Scene 1:
Walkin' down the hallways of the school. Eddie, Raven, Chelsea and Danny are talking about their weekend plans. 2 Minutes before first period starts. It's about a week later after Raven and Eddie decided to make it official between the two becoming boyfriend and Girlfriend.
"Hey Raven. It's Friday and last night Danny and I were talking on the phone, and since I gotta boyfriend and you finally gotta new boyfriend, maybe we could go double dating tonight? You know, what we used to talk about in Middle School." Chelsea said.
"Sounds great!" Eddie said, excitedly
"Hey that sounds like fun." Raven said aloud. Raven looks up at the wall clock. "Chels, I gotta go. My dad says if I'm late for any of my classes and I get a detention, I will be grounded for a month for each detention I get, until the end of the school year.
Raven kisses Eddie good-bye before she goes into a full sprint to her first class.
"Catch ya later Rae." Eddie says, as he looks at the couple. "I gotta get to gym class before coach makes me run laps again. See you guys during Study Hall." Eddie explains, as goes off to gym.
"Bye, Eddie" Chelsea shouts out.
Danny leans in and kisses Chelsea.
"So I'll see ya in 4th period study hall?"
"Of course silly. We're in the same class, why wouldn't we see each other?" Chelsea says ..
Chelsea leaves Danny standing there with a confused look on his face, and then he leaves.
Scene 2:
It's the end of Study Hall and the release bell for their next class rings. Walking down the hallway Chelsea, Danny and Eddie were discussing this weekends double date. Raven walks up & joins them.
"Hey Raven!" Chelsea said, happily.
"Hey Chels!" Raven replied.
Raven kisses Eddie and then they hold hands as they strolled down the hallway.
"We were discussing whether or not to go to the movies or to go bowling." Chelsea explains.
"My vote goes for bowling." Raven said.
"Well, majority rules Danny, maybe next time we can go to the movies, OK.
"Man, I really wanted to see that new Sci-Fi movie "Space Wars: Episode 3." Danny said as he looked at Chelsea. He looked over at Eddie and Raven and said "Hey you two went and seen it last week right? So how was it?"
"Um, um, um...It was... you tell him Rae."Eddie said.
"It was.." Raven was makin' up a lie in her head. "It was pretty good. With the light up swords with the flippin and with short green guy with the elf ears. It was pretty cool." Knowing that all they did during that movie was make out.
"That sounds so awesome! I can't wait to go and see." Danny said, excitedly.
"I'll go with you next week, as long as I don't have to were that stupid costume with rolled up Cinnamon buns over my ears." Chelsea explains.
"Okay." Danny said happily.
"You know what? Maybe we can start doing this every weekend?"
"Girl you must be crazy? Raven and I are gonna start spending more time together on the weekends. You know? So we can get to know each other a little more personally." Eddie explains.
"Eddie you are so nasty." Raven, laughed out. Eddie smiles at her. "We'll still hang out on weekends. Okay?"
Chelsea sighs a little. "Okay. We'll 6:30's good for me." Chelsea said.
"I'll pick you two up then." Eddie says, then looks towards Raven. "I'll be by your place about 6." As he touches her cheek with his index and middle finger together and rides it down to under her chin to lift her head up and kiss her. And this wasn't a regular peck on the lips either. They kissed for about 2 and a half minutes with Raven leaning her back against Eddie's locker. "Sounds like a date." Chelsea says, "Come on Danny let's go." As she grabbed his hand.
"Why?" He asks. She does a head pointing thing at the kissin' couple.
"Oh... Okay! Let's go." Danny says.
They stopped kissing. And he looked into her light brown eyes and said. "So was that a yes"
"Yes." She giggled out. "So I'll see you then."
"You know it." Eddie replies. As they separate to go in their opposite directions.
Scene 3:
The same day. Raven comes into her house singing and dancing. Cory and Cindy sittin' on the couch kissing. And the tv is on a new episode of "Kung-Fu Kats" Cory's favorite tv show. Cory and Cindy didn't even stop to look at Raven as she was singing a loud. Then Raven stops to see Cory and Cindy makin' out.
"Oh... Hey you two." Raven says.
"Oh... Hi Raven." Cindy says as she wipes her lips.
"So... why are you smiling so much?" Cory asks.
"I've gotta 6:00 o'clock double date tonight, with Chelsea and her boyfriend. " Raven says happily.
"Who's your date? Devon broke up with you remember?" Cory said.
"Eddie is my date." Raven says.
"Oh... Eddie." Cory says calmly and looks at the tv for a moment. "Eddie?" Cory says, happily. Now looking at Raven. Raven then nods her head up and down. "Eddie Thomas!"
"Yep!" Raven says, happily.
Cory was now standing looking at Raven. Now wide-eyed. "Edward Thomas? Your best friend Thomas? Happenin' Rappin' Basketball playin' Thomas?" Cory now shouting excitedly.
"You know it." Raven says proudly.
Cory now is headed back over to the couch to sit with Cindy. "I've got to calm down." Cory said. "So where are you and Eddie going on your first date together?"
"Oh... This isn't our first date together. This is our second one." Raven explains.
"Wait... hold up! If this is the second date, then when was the first? Cory said becoming nosy.
"Oh... I didn't tell you?" Raven started, with Cory shaking his head no. "Eddie and I are dating now. Our first date was last week. We went to the movies. But we really didn't watch the movie." Raven smiles.
"So where are you going tonight?" Cindy asks.
"We are going bowling!" She said.
"I wish that Cory would take me out more!" Cindy says, as she purposely elbows Cory's arm.
"OK, Cindy! I get it." Cory says. "Well you know what?" Cory asks.
"What?" Raven says.
"It's about time!" Cory started. "I thought that you two would never get together"
"It's time for me to get ready..." Raven started to sing out. But was caught in a vision. Cindy looks over at Raven just standing there looking at nothing.
"What is she doing?" Cindy asks.
"Doing what?" He asks, as he watches tv.
"She just stopped. She's glaring off, just standing their, staring at nothing." Cindy said wondering.
"She's just probably having another vision." Cory said unconsciencely. "She's having a what? A vision? What's a..." She cut off middle sentence.
"I didn't say she was having a vision." Cory was trying to think of a quick excuse. "I said she's "envisioning her double date tonight." Cory says as she continues to look at Raven. "She likes to stop and go into deep thought about what she's gonna wear. That's how she designs her clothes. She just stops in the middle of her sentences and thinks about what she's gonna make next. See look! I do it too sometimes." Acting just like Raven. Doing a vision face. "See?" He smiles nervously.
"Well, okay Cory." Cindy says.
Now we see Raven's Vision as she does. In the vision we can't see two unknown person's faces. We can only see the back of two heads. A male about 6 foot tall with a bald fade. And the other was a female about 5 foot 4 inches tall with long jet black hair flowing down the middle of her back.
"But..." A tall unknown male says.
"You really need to leave now! I don't want anything to do with you, so be gone!" Raven said very angered.
Eddie approaches Raven from behind. And wraps his arm around the lower part of her back to set his hand on her waist.
"What are you doing here?" Eddie says with an attitude.
Raven's vision ends.
"Oh snap." Raven says sluggishly.
"Well Cory." Cindy said. "I gotta get home. I'll talk to you later. OK." She says as she walks with her backpack to the door. Raven starts to walk towards her room. "I hope you envisioned a great clothing design." She says excitedly. Cindy opens the door.
"Oh... yeah. I did." Raven said very confused.
"Well bye." Cindy says as she leaves.
Raven goes off to her room, to prepare for her date.
It's a couple of hours later and Eddie is right on time. He decided to wear just basic clothes. He rings the doorbell and Cory answers the door.
"Hey, what's up Cory!" Eddie says.
"So you gotta date with my sister tonight?"
"Um.. Yeah? Is that okay with you?" Eddie says as he steps in the house.
"I'm cool with it. I just thought that your guys would never get together." Cory explains.
"Oh... So is Raven almost ready?" Eddie asks.
Victor is now coming down the stairs.
"Cory, who's at the door?" Victor says as he comes down the stairs quickly.
"It's just Eddie. He's just here to pick up Raven for their date tonight." Cory said. "She should be up in a minute."
Raven steps into the living room. Wearing tight blue jeans with a blouse and some high heels. She walks towards Eddie and stands beside him. Holding his hand. Victor now smiling at them very hard.
"Ohhhhh, my! Only if Tanya could be here to see this." Victor says happily.
"Dad. We're going on a date, not to the prom. But yeah we'll be going to prom in the future together." Raven explains.
"I know, I know. I'd never thought that I would live to see the day that you two date each other. "It's about time!" Victor says.
"I'll have her home by 10:30 Mr. B." Eddie says.
"It's Friday night. You kids can stay out till 11:30 if you want." Victor says. " Let me get my Polaroid Camera and take a couple of pictures." Victor runs up stairs and gets his camera.
"I just hope that they don't show up." Raven said
"Who?" Eddie asks.
"I think... never mind." Raven starts "Cory if anybody happens to call looking for me just tell them that I'm over Chelsea's house. Okay?"
"You got it Raven." said Cory.
Victor comes back with his Polaroid and snaps tons of pictures.
"Oh... Before you go. Let me go and get my old camcorder." Victor says as he rushes off.
"Dad! It's just a date." Raven says. She looks at Eddie. "Hurry up let's go!"
"Bye Cory." Eddie says, as Raven pulls him out of the house.
"You got it Raven." said Cory.
Victor comes back with his Polaroid and snaps tons of pictures.
"Oh... Before you go. Let me go and get my old camcorder." Victor says as he rushes off.
"Dad! It's just a date." Raven says. She looks at Eddie. "Hurry up let's go!"
"Bye Cory." Eddie says, as Raven pulls him out of the house.
Scene 4:
Raven, Eddie, Chelsea and Danny have been bowling for about a half an hour now. Now Chelsea sits down from bowling. And now it's Danny's turn to bowl again.
"Hey Rae. I'm gettin' better. I just knocked down 5 pins." Chelsea says, happily as she sits down.
"Better than what I can do." Raven says, sarcastically.
"Aww man... I completely missed the pins." Danny shouts out.
"Man, he's just as bad as we are." Raven says.
"Maybe worse." Eddie adds.
Mean while back at home, the doorbell rings. It's Chantel and Devon. Some how they knew each other. And they both had the same plot to get the ex's back. Cory answers the door.
He opens the door and looks find it's Devon. "May I help you?" Cory says very angered at Devon, for braking his innocent sisters heart. Devon tries to step in the house, expecting to feel welcomed. "Back up playa!" Cory says.
"Okay? So where's Raven?" He asks.
"And where's is my cookie lips?" Chantel comes from behind Devon. "I know he's here somewhere. He's wearing my favorite scent. Pancake syrup." She sniffs the air like a dog.
"Who are you? And what is a Cookie Lips?" Cory asks.
"I'm Chantel" She says being very sassy.
"OK. But you still haven't told me what a Cookie Lips is?" Cory asks.
"Cookie Lips is Eddie. Eddie Thomas." She explains.
"Okay? Their not hear right now." Cory says as he walks towards the couch. "There on a date with each other at the bowling alley." Cory says unconsciencesly. He hears a sudden clatter at the door. He quickly turns around to sees that they are both gone. He runs to the door in sees two car doors slams and drive off.
"Uh... Oh... I think I did it again." Cory said very upset. He quickly runs in the kitchen to grab his cell phone off the counter to call to call Raven and warn her that they are one their way. But no one answers. "Man she's gonna kill me."
Twenty minutes later Chantel and Devon are at the Bowling Alley, spying on Raven and Eddie and their about to make their move. Raven is up to bowl. She knocks down 3 pins her last roll.
"I don't think that we should be here." Devon says.
"Do you want your girlfriend back, or not?" Chantel says.
Raven goes and sits next to Eddie. They pecked each other on the lips once. Then Eddie gets up and grabs his bowling bowl to bowl. Raven hears people talking behind her in the distant. She whispers to herself. "That voice sounds so familiar." She turns around to see Devon and Chantel duck down quickly behind some plastic indoor bushes. She saw Devon's face but didn't know Chantel was Chantel.
"Oh my goodness." She whispers to herself. "I should have known that was him from my vision earlier today. But what about the woman with the long hair. Who was she?"
"She saw me! I 'm outta here." Devon says quickly. "Do you think we should go over there and talk to them?" Devon asks.
"Maybe this isn't such a good idea. Let's go." Chantel adds. They both jump up quickly from behind the bushes to try and run off. Chantel having many plastic twigs and leaves in her hair.
"Hold it!" Raven says, as she rushes over to them. They both turn around slowly. "What are you two doing here?"
"Rae, I really need to talk to you. I didn't want to bother you during your date. But, what I did was really messed up!" Devon started, he grabs her hand. But she snatched it back.
"Ya dang right it was messed up. You broke up with me in a letter for another girl." Raven said very angered.
"But..." Devon tried to explain but was cut off.
"You really need to leave now. I don't want anything to do with." She said very angered. "So be gone."
Eddie is done bowling and sees that Raven is not in her seat. Eddie approaches Raven from behind. And wraps his arm around the lower part of her back to set his hand on her waist.
"What are you doing here?" Eddie says with an attitude. Not even noticing Chantel standing beside him.
"I come for Raven." Devon says. Breathing very hard.
"I don't think so my brotha," Eddie continues, as he stands in front of Raven "your gonna have to leave with..." He looks over to see a girl by the name of Chantel by Devon's side, with plastic leaves and bushes in her hair. He pauses for a couple of moments. Chelsea watches from a distance with Danny.
"Chantel? Chantel is that you?" Eddie asks.
"Yeah it's me." Chantel said gettin closer.
"It's time for the both of you to leave. Right now." Eddie says, as he points to the exit.
"I'm not leaving without Raven." Devon said.
"Well, I think you are! Now like I said before. "It's time for the both of you to leave. Right now." Eddie said ready to fight.
"But Cookie Lips..." Chantel started but was cut off.
"Don't "But Cookie Lips" me. Now leave!" Eddie said becoming really upset.
"I thought when you broke up with me, that it meant... I still love you Cookie Lips." Chantel added.
"Oh no girlfriend. I don't think you wanna get that close to my man." Raven said as she started to pull of her earrings.
"We're on a date." Eddie said.
"But Raven, is this the way it really ends?" Devon said.
"It was over the moment that you put that letter in the mail." Raven now upset. "You've had your chance."
"Now getta gettin'." Eddie added, as he grabbed Raven by the hand.
"Buh... Bye"
Eddie and Raven rejoin Danny and Chelsea and they sit down. Raven slightly comes to tears, and Chelsea sets herself beside Raven to comfort her friend, by putting her arm around her. Devon and Chantel leave.
"Are you okay Rae?" Chelsea starts.
"No Chels." Raven says as more tears start falling out of her eyes. "I'm not okay."
"They have got a lot of nerve coming out here." Eddie says he folds his arms.
"How did they even know that we were here tonight?" Raven said. "But... I have a good idea who told them."
The scene fades out on Raven's crying face.
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