I'm so glad you all reviewed for my story all. I really did enjoy writing
that chapter. I did a pretty good job! I am done with two of my stories, so
now I'm only working on 3, so I'm so happy about that!
Juno- Are they really that bad? I don't make that big of spelling errors do I? I know I make some.I'll try to be more careful, I'm just too lazy to go back and reload it.
Thanks for the reviews all
I don't own Dragonball Z. But I do own Vanlash, Weller, Rexter, Tomack, blue men, little girl, and the princess. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hidden Bars
Slave
4 years later.
"Darn!"
Weller said, as he was in the space ship, pushing buttons. On the screen there was a battle going on. Tomack, Rexter, and Vanlash watched as someone was fighting a blue man.
On the battle field, stood our hero, Gohan. He now is a grown teen. He wears the clothes like Vanlash, but gray. He is taller then Weller and Rexter, and to Tomack's nose. His hair grew longer, to his shoulders now, with two strands over one eye, and one by his ear. He looks and is a lot stronger. On his left inner elbow (a/n can someone tell me the name of that please?) is a scar, the first one he ever got. Then a scar above his left eyebrow. Then a scar on the back of his head, but his hair is too long to see it. Then one on his right wrist. Gohan's face was stern and anger. But his eyes, his eyes told a different story. His eyes told a story of pain, anger, and deep sadness.
The blue man fired a energy beam at Gohan.
Inside the ship, Weller pushed a yellow button, followed by a square.
Gohan blocked the energy beam and fired one of his own. The blue man couldn't block it, and died. Tears begin to fall from Gohan's eyes, but he was powerless to do anything about it. Just then about 50 of blue men came flying to Gohan. Gohan whipped a tear and got into fighting stance.
"There is too many of them. Tomack come with me."
Vanlash ran to the door to get out, when Rexter ran in front of him.
"No way I'm staying out of this battle. Not again Vanlash, I'm stronger then Tomack to begin with it."
Vanlash looked over at Tomack.
"Help Weller."
Vanlash and Rexter got out of the ship and into the battle.
"Should we turn him into gold?"
Weller asked as he had his hand on a star button. Tomack shook his head.
"Why not."
Weller pushed the star button.
In the battle, tons of blue man were fighting Gohan. It was pretty easy for him. Just then he felt himself power going up.
"Not again!"
Gohan screamed as he turned into a super saiyan. The blue men backed off in fear. Vanlash and Rexter still kept on fighting their blue men.
Gohan's eyes were never green when he transformed under the power of the collar. They were pure white, Gohan hair threw down to his armpits. When Gohan was under his super saiyan powers, there was no need to control him to fight.
Gohan blasted about 20 different beams, causing each one to go into a blue man's body. Causing them to die. Gohan stared at the people he killed, and bowed his head.
*I'm sorry, forgive me. *
Gohan closed his eyes as he landed, and saw a female wearing a bracelet. He grabbed it and put it in a pocket.
Vanlash and Rexter have already killed the remaining 30 blue men, and walked around to find survivors. Vanlash and Rexter looked at each other, smiling.
"Gohan."
Gohan turned around with his white eyes. Vanlash and Rexter dragged a little blue girl to him.
"Kill her."
"What?"
Gohan yelled as he looked down at the girl. She had to have a broken leg and her forehead was bleeding. Rexter bent down and ripped some of the little girl's red hair out. The girl yelled in pain, Rexter smiled, as half of her hair was gone.
"Kill her."
Rexter threw the hair into Gohan's face, but before it hit him, his energy destroyed it. Gohan didn't move, staring at Vanlash with his white eyes.
"If you don't kill her now, I'll give her a painful death."
The little girl started to cry as she tried to protect herself. Vanlash looked down at the little girl.
"Don't worry child, it won't hurt only for a minute. That is unless I kill you."
"Burn!"
Gohan yelled as the little girl tighten up. Vanlash shook his head as he stepped on the little girl. Making her fall to her stomach, yelling. Then Vanlash kicked her in the face. Casing her to bleed. Gohan sat there, watching in horror as Vanlash was hurting the little girl. He looked over at Rexter, who was just laughing. Gohan closed his eyes, as he pointed his finger at the back of the girl's neck, and shot a small energy blast threw her neck.
"About time brat."
Gohan lowed his arm as he couldn't take his eyes off the girl. Vanlash and Rexter were walking back into the ship. Gohan started behind, staring down at the little girl before him.
"Not again."
Gohan whispered as tears fell from his white eyes. Just then a energy rope tied around his collar and made him fall over backwards. As he was falling, he defused out of super saiyan. Vanlash and Rexter were talking as Gohan was hitting every rock in their path. Gohan sat there, trying once again to rip the collar off his neck. However, it hurt, two little needles were thew his neck, as big as a dime. The needles stab into him when they control him. After the first time Vanlash put the collar on him, he bleed for hours, but during the years, it would only hurt him. As Gohan tired to pull it off, he would get a shock in his neck, causing it to hurt him even more.
"Well it looks like we won yet again."
Vanlash smiled as Gohan started standing up. Weller went to get something to drink, as the other three talked. Vanlash looked at Gohan, his back was turn to them as he looked up at the stars (the ship had a sky roof). Vanlash pulled on the rope causing Gohan to lose his thoughts and turn to Vanlash.
"Go to your cambers, well get you when we need you."
Tomack walked over to the main computer and pushed a blue button. Causing the needles in Gohan's neck to go back into the collar. Every time that happen to him, his eyes will bug out. Gohan didn't do anything back as he walked down the hall and into his room. Before he was able to leave though, Weller blasted Gohan in the back. Gohan yelled as he fell over.
"You guys get all the fun with the kid. I had to do something."
Vanlash and his crew started laughing as Gohan stood up, and left. As Gohan walked thew the dark halls of the space ship, he tired to fight his tears. Trying not to scream his lungs out, but he couldn't. So he whipped his tears away and opened the door into his room.
His room had a pillow, a blanket, and a closest with clothes. The room was painted black, with a little light by the door. Gohan turned on his light as he walked over to his pillow and lifted it up. There was a hole filled with all kinds of different things. Gohan took the bracelet from his pocket and put it into the hole. Gohan walked over to a wall and looked out the little window he had. As the space ship was flying threw space. Gohan stared out the window and closed his eyes. He was tired of showing his weakness. He hated crying, but most nights he couldn't help it. As flashback flew threw his brain.
Flashbacks of the good days, before he was taken. Flashback of Gohan runny threw the woods freely. Flashbacks of going fishing with Krillin. Flashbacks of looking threw some of Master Roshi's dirty magazines when know one was looking. Flashbacks of training with Vegeta. Flashbacks of meditating with Piccolo. Flashbacks of looking at Goten the first time he was born. Flashbacks of helping his mother around the house. Flashbacks of playing with his father.
Oh how he missed them, how he wished he could be with his family and friends. He even missed the fights he had with his mother. Anything on Earth was better then where he was. Gohan's body tighten as he pulled his knees and laid his head down on his knees. He held on to himself like his life depended on it. Gohan closed his eyes, as he tried to go to sleep.
***************Time to Dream*****************
"Daddy, stay home!"
A little boy yelled as he pulled on an older man's arm.
"But I can't Goten."
Goten had puppy dog eyes as he looked up at his father. Goku (well I think you figured that part already) looked up at the window, thinking about something. And looked down at Goten.
"Alright Goten, I'll stay home."
"Yah!"
Goten screamed as he jumped into his father's arms. Goku smiled as he threw his son up and down. Goten giggled as he looked over at a picture hanging on the wall. Goku looked over to where Goten was looking at. It was a picture before the Cell Games. Goten flew off to the picture.
"That's you, daddy."
Goten yelled as he pointed to Goku, with his arm around Chi-chi.
"And mommy."
He screamed as he pointed to the picture of Chi-chi, with her arm around Goku.
"And this is.. Go.h.Gohan!"
Goten screamed as he pointed to a 11 year old Gohan, with his hands down to the side and his parents' hand both on different sides of his shoulder. Gohan smiled, as Goku did his son grin, and Chi-chi was laughing a little. Goku walked over to Goten as he pointed to Gohan.
"He's your big brother."
Goten looked at the picture and shook his head.
"Mommy tells me about him, while your gone. Is he the reason why you leave?"
Goku turned over to look at Goten. Goten tilted his head to one side.
"Well I go to look for him, son."
"Well I don't want you too?"
"Why not?"
"Because you're my daddy too! It's not fair that your not home."
****************Better end it now**************
Gohan lifted his head as he blinked a couple of times. That dream was his family. Gohan shook his head, disbelieving what was in it.
*Dad wouldn't be looking for me, why would he when he finds out that I'm. *
Gohan cracked his neck, even saying he word in his mind made his skin craw.
A slave, a slave was what Gohan was. And in the East Side of the universe aloud slaves in them. He wasn't any old kind of slave, he was the kind that killed, that was just a play thing to his owners, the kind that got controlled.. Gohan was slave number 6798321 and the number was on his collar, rather then his skin for some reason.
Gohan always believed that the reason the number wasn't on his skin, was because he wasn't going to be a slave for the rest of his life. He believed that one day he would break free from Vanlash and be able to live again. Even if that happen, would he be able to live again?
Gohan couldn't even handle himself while being free. He soul was ruined from all this fighting. And yet even when he's not on Earth, he's still fighting. His whole life has been about fighting. Gohan always though that fighting was a way for people to settle their disagreements other then using their brains. But sometimes people were too brainless to figure that out. Like Cell.Like Vanlash..Like the rest of them.
But Gohan always figured, since his father fights, he must always be fighting with him. It always made him sick, fighting never did anything. It only took away.
The door open as Gohan stood up, brushing all his hair out of his face. As much as he could anyway.
"Where going to land, but we're not here to fight."
Gohan shook his head, his guess that Vanlash planning on selling a planet or something. Vanlash made an energy rope around Gohan collar and pulled him along. Gohan signed, looking down at the ground. Vanlash as the rest of the crew walked out of the space ship.
Gohan couldn't believe his eyes. He had never seen a planet like this. The sky was purple, with white clouds threw them, and two blue suns. The gravity was heavier, but he been in worst. There were waterfalls and big green fields across the world. Gohan looked up at were Vanlash was taking him. They were going into a big city, with buildings and people around it. Gohan slightly smiled, he was happy that he didn't have to destroy this planet. There was something about it that made him smile.
Once they made it around the city, Gohan eyes widen, there were so many people in this city. All different kinds of people. Races he had seen, and some he haven't. Gohan looked up as things were flying in the air, as people were buying things, and friends and family talking to one other. Without Gohan knowing, someone ran into him. Causing Gohan and the other person to fall. Gohan looked over at the person that ran into him.
"I'm so sorry."
She said as she got up, she had to be a couple of years younger then him. She was at his chest. She had long golden hair that was curly. She was skinny, about right for her age. She had brown eyes, and reddish lips. She was a pretty good looker for the age she was.
"It's alright don't worry about it."
Gohan looked down at her at a ruby she had, it was in her skin. It was purple. It was a little bit away from her shoulder. It had to be as big as 2 quarters. He quickly looked away from her ruby and looked back at her.
"What's the hold up?"
The girl and Gohan turned around, seeing Vanlash pulling the energy rope that was on Gohan's collar.
"Vanlash?"
The girl asked as Vanlash turned around. He smiled and bowed.
"Good day Princess."
The girl crossed her arms.
"Why have you come, planning to talk to my father one again?"
"Yes I am."
"Trying to snake him like the last time?"
"Why you little."
The princess put up her hand.
"Well if you are to try to sell yourself to his round table then you mustn't touch his child."
Vanlash turned red, Gohan looked over at Vanlash, and then at the princess, who hands were on her hips.
"I'll go with you, I should be going home as well."
The princess lead out her hand, waiting for Vanlash to walk ahead of her. He stooped by her, as his crew followed. The princesses followed behind them. Gohan stood there blinking, not really sure what happen. Even Rexter couldn't control Vanlash the way this girl did. As so as Gohan felt his neck being tugged, he followed the group. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well what was that dream that Gohan had? Why is Vanlash at this new planet. And How can this Princess control Vanlash so easily? Why must I ask all these questions?
Well I hope you enjoyed that chapter, and I know it's not as long as my last chapter. But that was a important chapter. So it had to be long.
Hope you enjoyed, and review
~*~super-saiyan-monkey~*~
Juno- Are they really that bad? I don't make that big of spelling errors do I? I know I make some.I'll try to be more careful, I'm just too lazy to go back and reload it.
Thanks for the reviews all
I don't own Dragonball Z. But I do own Vanlash, Weller, Rexter, Tomack, blue men, little girl, and the princess. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hidden Bars
Slave
4 years later.
"Darn!"
Weller said, as he was in the space ship, pushing buttons. On the screen there was a battle going on. Tomack, Rexter, and Vanlash watched as someone was fighting a blue man.
On the battle field, stood our hero, Gohan. He now is a grown teen. He wears the clothes like Vanlash, but gray. He is taller then Weller and Rexter, and to Tomack's nose. His hair grew longer, to his shoulders now, with two strands over one eye, and one by his ear. He looks and is a lot stronger. On his left inner elbow (a/n can someone tell me the name of that please?) is a scar, the first one he ever got. Then a scar above his left eyebrow. Then a scar on the back of his head, but his hair is too long to see it. Then one on his right wrist. Gohan's face was stern and anger. But his eyes, his eyes told a different story. His eyes told a story of pain, anger, and deep sadness.
The blue man fired a energy beam at Gohan.
Inside the ship, Weller pushed a yellow button, followed by a square.
Gohan blocked the energy beam and fired one of his own. The blue man couldn't block it, and died. Tears begin to fall from Gohan's eyes, but he was powerless to do anything about it. Just then about 50 of blue men came flying to Gohan. Gohan whipped a tear and got into fighting stance.
"There is too many of them. Tomack come with me."
Vanlash ran to the door to get out, when Rexter ran in front of him.
"No way I'm staying out of this battle. Not again Vanlash, I'm stronger then Tomack to begin with it."
Vanlash looked over at Tomack.
"Help Weller."
Vanlash and Rexter got out of the ship and into the battle.
"Should we turn him into gold?"
Weller asked as he had his hand on a star button. Tomack shook his head.
"Why not."
Weller pushed the star button.
In the battle, tons of blue man were fighting Gohan. It was pretty easy for him. Just then he felt himself power going up.
"Not again!"
Gohan screamed as he turned into a super saiyan. The blue men backed off in fear. Vanlash and Rexter still kept on fighting their blue men.
Gohan's eyes were never green when he transformed under the power of the collar. They were pure white, Gohan hair threw down to his armpits. When Gohan was under his super saiyan powers, there was no need to control him to fight.
Gohan blasted about 20 different beams, causing each one to go into a blue man's body. Causing them to die. Gohan stared at the people he killed, and bowed his head.
*I'm sorry, forgive me. *
Gohan closed his eyes as he landed, and saw a female wearing a bracelet. He grabbed it and put it in a pocket.
Vanlash and Rexter have already killed the remaining 30 blue men, and walked around to find survivors. Vanlash and Rexter looked at each other, smiling.
"Gohan."
Gohan turned around with his white eyes. Vanlash and Rexter dragged a little blue girl to him.
"Kill her."
"What?"
Gohan yelled as he looked down at the girl. She had to have a broken leg and her forehead was bleeding. Rexter bent down and ripped some of the little girl's red hair out. The girl yelled in pain, Rexter smiled, as half of her hair was gone.
"Kill her."
Rexter threw the hair into Gohan's face, but before it hit him, his energy destroyed it. Gohan didn't move, staring at Vanlash with his white eyes.
"If you don't kill her now, I'll give her a painful death."
The little girl started to cry as she tried to protect herself. Vanlash looked down at the little girl.
"Don't worry child, it won't hurt only for a minute. That is unless I kill you."
"Burn!"
Gohan yelled as the little girl tighten up. Vanlash shook his head as he stepped on the little girl. Making her fall to her stomach, yelling. Then Vanlash kicked her in the face. Casing her to bleed. Gohan sat there, watching in horror as Vanlash was hurting the little girl. He looked over at Rexter, who was just laughing. Gohan closed his eyes, as he pointed his finger at the back of the girl's neck, and shot a small energy blast threw her neck.
"About time brat."
Gohan lowed his arm as he couldn't take his eyes off the girl. Vanlash and Rexter were walking back into the ship. Gohan started behind, staring down at the little girl before him.
"Not again."
Gohan whispered as tears fell from his white eyes. Just then a energy rope tied around his collar and made him fall over backwards. As he was falling, he defused out of super saiyan. Vanlash and Rexter were talking as Gohan was hitting every rock in their path. Gohan sat there, trying once again to rip the collar off his neck. However, it hurt, two little needles were thew his neck, as big as a dime. The needles stab into him when they control him. After the first time Vanlash put the collar on him, he bleed for hours, but during the years, it would only hurt him. As Gohan tired to pull it off, he would get a shock in his neck, causing it to hurt him even more.
"Well it looks like we won yet again."
Vanlash smiled as Gohan started standing up. Weller went to get something to drink, as the other three talked. Vanlash looked at Gohan, his back was turn to them as he looked up at the stars (the ship had a sky roof). Vanlash pulled on the rope causing Gohan to lose his thoughts and turn to Vanlash.
"Go to your cambers, well get you when we need you."
Tomack walked over to the main computer and pushed a blue button. Causing the needles in Gohan's neck to go back into the collar. Every time that happen to him, his eyes will bug out. Gohan didn't do anything back as he walked down the hall and into his room. Before he was able to leave though, Weller blasted Gohan in the back. Gohan yelled as he fell over.
"You guys get all the fun with the kid. I had to do something."
Vanlash and his crew started laughing as Gohan stood up, and left. As Gohan walked thew the dark halls of the space ship, he tired to fight his tears. Trying not to scream his lungs out, but he couldn't. So he whipped his tears away and opened the door into his room.
His room had a pillow, a blanket, and a closest with clothes. The room was painted black, with a little light by the door. Gohan turned on his light as he walked over to his pillow and lifted it up. There was a hole filled with all kinds of different things. Gohan took the bracelet from his pocket and put it into the hole. Gohan walked over to a wall and looked out the little window he had. As the space ship was flying threw space. Gohan stared out the window and closed his eyes. He was tired of showing his weakness. He hated crying, but most nights he couldn't help it. As flashback flew threw his brain.
Flashbacks of the good days, before he was taken. Flashback of Gohan runny threw the woods freely. Flashbacks of going fishing with Krillin. Flashbacks of looking threw some of Master Roshi's dirty magazines when know one was looking. Flashbacks of training with Vegeta. Flashbacks of meditating with Piccolo. Flashbacks of looking at Goten the first time he was born. Flashbacks of helping his mother around the house. Flashbacks of playing with his father.
Oh how he missed them, how he wished he could be with his family and friends. He even missed the fights he had with his mother. Anything on Earth was better then where he was. Gohan's body tighten as he pulled his knees and laid his head down on his knees. He held on to himself like his life depended on it. Gohan closed his eyes, as he tried to go to sleep.
***************Time to Dream*****************
"Daddy, stay home!"
A little boy yelled as he pulled on an older man's arm.
"But I can't Goten."
Goten had puppy dog eyes as he looked up at his father. Goku (well I think you figured that part already) looked up at the window, thinking about something. And looked down at Goten.
"Alright Goten, I'll stay home."
"Yah!"
Goten screamed as he jumped into his father's arms. Goku smiled as he threw his son up and down. Goten giggled as he looked over at a picture hanging on the wall. Goku looked over to where Goten was looking at. It was a picture before the Cell Games. Goten flew off to the picture.
"That's you, daddy."
Goten yelled as he pointed to Goku, with his arm around Chi-chi.
"And mommy."
He screamed as he pointed to the picture of Chi-chi, with her arm around Goku.
"And this is.. Go.h.Gohan!"
Goten screamed as he pointed to a 11 year old Gohan, with his hands down to the side and his parents' hand both on different sides of his shoulder. Gohan smiled, as Goku did his son grin, and Chi-chi was laughing a little. Goku walked over to Goten as he pointed to Gohan.
"He's your big brother."
Goten looked at the picture and shook his head.
"Mommy tells me about him, while your gone. Is he the reason why you leave?"
Goku turned over to look at Goten. Goten tilted his head to one side.
"Well I go to look for him, son."
"Well I don't want you too?"
"Why not?"
"Because you're my daddy too! It's not fair that your not home."
****************Better end it now**************
Gohan lifted his head as he blinked a couple of times. That dream was his family. Gohan shook his head, disbelieving what was in it.
*Dad wouldn't be looking for me, why would he when he finds out that I'm. *
Gohan cracked his neck, even saying he word in his mind made his skin craw.
A slave, a slave was what Gohan was. And in the East Side of the universe aloud slaves in them. He wasn't any old kind of slave, he was the kind that killed, that was just a play thing to his owners, the kind that got controlled.. Gohan was slave number 6798321 and the number was on his collar, rather then his skin for some reason.
Gohan always believed that the reason the number wasn't on his skin, was because he wasn't going to be a slave for the rest of his life. He believed that one day he would break free from Vanlash and be able to live again. Even if that happen, would he be able to live again?
Gohan couldn't even handle himself while being free. He soul was ruined from all this fighting. And yet even when he's not on Earth, he's still fighting. His whole life has been about fighting. Gohan always though that fighting was a way for people to settle their disagreements other then using their brains. But sometimes people were too brainless to figure that out. Like Cell.Like Vanlash..Like the rest of them.
But Gohan always figured, since his father fights, he must always be fighting with him. It always made him sick, fighting never did anything. It only took away.
The door open as Gohan stood up, brushing all his hair out of his face. As much as he could anyway.
"Where going to land, but we're not here to fight."
Gohan shook his head, his guess that Vanlash planning on selling a planet or something. Vanlash made an energy rope around Gohan collar and pulled him along. Gohan signed, looking down at the ground. Vanlash as the rest of the crew walked out of the space ship.
Gohan couldn't believe his eyes. He had never seen a planet like this. The sky was purple, with white clouds threw them, and two blue suns. The gravity was heavier, but he been in worst. There were waterfalls and big green fields across the world. Gohan looked up at were Vanlash was taking him. They were going into a big city, with buildings and people around it. Gohan slightly smiled, he was happy that he didn't have to destroy this planet. There was something about it that made him smile.
Once they made it around the city, Gohan eyes widen, there were so many people in this city. All different kinds of people. Races he had seen, and some he haven't. Gohan looked up as things were flying in the air, as people were buying things, and friends and family talking to one other. Without Gohan knowing, someone ran into him. Causing Gohan and the other person to fall. Gohan looked over at the person that ran into him.
"I'm so sorry."
She said as she got up, she had to be a couple of years younger then him. She was at his chest. She had long golden hair that was curly. She was skinny, about right for her age. She had brown eyes, and reddish lips. She was a pretty good looker for the age she was.
"It's alright don't worry about it."
Gohan looked down at her at a ruby she had, it was in her skin. It was purple. It was a little bit away from her shoulder. It had to be as big as 2 quarters. He quickly looked away from her ruby and looked back at her.
"What's the hold up?"
The girl and Gohan turned around, seeing Vanlash pulling the energy rope that was on Gohan's collar.
"Vanlash?"
The girl asked as Vanlash turned around. He smiled and bowed.
"Good day Princess."
The girl crossed her arms.
"Why have you come, planning to talk to my father one again?"
"Yes I am."
"Trying to snake him like the last time?"
"Why you little."
The princess put up her hand.
"Well if you are to try to sell yourself to his round table then you mustn't touch his child."
Vanlash turned red, Gohan looked over at Vanlash, and then at the princess, who hands were on her hips.
"I'll go with you, I should be going home as well."
The princess lead out her hand, waiting for Vanlash to walk ahead of her. He stooped by her, as his crew followed. The princesses followed behind them. Gohan stood there blinking, not really sure what happen. Even Rexter couldn't control Vanlash the way this girl did. As so as Gohan felt his neck being tugged, he followed the group. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well what was that dream that Gohan had? Why is Vanlash at this new planet. And How can this Princess control Vanlash so easily? Why must I ask all these questions?
Well I hope you enjoyed that chapter, and I know it's not as long as my last chapter. But that was a important chapter. So it had to be long.
Hope you enjoyed, and review
~*~super-saiyan-monkey~*~