'Sup everyone

Chapter 17 is here now

Great new characters

But I feel a little sad because there was this one review that made me feel that my story is pathetic

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After the Neko incident, the kids began to go back to what they were doing before. Sayaka and Briar walked to Ryou, pouting.

"Great! Not only did we not get to see behind Kakashi sensei's mask, but he found us at his chair" Briar complained. "He must be suspicious now"

Sayaka sighed "ya, but art least we did not get too busted" she said. Ryou looked at them and smiled.

"Told you not to try, but noooo don't listen to the shy cousin" Ryou said, mockingly. Sayaka and Briar glared at him. He shut up and went back to building hid tower.

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Kinji was being chased by Ai around the room. But no matter were he went, he kept his eyes on Kyumu. She just sat there, quietly, not moving and emotionless. Kinji was determined to prove that she was a witch to people like Sanza who did not believe him and curses.

He breathed in and out as he ran by the smiling and joyful Ai, who did not seem tired at all.

Man, does this guy ever give up? Kinji thought, passing Kari and Tye, who were still talking about the Mist village. They raised there heads to see Kinji pass them, lightening fast and Ai on his trail. They shrugged and went back to talking.

"I'm gonna catch you" Ai chanted.

"Not a chance!" Kinji called behind him. He passed Sanza, Vivi and Elsie who were watching them from behind their books.

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"Geez, that Kinji can be really annoying" Vivi whispered.

"But he is pretty fast" Elsie whispered back.

"Whatever, I bet I could beat him in a race" Vivi continued.

"Is that a real bet" Elsie smiled. Vivi looked at her weirdly.

"What are you guys whispering about?" Sanza asked. But she did not get an answer.

"HEY KINJI! VIVI SAYS SHE CAN BEAT YOU IN A RACE!" Elsie screamed. Everyone's eyes were on Elsie immediately. Kinji stopped and stared at her. She smiled.

"You heard me, Vivi says she is faster then you and can beat you in a race" Elsie said.

"Really?" Kinji asked. Elsie nodded.

"Right Vivi?"

"Huh?" Vivi wondered out load.

"Wow! Sounds like a beat, who will win' Ai said, smiling evilly. Kinji walked over to Vivi. He frowned and put his fists on his hips.

"Maybe you should put your cookies were you mouth is" Kinji said. Now it was Vivi who got angry.

"Is that a challenge?" she asked.

"Yup, if I win you give me all the cookies" Kinji began.

"EEP! NOT MY COOKIES! NOT MY COOOOOOKIES!" Sayaka screamed, holding her backpack.

"I meant Vivi's cookies, relax!" Kinji exclaimed.

"Oh" Sayaka said, shyly.

"Fine pip squeak, and if I win then you have to give me all of your cookies" Vivi said, making shure that Sayaka heard the your part. Kinji nodded quickly.

"But who will time?" Tye asked. Everyone looked at each other. None of them knew how to time. Then the door burst open.

"Hey, hey, hey!" said a girl with long brown hair in a ponytail and brown eyes. She was also tanned. At her right side there was a girl with brown hair and blond highlights. On the other side was a girl long black hair and green eyes.

"Who are you?" Briar asked.

"Well, I'm Inumaru" said the long brunette. "These are Kiri (emogirl, please review and tell me the name of your character please)" she pointed to the girl with green eyes "and Rin-rin (tenten and temari also please tell me the name of your character)" she pointed to the blond highlighted girl. They waved hello.

"Say, can you girls time?" Kari asked.

"Why?" Rin-rin asked.

"Because Kinji and Vivi are about to race and we need someone to time" Sanza explained.

"Who?" Rin-rin asked again. They all pointed to Vivi and Kinji who looked at the three girls.

"I think Kiri can time" Inumaru said and looked at her friend. She nodded.

"Good! Then its settled, Vivi and Kinji will race in the playground at recess" Elsie announced. Everyone nodded. But Rin-rin smiled evilly.

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Anko's class

Shino sat quietly, fiddling with his fingers. He was the type that would not worry or be scared easily. But he was frightened of something now. Anko. He just could not tell her he set the bugs out. He knew she was the kind that would not listen to explanations. So he stayed quiet. Everyone else were doing there own thing.

Ino and Sakura were spinning their hair while staring at Sasuke who was just standing at the wall. Kiba and Naruto were fighting about who knows what this time and Gaara was sitting down, playing cards with Kankuro. Temari played with a stuffed red fox, trying to pull its head off but taking occasional glances at Shikamaru. As for our lazy preschooler, he was playing operation with Choji, who got some crumbs from his chips on the board. Hinata and Neji were, once again reading a book. This time it was Cinderella. And Rock lee, well, he was being Rock lee. Shouting about youth to a bored Tenten.

Shino sighed. He never imagined being in the same class with so many weird people. Well they weren't weird, just different. Like Shino. If he had his bug colony now, he would watch it. And surprisingly not get bored. He would watch as little Jack tried to, again, push a pile of dirt while Chum ate all the dirt he could find. Alex would try to get the best leaf to impress Mary who was to busy looking at herself in the small puddles of water.

It was really amazing, the way bugs work if people took the time to stop and watch them.

"Shino-kun?" said a curious voice. It was Chimare. Shino forgot she was also in their class. "What's up?" Shino remand silent. Chimare narrowed her eyebrows a bit. He still remand silent, hoping that she would go away. "Lets play something, I'm bored" He looked up at her.

"I don't feel like it" he said silently and looked back down. Chimare put her fists to her hips and sighed.

"Fine" she said and walked off to the couch. Shino breathed out. Finally she was gone. He would never admit it but Chimare kinda scared him.

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Chimare sat down and huffed. That Shino was too boring for her. Suddenly Temari looked up from her torturing and looked at Chimare. She walked over.

"Hey, want to help me torture the stuffed animals?" Temari asked, smiling.

"Why the hell do you torture them?" Chimare asked her own question. Temari thought.

"Its fun" she answered "so want to do it with me?" Chimare sighed.

"Okay" she agreed. Not like I have anything else to do she thought.

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Tell me if that was a short chapter

Anyway, like I said in the beginning

I good a hated PM from someone who said that I should take out ALL the OCs

Even though they said it nicely, it felt like they hated my story

So be honest, my audience

Are you getting bored of my story?