Okay, guys I know I'm not a very good writer (I don't know if I can use the excuse that I'm 13 and this was my first fic as an excuse…?) and this fic showed it. I know it's awful but it's the best I can do. A lot of you criticised my work, it confused you or you asked questions about it so here are my responses.
Evitae – Didn't really think that the necklace itself was a huge detail since it didn't have much to do with the rest of the story but lets just say Rose decided she was too embarrassed that the necklace had let the Doctor know she loved him (even though he interpreted the love in a friend way) and didn't want her feelings to be on show all the time, because that could lead to some embarrassing situations, so she placed it back on the stall. Also, yeah but I only made sure the names of stuff stayed in the native language because I figured they probably wouldn't be translated seeing as they're names? I don't know, maybe I'm wrong but that's my explanation for it. x
Lily Rose-Petals – You don't need to sleep, but you can and seeing as Rose had nothing better to do and just wanted to lie there with the Doctor (because for her, that was heaven) she decided she might as well just go to sleep. x
WishfulThinkin21 – Yes, I chose a Greek origin name because I LOVE Greece and thought it would be a nice place for it to be similar to. Yeah, Alien names because it was fun. And nice one on spotting it was Turkish, wondering if anyone would notice that! I chose it just because I felt like it. I mean, it helps me learn a language and get more cultural experience right? Tehe x
Also, Thanks everyone for reviewing! Glad most of you liked it, and sorry for the errors I made. Check out my other stories if you liked this one. xxx