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A/N As before, I am marking where I deleted a major scene. The remaining text has undergone minor changes but nothing that should change the meaning.
Also, as before, you can read this chapter just fine without the removed scene (which is basically all explicit smut :) ) but if you want to read it the way it was written, this story now lives on blogger, see above.
Warnings still apply, this story is M-rated even in its edited version.
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Original A/N: I switch POV throughout the story to try to share the thoughts and experiences of all three main characters. Lots of Kol's POV in this section, for all the kinky Kol lovers. In fact, to even out the mainly female perspective of the last act, this one will be mostly male all in all. Enjoy =)
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Continued from:
Her feeling of comfort increases as she feels another warm body against her back, other gentle hands stroking her arms, her hair, and her neck. A sweet, sensual scent of quality after shave and the smell of pure masculine man fill her nostrils as she turns her head around to bury it in Kol's strong arms. The two of them work together to envelop her in a cocoon of safety and for the first time she begins to seriously consider it.
'All you have to do is surrender.'
Let's play master and servant
Come on, master and servant
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Chapter 3 – Punishment – The Real Idea (part 2)
It's a lot, it's a lot, it's a lot, it's a lot, it's a lot.
It's a Lot Like Life
Elijah and Kol sits quietly holding her, Kol still stroking his Kittens hair; he does not want to disturb her at this point. Although she is slowly beginning to relax in their arms, she is still upset. The fact that they can have such a profound calming effect on her so early in the process proves to him his brother was right, this truly is the best candidate they've had in a long time. Not to mention that she is absolutely delicious, inside and out.
She has stopped crying now and seems to have calmed down completely in their joint embrace, her body still turned towards Elijah with her head resting on Kol's' shoulder.
'So, little one', Elijah gently purrs at her. 'Can we assume you will remember the proper form of adress now?'
There is no hesitation before she responds, still relaxed and with eyes closed; "Yes, Master."
'Good girl! Then we put this behind us." Elijah beams at her while she sits up a bit straighter in his lap and looks from one face to the other. His smiling demeanor turns to a slightly more serious facial expression as he continues 'Of course, there is still the more serious transgression of your insolence towards my brother to adress. You do understand we will have to choice but to teach you not to try that again, don't you my sweet?'
"But I won't… yes Master."
The brothers glance at each other over her head and silently agree to let her error slip, she did catch herself into the correct response after all.
'Good. Then go apologize to my brother now. As you have just been disciplined, I believe an enthusiastic blow job may suffice to show him how sincerely sorry you are and earn his forgiveness, but he will be the judge of that. Go offer him your body and make amends little one. It will please me to watch you.' Elijah gestures towards Kol who is once again leaned back into the couch.
She stares wide eyed at him. He must be joking! The 'Yes, Master', and spanking her in front of his brother, that was bad enough. But he actually expects her to… No! That just can't be right!
"Come on over here Kitten, let me decide what is on today's menu.' Kol says in a dark, husky voice. 'I am ready to be apologized to.' She turns back to Elijah with questioning shock which is not calmed when he nods encouragingly and motions with his hand for her to go over to his brother.
Summoning up every inch of strength of will that she possesses, she thinks back to her earlier decision to not make the situation worse for herself than it already is. She walks over to the younger original on shaky legs and stands before him, head bent, while forcing her arms to not hug herself but give her full view of her lithe curves under the see through robe. The position she is in means that she cannot see his eyes hungrily ravishing the sight of her, but also that her eyes are staring straight at his crotch where his reaction to the sight is becoming ever more prominent.
He reaches out one hand to slip between the front halves of her robe, gently stroking her inner thigh, while the other opens up the button fly on his jeans. She can hear Elijah chuckle in the background 'Commando brother, really?' just as the last button comes undone and Kols' massive erection springs into view. Although frightened and humiliated, she cannot help to compare this view to the one of Elijah. Kol sports a slightly shorter, though still more than impressive, length but his girth is impossibly even greater than Elijahs. She truly did not think it possible, is this some kind of vampire thing? Her eyes widen in fear and excitement at the sight as she remembers how his older brother stretched her to her limits last night, and now she's looking at an even greater girth.
'No brother, in fact I don't think a blow job will do to soothe my irk at this Kittens foul mouth. I must admit watching her shapely ass as you spanked her before got my mind set on burying myself deep into another place than her mouth.' Kol turns to her and continues 'Straddle me, Kitten. Come sit in my lap so I can enjoy you completely. That would appease me.' He smirks at her, eyes no longer emotionless. Instead they are boiling with pure lust
She's always been of a petite build with thin bone structure. When she finished growing she stopped at 5,2, but with a woman's body, curvy hips, thin waist and rounded, firm breasts the size often referred to as "just over a handful". Her skin is porcelain white and unmarred and her eyes large, round and midnight blue. Her hair, always seeing to be untamable, is slightly curly strawberry blonde. She has been told before she looks like a doll, so Elijah's nick name for her did not come as a surprise. Compared to these two large, muscular vampires she even feels like a doll. Even without super human strength they are large enough to be able to manhandle her without any effort at all.
At Kol's words she clenches her teeth until she thinks they will crack. She knows she promised herself to do as they told her, and maybe just maybe she could have taken him in her mouth, compelled or not it was still very erotic last night with Elijah. But looking at this stranger with his huge cock telling her to sit on him and let him fuck her, she can't. She just can't! Not to mention that she's not sure it is physically possible for her to take him. They have to understand that, don't they? This must be some sick twisted joke.
Wide-eyed and without a word she backs away from Kol's form, shaking her head in denial, all the while watching the amusement drain from his features to be replaced by a stern expression, one eyebrow raised in question at something just over her shoulder. What, no who, he was looking at becomes painfully clear when her next step backs her right up against Elijah's strong chest, his strong arms wrapping around her like iron bands, completely immobilizing her.
Kol stand up, adjusting himself and closing his fly as he does so, before walking up to her, stopping less than an inch from her face. 'You really don't want to do this the easy way, do you Kitten? Here I thought this training would have a gentle start, but I was mistaken it seems.' the next moment he breaks out into a huge, mirthless grin and addresses his brother 'Not that I actually mind, more fun for us! Is the room ready?'
'Indeed it is.'
'Then what are we waiting for?'
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A moment later she finds herself back in the room where she spent the night with Elijah. Someone has been in there to remake the bed since she left and the drape on the far wall has been pushed back to reveal additional room space where a sturdy padded table with… is that shackles?... is placed.
While Elijah keeps her immobilized she sees Kol step up to the tool-wall and bring a long, sturdy but soft looking rope back with him. Suddenly even her flimsy upper body protection is removed as she feels her robe being opened and pushed over her arms and shoulders, leaving her upper body bare and the robe hanging along her hips. Quickly and with great experience her arms are bound behind her back, first at the wrists, with multiple loops, and then looped under her chest, crossed between her breasts and finally returned behind her back to tie her upper arms together. Even the slightest attempt to move her arms is extremely painful, while leaving them still and relaxed hardly hurt at all. She has never felt so helpless in her life.
'What are you..' she stops herself, looking horrified at the consequences of speaking out of turn when they are already upset with her. Luckily, her transgression is either not heard, or ignored.
Elijah has been able to let go of her arms now that Kol's bound her. He first looks at her ties and nods appreciatively to his brother for his excellent handiwork, and then turns to her. This is her first training session and they want her to remain herself at the core, and so the rules must occasionally be loosened so that she will not snap.
"Do you wish to speak your mind, little one?" he smiles impossibly gently at her.
"Yes, Master" She realizes and is grateful for that he phrased the question so that she could use her only allowed response while still answering truthfully.
"If I allow you to, temporarily, are you aware how truly unwise it would be for you to abuse this freedom by, say, arguing or speaking out of turn?" A perfect eyebrow is raised and she feels her knees weakening at the sight. What strange power does this man have over her?
"Yes Master" using the correct response becomes easier with every time, especially as he's giving her hope that she may be allowed to speak normally if she behaves now.
'Very well, you may speak freely for a short while, until I revoke the right, to answer our questions and to ask two of your own. I urge you to think about how you phrase them, little one. Now, the floor is yours.' Elijah smiles gently at her and strokes her cheek. She's so grateful she could cry and slightly leans into his palm.
'Why are you doing this? What are you going to do with me? Elijah, please!'
'That was both questions at once, Kitten' Kol chuckles 'I hope you didn't have something else you really wanted to know.' Having checked her bonds he comes around and stands before her, cocking his head to one side while he's think about the best way to answer her question in the shortest amount of time. He's itching to get started, but he agrees with his brother that discipline is rather useless if the girl doesn't understand the reason. Finally he makes up his mind and begins.
'The short answers to the What and Why questions are "Discipline" and "Because you have been a bad girl". I don't think that will help you understand yet though.
So, the long answer to Why is; you belong to us and are to fulfill our wishes, no matter if they are mundane or sexual. You were born for this, Kitten. Submission, or so my brother tells me, comes natural to you but your conscious mind is still fighting it. Therefore we will train you, your conscious and subconscious mind, to recognize the pleasure in finding your place and not fight your true calling. You are strong willed so it may take some time, but it will be all the more rewarding for both us and for you when we are done. '
' As to the What we will do ; Some of the training will be very pleasurable for you, other parts painful, but we have extensive experience in this, you can trust that we know what we are doing and we do it for your own good. Sweet little kitten, you will just have to trust us.' At this Kol leans over and pulls her erect nipple into his mouth, sucking hard and twirling his tongue around the bud, sending lightning bolts of lust through her body. 'You already know how my brother can make you feel in bed. Trust me when I say my abilities are no less skilled than his, and together…' he leaves the rest of the sentence unspoken but full of innuendos.
10 days ago she was leading a perfectly normal life with perfectly normal dreams of a perfectly normal future. Then she was abducted by a strange man who turned out to be a vampire and then the whole thing got crazily sexual. Now she's bound, half naked, with the gorgeous vampire who turned out to be crazy kinky and his equally gorgeous and kinky brother, telling her that she was born to be their slave. The thought would make her laugh if it didn't make her want to cry, and make her cry, if it didn't turn her on so incredibly much. The world is upside down and inside out and she no longer knows what true reality is. She hasn't even noticed she is beginning to seek comfort after pain from the very person who inflicted it. But, with rising satisfaction, they have. The bonding process has started.
'It is better this way little one. Trust us.' Elijah looks at her with an expression of mixed possession and, could that be fondness? 'There will be pleasure in the pain. All you have to do is surrender.' His slight smile lingers for a moment before his mouth settles in a more firm stance. 'That was the questions. Until I specifically state so, the previous ground rules apply. Do you understand little one?'
'Yes, Master.' She tries to surrender to the inevitability of what is to come, even if she does not know what it is.
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The aftershocks find him relaxed and content. Elijah reaches over her body to the release end of her bonds. Pulling it, they quickly untie her body before any cramps set in. Kol withdraws from her and Elijah picks her up from the table, bridal style, and swiftly carries her over to the huge bed, remade with fresh silk sheets. They lie down on the bed together, placing her completely exhausted body between them. A drop of Elijah's cum escapes the corner of her mouth and Kol's load is beginning to wet the inside of her thighs as it slowly leaks pout of her, she is sweaty, worn and absolutely beautiful.
As she once again feels herself cocooned between the two vampires the overwhelming sense of safety, comfort and contentment returns to her and she whimpers softly while two pairs of hands, previously hard as steel, caress every inch of her with the gentleness of a swan's feather, rubbing the marks of the ropes that dug into her arms and chest, removing the blindfold and drying the remains of tears from around her eyes.
'You did really well, little one, really well.' Elijah strokes her hair and kisses her brow, his voice full of affection and pride. She inexplicably feels happy and content at having pleased him, no matter which way it was attained. She knows there is something that should bother her about that when she hears him continue; 'Now, have you learned your lesson?'
'Yes Master.' She really has. She shouldn't have spoken so to his brother, her other Master. She doesn't know what came over her and feels really sad that she disappointed them both. A small small voice in the back of her head is screaming at her that this is wrong, but she is ignoring it. Instead she turns to Kol. 'I am sorry Master, I am so sorry.' Tears fill her eyes again and she buries her face in his chest, feeling his comforting strokes along her spine.
Kol smiles at her and places feather light kisses on every surface of her head that he can reach with his mouth. He stops caressing her for a moment and instead wraps his arms around her, pulling her into his chest and enveloping her in strength, warmth and security. 'Yes, Kitten, I know. We are satisfied, and you are forgiven.' She relaxes into his arms.
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The petting and stroking continues, gentle and caring. She feels she has really atoned and gained their forgiveness and their affections. One of them gets up, she doesn't know which one as her eyes are still blissfully closed, and comes back with what turns out to be a bowl of warm soap water and two soft sponges. She is lifted up and placed on a towel, still without opening her eyes, and then starts to feel the sponges gently washing her body, her face, her sex – any remains of sweat and seamen is removed from her body and soft, feather light kisses are placed on her skin from two directions as the cleansing goes on. Time flows by and she can feel strength return into her mind and muscles, while still being deliciously relaxed,
'Did it turn you on to suck both our cocks, and be fucked by us both, little one?' Elijah asks her while carefully turning her over and stroking the sponge over her buttocks. 'Yes, Master.' It's funny how much easier saying those two words becomes with time.
'You've never come so hard in your life, have you, Kitten?' Kol continues, the momentary silence suddenly making him realize that he didn't ask a question that Elijah's rules allowed her to answer. 'Am I right?' He continues, amending his mistake. 'Yes, Master.' She sighs contently, but she screaming voice in her mind is getting louder.
'So, have you not only learned the important lesson, but are grateful that we taught you?' Kol feels like he is repeating himself, but making his Kitten say the words out loud will admit to them and her that she is beginning to settle into her role as their submissive. They may prod her to say it with their questions, but she needs to express it herself. It is an important step.
Something in her awakens at his words, her previous defiance that has stayed in the back of her mind until this. Seriously? He wants her to say that she is grateful they tied her up and fucked her two-on-one? Grateful that Elijah made her deep-throat his huge cock? Grateful that Kol deigned to impale her on his massive erection?
Ok, so maybe a part, a big part, of her wants to say yes. Embarrassingly enough, say yes truthfully, but another, much bigger and most of all older part of her will hear nothing of it. She tries to hold it back, she really does. The part of her that is beginning to learn, beginning to be trained, what they want is very aware that this is a very, VERY bad idea, but what is left of her self-esteem will not let her act any other way. She is trying to control herself, so the words do not exit her mouth as aggressively as her unconscious wanted them too. From the sudden tension in her lovers' bodies, it came out harsh enough.
'No Master, I am not grateful that you raped me. My body may keep saying yes, but my mind is still saying NO. That means it is rape. No matter how much you make me want it. Let me go, please. I don't want to be a part of your twisted games anymore.' She stops to take a breath but then doesn't dare continue as she feels the rigid state of the two muscular bodies she is sandwiched between. She realizes that even without cussing them out this time, she has taken her statements too far.
Also, thinking about it in the light of what she has learned about them, she has unfortunately issued something of a challenge; to make her want it with her whole being, not just her body. None of them seem like the kind of man to step down from a challenge. As she is contemplating this she notices Kol looking at his brother over the top of her head, a world of words passing between them in that one glance, and then speaks.
'Well, Elijah, I don't know about you but I believe I have rested long enough. It is time to return to the stubborn girl that still does not seem to have learned what we intended her to, despite the previous signs to the contrary.' Elijah sighs and nods at his brother. 'Indeed, every victory seems short lived with her. However, I think we can do better, brother, don't you?'
'I know we can.' With that she feels her body being lifted in strong arms and placed face down back on the table, face down, the attached shackles snapped around her wrists and ankles. Oh shit!
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So, chapter 3 is still not over. It's going to get worse? Poor girl… This story is truly spinning out of my control, the original intent was not this hardcore. How do you feel about the way it is turning out? Tell me please.
Disclaimer: No copyright infringement intended, as usual I do not own anything but my original (chuckle) story and a petite little OC.