Hey:) I received a review for that story, but not here. It comes from Lorien Urbani and I want you to read it.

Review;

Amazing, Kaya! I really love this story, I'm totally into it! Please, don't stop writing it! My computer just freezes if I wanna review on hopefully, I'll fix this problem, but you just copy and paste my review there, at the beginning of the new chapter. And people, READ! Read Kaya's story.
OK, this chapter was really good. Sure, he may be a sort of an angel, but I guess he adopted the Phantom's passion. And not just that. Corinne probably awoke something in him that probably even he himself didn't know. WOOT! Me likey! Sensual tension.:P
The soul maker really game me the Phantom's passion and now, my own personality was fading into his.
Oh, really, angel? So cool!
After a while, I heard her curse. My angel's ear did not appreciated and I strode back to the bedroom, finding her struggling with the corset's lace. I stood before her and made her turn. It was lacing and tugging at the corset, when I realised how improper it was of me. Next time, I shall find her another kind of corset with eye and hooks, so she could put it on herself.
Teehee! VERY nice!
What I did next surprised us both, for I placed my arms around too. She laid her head on my chest and I place my chin on the top of in.

It was...different, from all I lived. I am an angel like the mortals would call. Why does it feel like this? Natural, warm...pleasant! No no no, I was only keeping her from chilling the life out of her. By the way, why was it so cold outside?

Yes! She's getting under his skin. He told her that he can't love her, but...can that change?

Please, WMS! Please!

End of review!

Hope it will encourage you to read it! That is why I'm sending another chapter even if I said I would not. I really have fun writing it and some of you has fun reading it!

Kaya

Chapter 5

Daughter

I looked down at them, quite proud of myself. My child, ma petite Corrine, with a smile on her face. I, the soul maker, had no right to have a favourite amongst my souls, but she was nonetheless. I've always wanted her happy and now, she seemed to be. I placed her under my favourite angel's guidance. He too, needed to find peace. My little girl was now a woman, and she was in grave danger, for her beauty and sensitiveness, had caught a demons attention.

Râvana. He tried more than once to take my indigos. Through the centuries, he had seduced my children, one by one. But this one was different and he knew it. She was meant to save the world like the others, but I had chosen her to be their leader. For that, I gave her a piece of myself. She truly is my child.

Râvana has chosen her to be his bride, to reign with him on the underworld. He would dress her with his flames of despair. She would turn into a demon if he ever place his seed inside her and their would be no hope for the future. No! I will not let my daughter bear the child of that blue demon. He has seduced many of my children, married and unmarried. This time, I will not permit it.

Corrine, my little girl, I am giving you to my favourite angel now called Erik.

I looked upon them, making sure the temperature was cold enough for them to sought the warmth of each other's arms. They were slowly falling in love. I did not played with their hearts. I am the soul maker, not the heart trickster, one of my brothers. No, I only placed them in situations to make them come closer to each other.

Your children, dear daughter, will be the most privileged of this world. None of them will ever suffer any pain, that is your father's gift. Their father, which I chose to be Erik, will give them immortality.

-Oh brothers and sisters, help me make the two of them happy. They both deserves it. This world need them so much.

-Armageddon will not be as bad as everybody thinks. A female voice said close to the Soul maker

-Your really want to destroy this world, you who mortals call Mother nature.

-They destroyed what I gave them with pollutions and wars. They don't deserve the world I helped to create. This was my masterpiece and they spit on it to their own profit.

-I suppose you are right. But all those souls, children, women and even a few men…they will all be lost.

-Armageddon will not destroy everything, brother and you know it. You selected your favourite souls and you have my word, I will spare them. This end of the world will help rebuilt it.

-The demons could take it to their advantage and make Earth their own.

-Not with that child of yours. Many of us were against you fathering a human child. She may be Indigo, but she stays half human. Though, now that she is grown up, almost all of us sees how she is. Pure of heart. Yes, she has some naughty thoughts, but that's her human part's fault.

-You know that if she bears Râvana's spawn, she will be damned for eternity and we will lose the fight. Will you help me protect my child, sister?

-Yes, along with many of my angels and our siblings.

I nodded to my sister, who remained invisible. That's another thing I am different from them, I like to have a shape, not only a voice. One day, I went on hearth and met a woman. I chose her to be my bride, well, only for one night. For that, I gave her my little Corrine to carry. She never knew who I really was, but I made sure she would never be in need of anything and gave her a good husband.

Now that Corrine is in my world, I didn't had the heart to let my lover cry on her loss. So I made her forget everything about our daughter. Yes, I loved her and still am. But the soul maker cannot be in love, nor than any other of my sibling. Ma petite Corrine will never suffer as I do. She will know love with her angel, now known as Erik.

Ah yeah, Râvana is based on a demon in an Indian story and read when I was very young. If there's mistakes about who he really was, sorry:) But like I said, it's 'based' on him! ;)

Hope you liked it:Þ