A New Seto Kaiba
Chapter Five: Seto Kaiba's Demand
Disclaimer: I don't own the Yu-Gi-Oh characters, so please do not sue.
Rating: Rated K+
Pairings: KaibaOC (hints of)
Chapter: 5 out of 5
Scheduled Update: November 9th, 2006 (Thursday)
Update: November 8th, 2006 (Wednesday)
Domino
Mokuba walked to Kaiba Corp, hoping the walk would wake him up a little bit.
He didn't see how Seto could do everything that he did. He barely had a hold on the company, and this was after he had hired about ten people to help him run it. He wondered if had to wonder if this was a good idea though. He was starting to lose his say on things.
His schoolwork was slipping as well. Instead of his normal, easily obtained 'A's he was getting 'B's if he was lucky and strained his brain into a giant headache. More commonly his grades appeared as 'C's.
Mokuba checked his watch. It was 8:30 on Friday morning. He sighed, he should really be going to school, but Kaiba Corp. was starting to suffer a little. He couldn't bear to let his last memory of his brother go bankrupt and fall to the ground.
When Mokuba reached Kaiba's office (for even after all this time of using it he never considered it his) he found someone typing on the computer. Mokuba had to stop himself from running over to the car and ripping the person out of it. This was his brother's office. Only Seto or he could be in here. Even if he hadn't come into the office for a while didn't give anyone the right to barge in here and act like he owned it.
"Just what do you think you're doing?" Mokuba asked the man with an edge of anger in his voice.
"What do you think you're doing?" the man asked the same question in return. "When did I give you permission to skip school?"
The chair spun away from the computer and towards the intruder so the man sitting in it was fully facing Mokuba.
"If your grades slip any more you're going to be in big trouble," Seto told his brother before turning back to the computer and once again typing, "Now go to school, I've got a handle on things here."
The End
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