Dreamstar13: I'm back! Kaori, bring out the box. I'm aching for a review.
Kaori: Here it is.
Dreamstar13: You seem nicer than usual.
Kaori (with her death glare): Just take it.
Dreamstar13: Ok, ok. This review is from bushes283 from chapter 22. It reads:
No offense but it always makes me mad when people mistake InuYasha's age. He's 15 years old not counting the 50 years pinned on the tree, he ages the same way humans do. Rumiko Takahashi said so on a interview.
Sorry, I didn't know that. I'm just going by movie three's response of him being born the day his father died 200 years age. (Now with a chalk board behind her and a stick in her hand. She hits the stick against the board.) He looks about 15-20, so if you take off the 50 years of the tree, according to my mathematical chart, he would be 15 in demon years, 150 in human years. If you count it, he would be 20 in demon years, 200 in human years. Check movie three for the details of 200 years ago. Oh, and I didn't know about that interview, so don't chew me out. This next review is from PInK cuTie KaGomE-micael m from chapter 22. It reads:
hehe so cute. And thatz rite her birthday is the day they meet..thatz so cute and hes giving her the ring! AW i cant wait 4 the next chapter so PLEASE update soon K!
Tootalz-Micael
(Grins evily) Who ever said it was going to be a ring? He just talked to a man. Never said anything about a ring. I feel happy and am shoing everyone yet another review. This one is from inuandsesshielover4ever from chapter 22. It reads:
wow thats a cute chapter...but im a little confused tho how did inuyasha get her to fall in to a dream like that? was it a dream? can you answer my ?'s plz?lol post soon!
..tee hee
Well, earlier in that chapter, it says that they, Inuyasha and Kagome, were connected. it was because they are mated and were destined to be soul mates (I never added that part.). I just want to show you all one more review (sorry for those of you who are getting annoyed).This one is from Megahan from chapter 22. It reads:
WOW Cliffy Your Pure Evil:P
This is an awesome fan fiction!
(Grins yet again evily) Finally, someone noticed...or was I never evil before. Now that I gave you these reviews, on with the story!
Disclaimer: I don't own Inuyasha, Kaori and I (I grins innocently at Kaori) love all the reviews received by all of you... except for the flames.
Chapter 23
The Planning of a Party
"Eh?" Kagome had gotten up so quickly, she fell. 'If that was a dream… why was Inuyasha there?' Kagome thought.
"Hey Kagome, you're awake." Souta recalled, putting his headphones back on ((A/n I don't own any song except the ones I make up, except I haven't made one up. Random song I picked).
"It's the start of something new.
It feels so right to be here with you, yeah.
And now looking in your eyes
I feel in my heart
The start of something new." Kagome was now covering her sensitive inu-hanyou (half dog demon) ears.
"Souta, stop singing!" Kagome yelled into Souta's ear.
"Ow! Lay off the yelling, sis."
"I would if you lay off the singing." The two continued arguing even when Inuyasha walked in, said yo to them, and dashed upstairs. 'I just have to hide this.' Inuyasha thought as he put the package in the place Mrs. Higurashi specifically told him to put it. 'There. Kagome will never find it.'
"I DON'T CARE WHAT YOU SAY! I'M GOING TO KEEP ON SINGING." Souta yelled.
"FINE! I'LL JUST GO TO YOUR PSX (or PS3) AND DELETE ALL OF YOUR FILES." Kagome screamed. Both were arguing at the top of their lungs.
"DON'T TOUCH MY STUFF!"
"This is pretty weird. I guess Souta and Kagome fight as much as Kagome and me," Inuyasha mumbled.
"SOUTA! Oh, hi Inuyasha." Kagome smiled as she and Inuyasha had a soft kiss. "Where were you?"
"Oh, a little bit here, and a little bit there." Inuyasha smirked.
"That's not fair. You won't tell me." Kagome pouted.
"What? I can't be a little bit naughty sometimes?" Inuyasha continued with his evil smirk. Kagome rolled her eyes.
"I'm going to go puke and then continue singing." Souta called out.
"You better cover your ears, Inuyasha. Souta may be good in video games, but his singing is horrible." Kagome said.
"I heard that!" Souta yelled.
"Good!" Kagome yelled back.
"Hey, Shippo's here!" Souta shouted.
"Shippo? I thought I told you to stay home." Kagome said.
"I did…but then I got bored." Shippo explained. The conversation continued on.
Inuyasha just continued walking until he reached the TV. He may have been to the present before, but he was still unsure of everything such as how people can be in "boxes". He pressed the button and began watching the brown "box".
He kept on changing the channel…until he made it to the history channel.
"Today we are doing a special on the Feudal Era. Everybody knows that this is one of the bloodiest times. But there were also some good things. One, some humans were living at peace. Two, there were five brave warriors who fought against those who wanted the Shikon Jewels." Inuyasha's ears went up at the words "Shikon Jewels".
"Yes these five heroes, a monk, a demon slayer, a fox demon, a priestess, and an inu-hanyou, were traveling together to find out where all the remaining Sacred Jewels are. Most people think that the inu-hanyou and the priestess fell in love and the monk and demon slayer fell in love as well." 'You got that right' Inuyasha snorted.' "The priestess was from another world. Where? Nobody knows." 'I do… and you would never believe it.'
"Inuyasha, what are you watching?" Kagome asked, popping out from nowhere, surprising Inuyasha as well.
"Just some history thing."
"Hey, it's a Feudal Era special. I think Mom is recording it upstairs." Kagome went upstairs. Inuyasha was now blushing. 'Kagome is going to hear that report… and she will know what I've been thinking about her before the day I told her. That would really suck.' Inuyasha ran after his mate trying to stop her from hearing that report.
Two days later…
"'Yawn' Morning already." said an inu-hanyou who was very sleepy.
"Happy "Day We First Met" Anniversary." the inu-hanyou/miko shouted.
"Happy "Day We First Met" Anniversary…and happy birthday." Inuyasha added.
"Thank you." Kagome kissed him good morning and went off to wake up Shippo.
'I brought that present back with me…now where did I put it?' Inuyasha thought as he searched through the closet that Kagome's mom purchased and gave to them (you know, those closets that aren't connected to the wall. What were they called? Wardrobes?).
"Mama, here's the present I'm giving to you." Shippo said giving her a wrapped box.
"Thank you, but I'll open it a little later." Kagome assured him.
"Kagome! Don't we need to start cooking before everyone comes over?" Inuyasha asked.
"Cook? Oh no! I forgot all about that!" Kagome ran into the kitchen and frantically started cooking all the dishes from her time. Including, Inuyasha's favorite. Ramen.
"Don't worry about the cake!" Inuyasha yelled while running towards the well.
"Ok!" Kagome yelled as she continued cooking everything she was planning to cook (I would just want to give a moment to everyone. Doesn't this remind you of that episode called Battle with the Dried Up Youkai at the Cultural Festival? Or was it called something else? Sorry bout that. Back to the story). Inuyasha jumped into the well and ran into the house.
"Inuyasha! I made the cake you and Kagome wanted. Double chocolate with chocolate chips and chocolate chip and Oreo cookies on top chocolate (starts drooling)." Kagome's mom said as she placed a large, and I mean, LARGE cake onto the table. It was beautifully made with chocolate flowers and cookies on top. (A/n: Oreos do not belong to me… but the creation of the Ultimate chocolate cake in my imagination is on here right now.)
"Err…thank you, Oka-san." Inuyasha thanked…err…politely. 'Will this fit in the well?' Inuyasha thought.
Back with Kagome…
"Sango, could you pass me that pan?" Kagome thought as she continued making California Rolls (mm… sushi).
"Ok." Sango replied as she handed the pan to Kagome. Kagome put the pan over the fire pit and started what looked like, frying scrambled eggs. Sango now has that anime sweat drop thing on her head.
Back with Miroku…
"AHHHHH!" Miroku was running for dear life as his two year old daughter and twelve year old nephew (Shippo should be 12 since he was probably 10 when they defeated Naraku and 7 when Kagome first met Inuyasha. Problem solved).
"Come on, Daddy! You know you want to fight with me!" Sakura shouted as she swung her miniature hiraikotsu (she's too small as Sango would call it to hold a regular sized hiraikotsu).
"Come on Miroku! Let's spar!" Shippo yelled cracking his knuckles.
"NOOO!"
Back with Kagome…
"There, finished. And without a moment too soon." Kagome said.
"What is all of these dishes Kagome?" Sango asked.
"California Rolls, scrambled egg, fried rice, steak… and some ribs." All of these dishes were in a Japanese lunch box
"Wow! It all looks delicious." Sango complimented looking at each dish.
"Well, I brought a karaoke machine from home. That way, we can have fun. Oh and I bought this new karaoke CD."
"Karaoke?"
"It's a machine that plays music that you can sing along with." Kagome explained.
"That's sounds great!" Sango exclaimed. Kagome couldn't wait to force Inuyasha to sing. She has never heard him sing. Ever. And they have been married for two years!
"Ugh… Sango…I'll be right back." Kagome ran putting her hand to her mouth. You should be able to guess what was happening. Sango waited and looked at where she hid Kagome's present. 'It must be very hard on Kagome. She's conceiving two hanyou children… and she's working very hard.' Sango thought as she set the table and the box lunches.
"'Whew' Finally. Well, I better go set up the karaoke machine. Kagome said as she took out what looked like a giant battery thing that you use if you are in an area without electricity. She then took out a karaoke machine with a TV screen on it and plugged it into the electrical generator thingy.
"All set! I better get Inuyasha." she told Sango as she ran at her high hanyou speed towards the well.
Back with Inuyasha and the cake…
"Hey Inuyasha, do you need help?" Souta asked.
"What's it look like to ya?" Inuyasha replied, irritated from the large box, which held the cake.
"If you can slice the cake in half, you can take half the cake at down the well, come back, and take the other half." Souta told him.
"Great idea!" Inuyasha said sarcastically. "Except the fact that Kagome will probably want the whole cake put into one piece, not pieces!"
"Hi guys!" said a cheerful voice, which startled Inuyasha and Souta, from the well. "Eh! Is that the cake? Did Mom over do it again?" Kagome asked.
"What? Does she do this every year?" Inuyasha asked.
"Yup, and every holiday too." Both of the siblings replied (that's a lot of cake).
"I got it! Let's split the cake in half!" Kagome said. Souta glared at Inuyasha while Kagome set the large cake onto a cardboard and aimed.
"Iron Reaver Soul Stealer!" she shouted as she lunged towards the cake. The cake was then cut in not two, but…err… more slices than anyone can ever imagine.
"Did I over do it?" Kagome asked. Souta shook his head in the answer of yes.
"Don't worry though, sis. Inuyasha will probably eat all of it before any of us touch it."
"What was that?" Inuyasha was staring his death glare at Souta. Souta got the message and ran away.
"Well, we have everything set over at home. Shall we bring the cake home?" Kagome asked.
"How?" Inuyasha looked at all the slices of cake on the piece of cardboard.
"Get the box and put all of the cakes into it." Kagome instructed. "Souta, grab a hair from my brush and come on!"
Longest chapter ever! Longest chapter ever! Five pages long. And over 2,000 words. I know what Kagome told Souta to do sounded kinda wierd, but how else could Souta come.
Kaori: Can we just leave now? I'm getting bored. After all of those reviews you read (four to be exact) you are still talking to people.
Dreamstar13: SIT! (THUD!) Sorry for my rude half. Please review and I'll update soon (hey, that kinda rhymes...maybe).