Here is chapter 2 in the story a second chance
Shinji wakes up on a train. "where am I?" he thought "I vaguely remember this place.". "may I please sit here?" he was asked by a young six year old girl pointing to the seat next to him. "uhh sure" he replied. "so do you remember when you are?" he little girl asked. "what do you mean?" he replied shaking. "ohh come on Shinji you know what I mean accepting your second chance. Still startles me how you accepted this second chance so quickly. Personally I would have thought you would have hesitated, or not even accepted." She answered sounding mildly cocky. "How do you know all of that?" he asked sounding obviously shaken. "I am what you Lilum like to call a guardian angel. I have known you since before you were born. Now you shouldn't think that you really lost everything from second impact it is true you look almost the same as you did before you arrived in Tokyo 3, but look at your palms, that is one thing that you can never remove. It is a sign of what you are and what you shall become." Shinji then looked at his palm noticing that the sign of the stigmata was still there. "what the hell happened?" he asked. "the fake lances they pierced your palms as you remember well one of the special property of the lance is that it always leaves a permanent mark. Well you should be getting ready because you are just about to arrive at Tokyo 3 so get your things. Good Bye Shinji Ikari." She said with a slight bow and started walking away. "Wait ! whats your name, will I ever see you again will I." he asked before being interrupted. "my name is Melinda an I will see you again when I feel I am needed. Now you should get ready for your meeting with Miss. Katsuragi."
I would like to thank Unbesigbar because he was the guy who originally gave me that kick in the butt to get started. I would like ot thank Victor because he taught me how to write all the stories I have written so far. I would like everyone to no that I have no intention of making this a self insert, and never will because I personally don't like them. I find that they are mainly used just hook up some poor pathetic person with their favorite anime character. Personally I like real chicks. I also need proof readers and people who would brainstorm with me every now and then if you want to help you can find me at todeskurier on aim and vibious for aim my email is barmandr.com. Thanks I hope you like the chapter and all feed back is welcome just tell the truth and don't burn me to crispy, just medium rare.
p.s. I got hazed because my first chapter was short and seemed rush, wellllll it was. I wrote it in 45 minutes this one also was I wrote it on a car drive. I havnt had to much time but summer just started so I should write more chapters and they will be a higher quality. No there won't be much moving from the story line until the arrival of Asuka because there isn't much background info in the first five episodes but I am going over the series so I might be wrong. Just one final final thing the more brainstormers the better the story will be.
Shinji wakes up on a train. "where am I?" he thought "I vaguely remember this place.". "may I please sit here?" he was asked by a young six year old girl pointing to the seat next to him. "uhh sure" he replied. "so do you remember when you are?" he little girl asked. "what do you mean?" he replied shaking. "ohh come on Shinji you know what I mean accepting your second chance. Still startles me how you accepted this second chance so quickly. Personally I would have thought you would have hesitated, or not even accepted." She answered sounding mildly cocky. "How do you know all of that?" he asked sounding obviously shaken. "I am what you Lilum like to call a guardian angel. I have known you since before you were born. Now you shouldn't think that you really lost everything from second impact it is true you look almost the same as you did before you arrived in Tokyo 3, but look at your palms, that is one thing that you can never remove. It is a sign of what you are and what you shall become." Shinji then looked at his palm noticing that the sign of the stigmata was still there. "what the hell happened?" he asked. "the fake lances they pierced your palms as you remember well one of the special property of the lance is that it always leaves a permanent mark. Well you should be getting ready because you are just about to arrive at Tokyo 3 so get your things. Good Bye Shinji Ikari." She said with a slight bow and started walking away. "Wait ! whats your name, will I ever see you again will I." he asked before being interrupted. "my name is Melinda an I will see you again when I feel I am needed. Now you should get ready for your meeting with Miss. Katsuragi."
I would like to thank Unbesigbar because he was the guy who originally gave me that kick in the butt to get started. I would like ot thank Victor because he taught me how to write all the stories I have written so far. I would like everyone to no that I have no intention of making this a self insert, and never will because I personally don't like them. I find that they are mainly used just hook up some poor pathetic person with their favorite anime character. Personally I like real chicks. I also need proof readers and people who would brainstorm with me every now and then if you want to help you can find me at todeskurier on aim and vibious for aim my email is barmandr.com. Thanks I hope you like the chapter and all feed back is welcome just tell the truth and don't burn me to crispy, just medium rare.
p.s. I got hazed because my first chapter was short and seemed rush, wellllll it was. I wrote it in 45 minutes this one also was I wrote it on a car drive. I havnt had to much time but summer just started so I should write more chapters and they will be a higher quality. No there won't be much moving from the story line until the arrival of Asuka because there isn't much background info in the first five episodes but I am going over the series so I might be wrong. Just one final final thing the more brainstormers the better the story will be.