and here's chapter 8 sorry it's kind of creepy

Troy ran into the hospital wing. He ran to Gabriella's room to find that she wasn't there. He ran to find a nurse to see what had happen to Gabriella.

Where is she? Troy asked loudly

Excuse me sir but you have to lower your voice. The nurse told him

Where is SHE? He said louder.

Sir I need you to lower your voice please calm down. She said a little louder then before.

Don't tell me what to say or do tell me where she is! Troy practically screamed out.

SIR I don't know who you are talking about and if you scream one more time I will have you kicked off the premises.

Troy then finally broke down. Where is she? Gabriella where did she go? Please I need to see her. Troy said this in tears.

Sir Gabriella will be fine we moved her out of intense care she is in room 365 and sir please be quiet she is still in her coma.

Thank you, I just really need to see her.

Troy ran off to find her room. Back at the Bolton residence Angelica was putting away the dishes when she heard a knock on the door.

Hello who is it?

Delivery for a Mrs. Bolton

Angelica answered the door to find a tall looking man wearing a ski mask and holding a gun.

I'm calling the police

Oh no you're not lady I came to deliver and deliver I shall.

Angelica ran up to Troy's room. The tall man followed her. She quickly locked the door and went straight to Troy's closet hoping to find Troy's old little league baseball bat. The guy quickly thrashed through the door. Angelica got the bat and smashed it into his head causing him to groan and bleed. He became very frustrated and quickly told Angelica "Look Jack sent me to kill you. He said you were in the way so say goodbye lady." Angelica tried to run to the window to make a jump but the man quickly shot the gun piercing her right through the heart. Angelica's body went out the window falling into the bushes on the ground. The man quickly made a phone call "yeah tell the boss that phase one is complete. I'll start phase two I'm going after the girlfriend". He left the house and headed for the hospital.

Gabi you have to wake up soon everybody misses you.

Troy then felt a hand squeeze.

Gabriella are you awake? Troy asked her. Soon he found himself back inside her mind

Troy you need to know something your mother she's dead your dad hired someone to kill her so that she wouldn't tell you the truth. Troy she is your real mother he just made that up so that you would forgive him.

He wouldn't! Troy was on the verge of tears

Troy he would you need to save yourself the man's coming to kill me.

How do you know this?

Because when I'm in coma I can come close to death I can see what your dad does I have that power ever since he tried to kill me.

You have to wake up so I can take you with me we can run away start a new life.

Troy just listen whatever happens will always have each other. I love you Troy

I love you Gabriella

The shared a kiss and Troy quickly faded out of her mind. Troy sat there for about an hour until he saw movement. Gabriella had woken up.

Gabriella you're awake.

I… I…. I am Troy I'm so happy to see you.

I just saw you an hour ago don't you remember.

No I don't I just remember hearing your voice and you helped me Troy you helped me get out of the darkness. Troy you did it.

Gabriella we need to get out of here someone is after you. We need to come up with a plan to escape.

The two minds made up a plan to escape. Troy had left after visiting hours were over. He waited by her window. As soon as night fell Gabriella got out through her window to find an eager looking Troy at the bottom. They went to Troy's house were they would find a surprise. As soon as Troy got home he noticed that his front door was open. He ran up the stairs.

Mom mom where are you?

Troy I told you she is dead.

I though you didn't remember anything from before. Troy then turned around to see a half dead looking Gabriella.

Gabriella what is wrong with you?

Nothing I'm just remembering.

Gabriella then pointed to Troy's room. Troy ran up to his room to see his door was knocked down his closet was a mess his little league bat had a dent and his window was shattered. Gabriella then spoke.

Look over the rail there you will find your surprise.

Troy looked over the rail to find his mother lying on the floor DEAD. Troy began to cry.

Why did he kill her? She was the only one who understands me. How could he be so evil? I'm going to kill him if it's the last thing I do.

Then Troy heard a thump. He found Gabriella had collapse to the floor. Troy didn't know what was going on. One minute she was fine the next she was half dead lying on his floor. Troy took her to his parent's room and laid her down.

Gabi he whispered. We need to get you out of the darkness you can't keep living like this.

Troy then got up and closed the door. He went down stairs to close the front door to find there was a message on the answering machine.

Yes were calling from the institute our patient or your father Jack has broken out of our facilities. We would like for you to keep an eye out for him he is extremely crazy and dangerous. We will be looking for him we recommend that you stay out of your house till he is back in our facilities. Thank you for understanding. We will not charge to find him. Have a great day.

Troy deleted the message and prepared himself for his next and last visit with his dad.

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