwise I'll have your head on a pike." She said to him. She winked at him and went through the door. "I think I'm in love." Stranger said to himself.
If it's not too much trouble, can you guys check out my anime fanfics? Just click on my pen name to see them. Before I forget, rating might go to M for intense romance scenes.