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Oh, I forgot to put this in since Luke and Lorelai are married, they live in Lorelai's house. There was no room Chris and Jess live above the diner.

(Yale, parking lot, march 2004)

Rory had just finished her extremely long exam and was getting ready to leave. She got to her car and checked her phone. "God damn, it my phone died. I need to probably start charging it once in a while. Well off to Luke's I go." She said to herself

(Luke's diner, March 2004)

Rory walked into Luke's. "Hey Luke can I get some coffee "

"Rory"

Rory turned around to her name. "Jess" she whispered

Flashback

(Saturday night Luke and Lorelai's first anniversary, August 31, 2000.)

"Jess?" Rory walked into her room at the Gilmore house "you Ok?"

"Yeah, just a lot of people here. I needed to take a breather from all the happiness."

"I know. Luke and mom don't even know half the people here." She walked over to him and wrapped her arms around his waist.

With his hands in his pocket he touched his head with hers. "You want to bale?" he asked

"What are we going to tell them?" she smiled at him

"Well I have to go to work really early tomorrow and you have a headache?"

"Sounds good"

End of flash back

(Luke's diner, March 2004)

"Jess. What… your not here?" Rory stuttered

"Yes he is Rory he is standing right there." Replied Kirk

"Thank you Kirk for pointing that out" she snapped at him

"We need to talk." Jess said calmly

"Yes. Yes we do but auhh not right now. I got to go find Lis… Mina. Bye" she stumbled to the door then turned to Luke

" Were is Mina?" she asked giving him a glare

"At home. She went to talk to Lorelai."

"Hey Ror."

Rory looked to the man standing next to Luke. "HI Chris…" ms. Patty walked in the door

"Rory sweetie there you are. I have the costumes for Kate-Lynn and Thalisa for my parade. They are going to be the cutest Fairies in the world. I just can't wait to see them."

"Thanks Ms. Patty, uh I have to go so I will pick them up later ok bye."

"Rory what's wrong sweetie?"

"Hi Ms. Patty." Chris said

"Oh hi Chris, Rory what's …" Ms. Patty gasped "Chris…Jess… you're here… ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I gotta call Babette."

"Yeah got to go." Rory made an attempted to the door but was blocked when Babette walked in

"Rory sugar what's the rush?" Babette asked.

"Nothing Babette I gotta go." And once again Rory tried to leave but was unsuccessful do to Taylor

"Rory I wanted to talk about putting an ad for the Old Fashion Ice Cream Parlor in the paper.

"Not now Taylor call me office later ok."

"OK why are in such a hurry it's a beautiful day?"

"Because Chris and Jess are here and she doesn't want to talk to them or tell them about Katie or Lisa so she is trying to escape but you and Patty and Babette are in her way." Kirk blurted out. Rory turned to Kirk giving him the death look.

"Thank you Kirk." Rory snapped at him and this time made it threw the door.

Flash back

(Luke's Diner, Jess's room, Morning after Luke and Lorelai's Anniversary, September 2000.)

Rory woke up in Jess's arms. She ran her fingers through his messy hair. He was still sleeping. She started to recall the events that took place that night.

Her phone started to ring 'mina's cell' "hello"

"Where the hell are!" Mina screamed

"I auhhhhhhhhhhhh." Rory mumbled

"OH MY GOD, let me guess there is a sleeping boy lying next to with brown hair and brown eyes!"

"Um yeah"

"I AM SO PROUD OF YOU. MY SISTER GOT LAID, MY SISTER GOT LAID"

"Mina shut up mom may hear you!"

"Mom and Luke went to a hotel last night there going to be there all weekend so Chris spent the night over here. I told mom you were at Lane's when she called this morning."

"Thanks, so what did you and Chris do last night?" Rory said playfully

"The same thing you did, by the way where are you?" Mina asked

"At the diner."

"Well you better get over here soon cause grandma is coming over to check up on us. She be here around 6 so you better leave soon its almost 5:40"

"OH god alright I will leave Jess a note and find my clothes and be over there, mean time you need to get Chris out of there."

"Oh shit I forgot about him ok I will see you soon."

End of flash back