Please tell me if I emphasized too much on making the story a Hangman's Curse/Suite Life of Zack and Cody crossover.I'm trying not too make it too confusing,but still make the readers wonder why the things are happening.
If you want me to re-write the chapter,then I will.Just please say so.
Zack and Cody's mouths dropped open as a tall figure entered the bedroom.
A boy,Ian they guessed,about their age walked in with a frighteningly angry look on his face...what you could see of it anyways.
Dark brown hair hung in his eyes,spiked at the tips with gel.A single lip ring clung to his lip,which was currently snarling.
A black trenchcoat covered his back while a black shirt lay under it.Black shorts hung loosely,ending just before his black boots.Identical black wristbands wrapped around his wrists,which were just slightly sticking out of the trenchcoat's arm holes.
"Who the hell are you?" Ian said in a dangerously low voice.He walked over before them,his boots making soft thunks as they pounded the soft rug.
"Uh..." Cody squeeked.Truthfully,Ian scared the crap out of him. "I-I'm Cody...and t-this is Zack."
Zack gulped and pushed himself off of the ground,nodding towards Ian in an attemp to keep his cool.But who wouldn't be frightened if they had just been caught looking at someone's cutting razors?
"What you got there?" Ian whispered in a mocking tone,tilting his head to one side.How dare they enter his room...
"Oh...uh." Cody replied,now pushing himself off of the ground as well.How do you work yourself out of a situation like this?
"We just wanted to scope out your room." Zack said bravely,crossing his arms over his chest.Zack wasn't ready to show any signs of weakness...
"Planning on prying into somebody else's business?" he said through clenched teeth,fists now hanging by his sides. "I wouldn't do that."
Zack just shrugged and returned Ian's glare. "Well I guess that's blown,because we already have."
"Zack!" Cody hissed,warning his brother to just shut up.
Ian looked down at the floor and shook his head,a soft chuckle escaping his lips.
"Ya know," he sighed,looking up into Zack's bright blue eyes,which were slightly hidden by his blonde bangs. "I was planning on just ignoring you when I learned that you were going to live here.But now,you're gonna wish that I did ignore you."
Zack scoffed and rolled his eyes.He knows a bluff when he sees one.
"Oh yeah? And how is that? You gonna send some evil spirits after me?" Zack mocked,putting his arms up into the air while making a ghostly moaning sound,obviously failing to pretend to be some type of spirit.
"Zack!" Cody hissed again,softly tugging on his brother's sleeve.
"I'd just watch your back," Ian warned in a low voice,still glaring at the two intruders as he grabbed them by their sweater collars and dragged/threw them out the door.
Zack and Cody winced as he slammed the door with such great force,that the pictures hanging on the hallway walls shook.
Cody pushed himself up from the ground and started to rub his neck.God,that guy was strong.
"Do you see what you do?!" Cody whispered to Zack as they entered their bedroom. "If we hadn't have gone into Ian's room in the first place,none of this would have happened!"
"Whatever," Zack replied,sighing and falling onto his bed. "But that dude is seriously freaky.What do you think he meant by 'watch our backs'?"
"I would know,Zack." Cody replied sarcastically,throwing a pillow at his brother.
Ian's Point of View
I slammed my door shut and leaned against it until I heard Zack and Cody's voice dissapear into their room.
Fiddling with my lip ring,I walked over to my bed and plopped onto it,putting my hands behind my head.I knew exactly what I was going to do with them.They got on my bad side,and noone should ever do that.Even though everyone in school already is...
I chuckled to myself as a flashback raced through my mind.
Flashback
"How could this happen?" a distressed mother cried,burying her head in her hands.
"Isn't this enough proof for you?" a coach yelled to the school principal as he leaned over one of his football players,which was currently laying on the ground groaning,sweat pouring down his face as the couch pulled his helmet off. "This makes three of my players!"
Ian let a small smile cross his face as he looked down from the bleachers.He was satisfied.Abel was slowly starting to take more victims...
The groaning football player,Jimmy,feverishly opened his eyes and gasped.
"Abel Frye!" he screamed,as he looked up at a white-black image of a football demon looming over him.Dark,malevoleant eyes stared down at him.A small noose hung from the demon's neck.
"Abel Frye!" he repeated.
One of the other football players,Blake,turned to his friend and sighed. "Man,I think Abel's got him."
Crystal looked over at Ian as he motioned for them to leave.He had seen what he wanted to,and she knew it.
Ian and Crystal dissapeared behind the bleachers,the screams of Abel Frye's name still ringing in their ears.
End of Flashback
'Jimmy's death was most satisfying to me.' I thought to myself,still chuckling. 'He deserved to die.'
I pushed myself off of my bed and kneeled beside it.Slowly,I pushed my mattress off of the bed frame.
Before me sat many cages of all sizes.Some were small,and some were big,depending on the size of the...occupant.
Whether the cage held multiple baby spiders,or whether the cage held one big adult spider,it didn't matter.All of the cages each had a very special 50 dollar bill in them,occumpanied by a single straw.
My eyes flashed as I looked down at them all.
"Now," I said aloud to the many spiders. "Which one for Cody,and which one for Zack..."
Lol.I'm sorry.But while I was writing this chapter,I stupidly remembered that the character's name was Ian;the name of one of the main characters in the movie Hangman's Curse...which I sadly do not own.
If you've ever watched the movie,then you know what Ian looks like.I don't think I described him well...but he's really hot. xD (ahem) Sorry...
And to those who haven't watched the movie:I guess you're going to have to guess how the spiders,money,and straws are all invovled.
To thos who have seen the movie:You know how Ian's planning to get back at Zack and Cody.
I was so happy,I started laughing to myself.I used the quote "You planning on prying into somebody else's business? I wouldn't do that." from the actual movie.Lol.I love that scene in the movie.
Oh.And the flashback is an actual part in the movie. I had to rack my brain to remember Blake and Jimmy's names. x.x
Please review! I hope you liked the chapter.More coming soon!
P.S. It doesn't say so in the chapter,but Ian's last name is Snyder.I'll explain why he lives with Zack and Cody's grandmother later on in the story.
I don't own Ian Snyder...even though I wish I do.Along with Hangman's Curse,or any of the movie's characters.
