Yep this counts as an update. Thank Bluejay for her ideas. Here we go...
Thorne was pacing back and forth. Knightriss would not let him go back to the castle to look for her. Croc and Ballista were trying to calm him down and convince him that she would be fine. They soon heard some noises coming from the forest. It sounded like coughing and sticks breaking. Thorne's hopes didn't go up. He knew she wouldn't make a sound. Was she trapped in the castle? Did the attackers capture her? The noises were accounted for when Gildar walked in. He coughed a few times and got a look from Thorne when he didn't answer his unheard question.
"Gildar! Did you or did you not see my sister?" Thorne asked looking worried.
"Yeah she's right behind me." He answered confidently.
"Um, where?" Ballista asked slightly annoyed.
Gildar turned around to prove her wrong but found that he, the mighty Gildar, was wrong.
"What? I swear she was just behind me. She saved me from my mirror then I ran out of the room, shut the door, and... oh no. All the doors have those automatic locks that when you close the door they lock that Tink installed."
"So wait she saved you and you locked her in a burning room. Nice Gildar. Really nice." Ballista replied.
By now Thorne couldn't decide if he was mad, scared, or both. She was his baby sister and she's trapped in a burning building. That was bad enough on it's own but the fact that he could do nothing about it was the worst. Soon the fire department came and spoke to them. They had put out the fire and they told them they were lucky that no one was in there.
"There was no one in there?" Thorne asked as his voice rose with worry. Crocness stood beside him and patted him sympathetically.
"Nope but we did find this. It's a bit burned but it's still useable." The fire chief brought out something that made Kook's heart stop as he realized the truth and the reality of what had happened. In the chief's hand was a slightly charred ninja katana. To be more specific. Shaiden's splatana. Ballista's eyes teared up and the viking was shaking and was pale with grief. In his mind, it wasn't the flames that had killed the young girl. It was him. All of it was his fault. He made Thorne lose his little sister. Thorne on the other hand had his normal tough exterior on. Behind it, he was as dead as she was. He wished that it was him rather than her. He begged for her to be alive but knew differently.
"Thorne, I'm sorry. Really it has got to be hard." Ballista sighed sympathetically.
"No. Not too bad. My little sister is only gone." Thorne replied in one tone.
"I like how quick you all are to underestimate me." They all turned around to the new voice. Shaiden was standing there perfectly fine. I mean she had a few cuts and had a small burn on her wrist but other than that she was fine. She then walked over to Gildar and punched him on the shoulder.
"That's what you for locking me in your room after I got you out." She looked over at her brother who wasn't looking at her.
"Awww Thorne it's okay. I'm fine." She cooed while smirking. Thorne glared at her.
"Oh how did I find it in myself to be worried about you?" Thorne asked. They all went back to the castle to check out the damage..Everyone but Gildar, Shaiden, and Thorne at the fact that the only room that was burnt was Gildar's room. Shaiden went to bed early that night complaining of being tired. Soon after they all went to bed. The next morning Shaiden was acting different. More quiet. Distant. Thorne noticed and he asked her about it. He knew immediately from her voice that something was wrong.
"I just don't feel well. I have a headache." She answered in a really struggled hoarse voice. She was pale and her eyes were red.
"How much smoke did you breath in?" Thorne asked in the old worried brother voice.
"A lot but I couldn't help it. I had a hard time getting the window to break. Why?" She asked.
He surveyed the way she was acting and came to a conclusion. "Smoke inhalation." Shaiden groaned and went to sit back down but stumbled a bit. Thorne grabbed her arm before she could fully fall but it was a close call. No one else almost no one. Kook came forward and asked what was wrong. Shaiden said nothing. Thorne helped then asked the same question. Still nothing.
"She must be dizzy. Kook, she breathed in a lot of smoke and I think she has smoke inhalation. Kook looked worried over the pale girl who was sweating yet shivering. Then she collapsed.
Sorry if this is OOC. I worked on not cutting off sentences abruptly. I looked up smoke inhalation on google but if this is not the way that it is I apologize.