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Chapter 16- A Demon and an Angel
It was dark tonight, not even the moon or stars shone their iridescent glow this evening. He was out tonight, everyone feared him. Just his name struck fear into the heart of many souls. Nobody dared to defy him even the moon and stars stayed hidden from him. Nobody would ever dare to defy him, no one that is except her.
Her, why could he not stop think about that wench? She was cruel, dishonest and greedy. She was cold and thought only of herself and worse took great pleasure in other people's suffering. God she was perfect. From the way her long, onyx hair would sway in even the slightest breeze. To the cold laugh she made whenever she was doing something cruel or a twist of fate had ruined somebody's life. Sometimes both caused by her. Maybe that was why he was so drawn to her. The object of all his desire, Kikyo.
She didn't know it yet but soon she would be his, but before he could claim her he had to get rid of her current infatuation with the youkai Sesshomaru. All he had to do to take the proud youkai down was find his weakness, something that wasn't easy to accomplish. Sesshomaru kept himself well guarded against things that could be his down fall. He never let someone or something get to close to him. For it could and most likely would be seen as a weakness and used against him. Unfortunately he had let someone get through his cold barriers. Now, after years of searching Naraku had found his weakness. Ironic it happened to be the very girl Kikyo had an obsession with beating upon. He felt sorry for the girl she had no idea what she had gotten herself into. But the pity didn't stretch far enough to some how get around hurting her. She was the key to getting what he desired. And there was no room in his cold twisted heart such a sympathetic emotion. That was reserved for humans not for demons such as himself. Hell would freeze over before he would be accused of such a moral act.
"Naraku, where are you? Come out right now!"
How he craved to wrap his hands around the neck and squeeze until she had no life in her body. The girl who would dare call his name out like that. Demand something of him; one day she would learn her place and who was in charge. His hands itched to do it but something told him that if he were to almost kill her she would never bend to her will. And that was something even he wasn't willing to sacrifice.
Sighing he swallowed the urge to wrap his hands around her neck. In an attempt to calm down he reminded himself just who he was. He was the great Naraku, he had fought demons 3 000 times stronger than this girl. If he could do that, then he could put up with her for just a little bit longer.
Stepping out of the none existent shadows Naraku walked onto the stone path that ran through the park. In doing so he came face to face with the object he both hated yet lusted after, Kikyo. God she was beautiful her onyx hair swayed in the breeze just to rest on her shoulders once it stopped. She looked almost like an angel, almost but not quite. Even though she carried her self with the grace and the prestige of angel her eyes told a different story. They were cold and held no warmth. No regret for any wrongs she had committed they had been replaced by hatred and deceit. No she wasn't an angel, she was a fallen angel a once pure maiden tainted by the world around her. To Naraku that made her all the more desirable. He now knew that he must have her, the angel that had fallen of the path of purity and into the darkness. The need to get rid of that damned Sesshomaru grew even more intense.
He had no doubt in his mind now Sesshomaru must die.
(A/N Ok I could have stopped there but not only would it be way to short and you guys would kill me but I know I could do way better. But you must admit that's a pretty good ending!)
"You brought him," the words were cold and sharp meant to be a warning. One that many people were not so lucky to receive.
"Of course I did," snapped Kikyo. She either completely ignored the graciously given warning or didn't even know she had been given one. Either way didn't matter because she just continued on, either completely ignorant or completely stupid. "Now stop playing your stupid mind games and tell me why you called us here."
Turning, Naraku faced the man whom he had Kikyo bring before him. Completely ignoring her question he walked forward so he stood no more than 5 inches away from the mans face. "You want Kagome Higarashi don't you," it was more of a demand than a question. Naraku did not ask questions he didn't need to.
Muso couldn't stop the cold chill that race down his spine. When this Naraku spoke his voice was so cold that he was surprised that it didn't freeze the air between them. What scared him was the knowledge that the air should have frozen. Even though it was spring the nights were sometimes cold. And even though all the snow had melted there were still days like today when winter overcame spring to reminded everyone that humanity had not escaped his icy, cold grasp yet. Whenever he or Kikyo spoke a puff of oxygen froze as soon as it hit the cold air. Yet this man's breath did not. It was like his lungs were frozen just like his heart. His voice held no warmth. Yet despite this knowledge Muso was too proud to be intimidated by Naraku. Rolling back his shoulder's he brought himself up to is full height of a daunting 6 ft. about the same height as Naraku and spoke boldly. "I have no need to want her she is already mine."
"Ku ku ku," chuckled Naraku. This human was truly amusing he actually thought himself worthy of Naraku. This was perfect not only was he extremely possessive of Kagome, he was extremely stupid and egotistic. This meant that he would be easily manipulated to suit his needs. "You think that by telling her that you owned her would mean anything? She has changed even that you should be able to see. She won't fall for you that easily, I doubt that she would ever would have even before the change took place. Also you forget about Sesshomaru, I sure he would be insulted to know that you forgot about him that easily. Do you not think that he also harbours feelings for the girl? You've already lost Muso. A pity that you didn't even get to play the game and already you lost." As he said this Muso's cheeks began to redden. Obviously he was hitting a nerve, anxious to see a reaction from the enraged human Naraku kept pressing further. "As we speak your woman and only romantic rival are alone in a cave. Both have confessed their love for each other, your to late."
The look on both Kikyo and Muso's face was golden. Muso's jaw dropped as the blood rushed to his face turning it bright red as his anger rose. Kikyo who hid all her true feelings behind a protective mask, the one who like Sesshomaru never showed emotion cracked. The mask quickly forgotten as intense anger danced in her eyes, it was a welcome change to the usual icy ones she usually had. Seeing as now they danced with a fiery rage at the new found out knowledge. Blood was soon dripping from her closed fists; she had clenched them so tightly that she had punctured through the tough skin that covered her palms. Unfortunately for Naraku Kikyo soon had control over her emotions and was staring blankly at nothing in front of her. 'Pity,' thought Naraku.
"That BITCH!" screamed Muso in anger. Obviously he was not as good at keeping his wild emotions in check, unlike the present company. 'But then again how much could one expect from an idiot?' Naraku thought. "I told her she was not to talk to anyone! Especially that bastard, she will pay dearly for this."
Naraku had been waiting for this. Muso had just unwittingly given him the chance to take advantage of his anger, and in the end succeed with his already well thought out plan. "Why not make them both pay? Sesshomaru is the only thing standing in your way and with him gone you could collect what you so rightly deserve. Teach Kagome who is in charge and remove your only rival in the process." The words left a bitter taste in Naraku's mouth. He felt like he had been sucking up to the pathetic human. Feeding his already over enlarged ego. It sickened him to think that he had made the human feel superior in any way.
Muso's eyes narrowed. He was suspicious about this Naraku character that had just proposed such a vile act. Nobody could beat Sesshomaru, so revenge seemed impossible. "Yes, but how do you propose I do this? I cannot defeat Sesshomaru he could defeat me as if I were a fly." Muso rubbed his still tender neck thinking of the events that had occurred earlier that day.
Flashback
"I don't want her all high and mighty…" Muso didn't get a chance to continue before he felt a strong hand enclose around his neck.
"What did you do to Kagome," demanded a pissed off Sesshomaru as he began to lift Muso off his feet.
Everything that had happened next had been a blur to him. The next thing he was able to remember clearly was being thrown into a locker and Sesshomaru running out of the school in search of that stupid girl.
End Flashback
Muso had been enraged and still was. Sesshomaru had embarrassed him beyond belief. For the rest of the day where ever he went people would always call out after him.
"Oooh watch out Muso! Sesshomaru's comin' for you!' and 'Your not so tough now eh' Muso!' (a/n yes I proudly say eh because I AM CANADAIN)
It was like that all day. The vicious reputation he had worked so hard to earn was ruined so easily. All because of that wench and damned Sesshomaru. Renewed anger flowed through his veins. 'If it's the last thing I do Kagome will be mine!' he swore. Before he was snapped back to reality by Naraku's cold voice.
"I can help you take care of Sesshomaru. Work with me and I promise you Kagome and you revenge on Sesshomaru." The words were smooth and almost hypnotic.
Muso didn't even think about it. He knew what he wanted and here was someone promisinghim what he most desired. "Of course I'll help."
Those words could have sealed his fate had Naraku chosen take them. But he didn't, instead he said something that nobody could ever believed he was capable of saying. "Don't be so hasty. Once you agree there is no backing out. Think about it and return here a week from today. Have your answer ready."
"Fine, what ever you say." With those final words and a cocky smile Muso did an abrupt 180 turn and walked down the darkened path. Walking with a gate that screamed over confidence an ego that would someday be his undoing Muso had soon left both the park and it's 2 inhabitants behind.
"Naraku why did you do that," Kikyo's words were quiet and cold obviously she had understood the complexity of the situation enough to take it seriously. Naraku did not just let someone go like that he had already had Muso's word and could have held him to it. Yet he chose to let the fool go and insist that he think it over. This puzzled her greatly it was too…kind for the corrupt demon. He had given Muso a way out.
"Even if he agrees to help us what use will it be if he chickens out half way through? He would ruin everything and put both the mission and us in jeopardy we need his full determination on this," Naraku turned his body so that he was facing the dark priestess. "We cannot afford to have any weak ends when going after Sesshomaru. It will spell our undoing."
"And what if he chooses to drop out? He could sell us out before we even get a chance. We could lose everything!" Kikyo all but screamed her retort.
"If he chooses to go against us than we will just have to 'get rid' of him. If he wishes to live than he will join, if not than he will just have to die." Naraku's voice held no emotion. He didn't care if he killed or not, this was work and he had a goal to obtain. He would rid the world of Sesshomaru, if he had to kill a few people in the process then so be it. He held no remorse, no guilt. If killing meant succeeding than he would just have to kill. Not to mention the added fact that taking someone else's life was extremely entertaining to him.
Turning his back to the dark priestess Naraku began to walk away. "Come next week, we have much to discuses and planning to do," with those final bone chilling words Naraku simply vanished into the darkness of the night.
Turning on her heel Kikyo began her long walk home. "Soon Kagome, soon you will be gone and Sesshomaru will be mine,"
7 days later with Sesshomaru and Kagome
"Try again Kagome. Remember relax, let your power flow," explained an exasperated Sesshomaru. Rubbing his temple with his two fore fingers in small circles. In a attempt to halt the impending migraine.
For the past week Kagome had been practicing the same thing over and over again.
Kagome closed her eyes and took in a deep breath. Letting it out slowly as she felt the familiar warmth that came whenever her powers came to the surface. The power was constantly moving just beneath her skin, a wave of power held back only by sheer will. Concentrating she began to direct the flow of power towards the tips of her fingers. After 5 minutes of work she could feel the warmth reach her fingertips and remain their, its constant movement ceasing. Soon the warmth travelled into her palm, as each new part of her hand became charged with power the tenser Kagome became. Soon she was taking quick and shallow breaths as she began to panic. She could feel the power building, pushing against her will as it tried to get free. An invisible wall the only thing keeping it in check.
"Relax Kagome, if you continue to panic your going to lose it," 'again,' Sesshomaru added in his mind. This had been happening every single time Kagome tried this. She would be doing so well but as soon as the power began to build she would panic. Causing her to lose control and she would fire a ring of purity. Forcing Sesshomaru to run and jump high into a tree and wait for at least 10 minutes before the aura of the power would die down enough for him to safely approach Kagome once more. But in most cases she would panic and draw the power back into her body and having to start back at the beginning.
"I…can't..do it…" panted Kagome. She couldn't continue she had already been unable to control it twice already. Both times Sesshomaru had been able to escape the ring of power that had erupted, but it was only a matter of time before he was caught off guard and instantly purified. She couldn't do it the fear of losing him over came the urge and need to use the powers she had been 'blessed' with. A silent tear ran down her cheek as she opened her eyes. Immediately the gathered power went back to normal. Once again flowing just beneath her skin, a cruel trick to hide the immense power it held.
Falling to her hands and knees Kagome hung her head in shame. "I'm sorry I just can't do it. Why don't we just stop this it's foolish to think I can do it," she said in defeat. She had been trying for the past 7 days yet she had gained no ground. She felt so helpless and pathetic if she was supposed to have this great immense power why could she not use it? Why was she blessed with this if it meant almost killing the one she loved? Was it a cruel joke played by fate? She wouldn't put it past fate; he had an obsession in making her suffer.
Bending down in front of her Sesshomaru gently cupped her chin with his hand. Tilting her head up so that she was forced to once again look into his eyes. It pained him so much to see those beautiful brown orbs showing such defeat. He knew she had been putting everything she had into the training. But it didn't matter how much she tried, if her whole being was not in it she was doomed to fail. It hurt him so much as he thought about what had caused her hesitance. She had no confidence I herself and because of that reason she was failing. Sesshomaru once again caught himself thinking about what it might be like had she not been tortured her whole life. If only her spirit had not been shattered she would not be failing at something she was desperately trying to succeed in.
"Kagome I know your trying but your power relies on all the will that you posses it's part of your instinct. If you are uncertain than your power will read into in and become uneasy itself. It's not your enemy but it does hold a mind of it's own, which is only to protect you. When you start to direct your power your forcing it to go against this and so it relies on your confidence for reassurance that it's ok to obey. It is a give and take thing you must give your assurance that you want this and in return it will listen. You know that it is it's own being you've seen Shito your self. You must have confidence in yourself if you don't then Shito will have none in you. You were able to do it before when you stopped it from breaking free when it wanted to. You were unconscious a yet by sheer will alone you were able to keep your powers with in your self. Kagome I know you can do it. I believe in you now you just have to believe in you."
"All my life I've been told the same things over and over," she whispered and tears began to well up in her eyes. " 'Kagome your worthless you don't deserve to be alive.' 'Nobody likes you Kagome nobody cares what you do. Just stop being so selfish and do the world a favour GO DIE!' No matter how much I tried to change or how often I told them I was sorry. That I didn't mean to be such a failure and that I was really trying my best to meet their impossible standards, it didn't matter. They would accuse me of either lying or not trying hard enough and so they would beat me harder. I realise now that it didn't matter what I said to them. To them I was worthless and so my words were just that worthless. Back then I really thought I was, I began to believe them. Eventually I stopped trying to defend myself I gave up. But now…"
Kagome couldn't stop the tears from falling. They weren't tears of sorrow or tears of joy. They were tears of relief. Relief that somebody finally did believe in her. To him she wasn't worth less, to him she was worth everything. He had accepted that she couldn't do it. Didn't say that she was lying or not trying hard enough. He believed that her efforts to succeed were genuine. To him she wasn't a mistake; to him she had every right to be on this earth. Hell he had kept her here when she had no will to stay. It was thanks to Sesshomaru that she knew that she wasn't worthless. She was Kagome Higarashi and she had every right to be on this earth.
"Now I can't help but think how wrong they really are. I know I'm not perfect and that I'm far from it. I know that there are many things that I have to atone for. Things that I never before thought I could atone for but now. Now I really do think I can. I think I can make my existence mean something. And know that some of the things that I am to atone for are things that no human being can make up for. I can't make it up to humanity every time I make a mistake. I can only try and learn from it and not make the mistake again. Just having that knowledge brings me so much peace and relief and I would have never realised it had it not been for you Sesshomaru. You showed me that I can make mistakes and not have to worry about making up for them every single time. Just knowing that you're here for me and that you believe in me even when I could not believe in my self. Having someone help me stand when I could not. It means more to me than anything in the world. Because of you I know that I'm not a burden on this world. Now I know just how wrong everyone was about me. Now I have a reason to continue on, because of you I have finally found my reason to live. And that to me means more than you could ever imagine. To me it means life,"
Sesshomaru felt his heart ripping in two. Had she been carrying this burden al her life? H couldn't imagine living with the supposed knowledge that you meant nothing to anyone. The knowledge that the who world wanted you dead. That you had to atone for every single mistake you ever made and some that you didn't even make. Kagome had been forced to believe that she had no right to be here and so that every mistake she made was selfish. Like she was to be grateful just to be alive. It was a life that nobody deserved to be locked into.
Pulling her into a hug Sesshomaru held her tightly against his chest ignoring how his shirt was getting wet because of her tears. Softly he whispered in her ear. "I have only one wish in life Kagome. I wish I could make all the pain of your past stop haunting you. I wish that I had helped you sooner. Maybe if I had then I could have been able to stop some of the damage. Now all I can do is try and help heal you. I only prey that it's not to little to late."
Both stayed silent after that. Nothing more needed to be said at the moment. There was nothing that could have been said. The scares of the past may haunt your present but with love and care, they can fade in the future.
Pulling away from Sesshomaru's embrace Kagome stood up. "I know that it might not work but I'm going to try once more. If not for you then for myself,"
Rising Sesshomaru walked a couple feet away and waited. With baited breath he watched as Kagome readied her self. There was no more that he could do, nothing he could say now. It was up to Kagome and only Kagome.
Taking a deep breath Kagome closed her eyes and once again began the now very familiar sequence. Feeling her power flowing beneath her skin she began to direct its flow towards her fingertips. But it was different this time because this time when it reached her its destination not only did it stop but it became almost solid. Ignoring the new sensation she concentrated on controlling her emotions. It got harder and harder as the power built up but before she could question herself she shoved all thoughts out of her head. Once her mind went blank she felt strangely calm almost at ease. And as if reacting to her sudden calmness her power to calmed down, and became solid.
It took 5 minutes before Kagome finally worked up the courage to open her eyes. Afraid that is she did that it would launch out in all directions. Counting down she braced her self. 3, 2,1. Before she could take it back her eyes shot open. And to her great relief her power didn't launch out of control like it had before. Instead it stayed in her hand as If waiting patiently to be released. Staring at her hand she was mildly shocked to see that it glowed a faint pink.
Looking up at Sesshomaru her eyes were opened wide with shock and happiness. "I..I did it! I'm doing it!" She practically screamed with joy. She was about to run and hug him but her hand pulsed from within just in time. Reminding her just what would happen to her beloved Sesshomaru if she were to hug him right now.
Then just as before the sensation vanished as she felt her powers return once more to her body. Her hand glowing a bright pink before fading and then returning to normal.
Looking down at her hand curiously Kagome half asked half pouted. "What happened?" Things had been going so well. Why had it had it just left? A first she thought that it had been a fluke, but quickly dismissed the thought. If it had been a fluke than it would have either escaped her grasp and launched its ring of purity or just simple returned to her body a lot quicker than it had. It was almost like it just kinda faded back within her. Looking up at Sesshomaru her eyes silently asked again
Chuckling slightly Sesshomaru walked towards the confused miko. She had so much left to learn. "You didn't need to use the power and because you had no need for it anymore it returned to protecting you. Remember it's acutely aware of every thought and feeling that you have. For a second you didn't want the power out so it went back in. don't worry you did a perfect I don't think You could have done it any better even if you had done it a hundred times before. I'm proud of you. You over came your uncertainty and look what you were able to accomplish. That in itself is something to be proud of."
Kagome was so happy she launched herself into Sesshomaru's waiting arms. All the while the words 'I'm proud of you' kept echoing through her mind. She had done it after all the tears and pain she had finally found it. She had found her confidence and had been able to overcome all doubt she had within herself. "Thank you. I owe you more then I could ever repay."
Looking into his eyes Kagome completely lost all train of thought. She had more that she had wanted to say. But as soon as their eyes made contact all thought became impossible. All she knew was the intense feeling she felt towards him. She knew that truly she was in love with him. It was a love that didn't just encase her heart. It encased her entire soul with a feeling of pure undying love.
Sesshomaru was slightly startled. Kagome was looking into his eyes. (which wasn't what had startled him they often locked eyes). But what had startled him was the pure undying love that shined with in their chocolate depths. He closed his eyes for a moment. When he opened them again he found the love still shinning with in them unfaltering and pure. It was so pure and intense that he couldn't help but be drawn in.
If somebody had told him a couple of months earlier that he would fall in love with a miko he would have either killed them or injured them significantly if he was in a good mood. But here he was hopelessly in love with a miko and he wouldn't have it any other way. Kagome was everything to him she was the reason he got up in the morning, the reason the sun seemed to be shining some much brighter lately. She was his reason to live.
"Well I do believe you can start to repay me now." Before Kagome could ask Sesshomaru's' lips had captured hers in a tender kiss. It wasn't one that they had ever shared before; this was a kiss that held the undying love they felt towards each other. A love that would never end and only grow stronger over time if it was even possible.
Soon the kiss turned from sweet to savage. Yet it still held the tenderness only to lovers could share.
(A/N Ok I could end it right here and that would be perfect but I promised longer chapter's for you guys. And so I will give you longer chapters but I just wanna point out my incredible dedication)
With Kikyo and Naraku
"Do you think he'll come?" asked Kikyo impatiently. She was not in a good mood to say the least. She had been standing in the park for 15 bloody minutes waiting for Muso to show up. She hope that he did she didn't want to have to kill him. Not because she wished not to kill but because it would mean finding some one else to help them. She held no remorse for those who died by her hand. Her conscious held no quilt. In her mind it was simple. In this world only the strong survived. She held no pity for the ones who were to weak to defend themselves as far as she was concerned weak people were a waste of space.
A small breeze made it's way through the park. Carrying with it the scent of cherry blossoms and pine. It was a putrid smell to Naraku; he hated spring the smell of new life made him want to vomit. What was worse spring seemed to make everyone overly happy. The fact that spring apparently symbolized life and hope made every happy. To Naraku it just proved humanities pathetic need for hope. A weak human emotion.
A smirk graced his thin lips. For once the scent the wind brought wasn't all bad. A scent of dirt and sweat assaulted his very sensitive nose. Muso was on his way. "I do believe that our pawn has arrived,"
Turning her head sharply in the same direction as he had Kikyo waited to see. Impatiently she loudly tapped her foot on the ground to Naraku's great annoyance.
It took at least 10 minutes before she could see the vague outline of Muso's large body as we walked towards them. It was a quarter moon tonight, the slight light the moon cast allowed her to see farther than before. "It's about time," she muttered haughtily.
It took another 5 minutes before Muso finally arrived at the pair. A cocky smirk once again plastered onto his face showing his perfectly straight white teeth. 'Its funny how someone so clean can smell so dirty.' Thought Naraku.
"Let's do this. The sooner it's over the sooner I get what's rightfully mine," said Muso, as he sealed his fate.
A cruel smirk found it's way onto Naraku's lips once again. Immediately making Muso's disappear and for a fleeting moment all he could think was. 'What have I gotten myself into?'
OMG I'M DONE! It took me sooo long to type out this chapter I wanted to make it really good. I hope I didn't let you guys down. Any way's u know what I realised I thought I was soooo bad with my updating then I look and I've writing 16 chapters and my story is only like 6 months old. That's not to bad seeing as I'm writing 3 stories plus my poems. I'm happy and I bet you guys are happy I updated. But now u gotta wait again. Lol well don't worry I'll probably start to update with in 2 weeks. look for my updates. Also I'm thinking of having someone read my stories before I update to make sure I caught all mistakes. I hate editing I just can't bring my self to read them again. So if u want to be the pre-reader please tell me in your review. LOVE YOU ALL AND PLEASE PEASE R&R! p.s IT'S 16 BLOODY PAGES AND 7000 WORDS YOU BETTER BE HAPPY! Lol
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