Hey …. I have updated AGIN…. Thank you thank you thank you to my wonderful reviewers you guys are the BEST… due to some excellanté tips on my story…. This will have some action and I am sorry to ppl that want k/d I am making it k/n…. my line of thought only works with a plot like that… don't wrry I am hoping to make a after lady knight story l8r…..hmmmmmm… review and keep on reading to find out!!!! Lovelovelove

Chocolate is my life

Disclaimer: I don't own this… I DON"T

By the way this chapie is dedicated to….. drumroll theknightofkonaha

By the way… HOW DO I GET RID OF YUKI??????

"Oh!!!! Look guys!!!" The three girls huddled around the small window of there carriage. Outside they could see bright houses and neat little markets. There were tons of people all around.

A bump in the road sent them hurling back to their seats. Luckily, they had been put in a 4 person carriage with Shankimi non Horogimi, who did not speak at all. Even though Kel had lived in the Yamani Islands before and had gotten to know the people, she had never seen a Yamani as cold as Shankimi. At least Fiona wasn't there.

The ride itself hadn't been too bad. Unlike herself, Sienna had been giggling and talking non-stop with her friends the entire way.

The carriage slowly rattled to a stop in front of the palace. The door opened and the girls stepped out. Behind them, they could see the other convent girls stepping out of their transportation too.

"Marienne!" A tall boy with brown hair and green eyes ran towards them and picked up Mari only to set her down and look at her. "Mari, you have grown so much. You are so beautiful. But look at me, disregarding the pretty ladies next to you. Please introduce me to them," Neal said with one breath.

"Neal, I am not beautiful. Changing subjects, this is Keladry of Mindelan and Sienna of Ryeben, my best friends. Kel, Sienna, this is my brother, Nealan of Queenscove."

"Kel? Is that you? You look so different," Neal gasped. He then hugged her with much enthousiasm. (terrible sentence)

"Don't worry. I kept up with my glaive and I spent 5 years learning Shang. I could still give you plenty of things to heal in a glance. I hope you have been eating your vegetables…"

Neal then took them on a abbreviated tour of the castle before taking them to their rooms. They talked the entire way to the room that the girls shared. Neal bid them good-bye and walked off. The girls sighed and jumped onto the huge feather beds.

After awhile, Kel said, "I think I am going to go to the practice courses to see my old friends." Kel started for the door, but Mari held onto her wrist. "Not in those clothes you aren't." Opening Kel's wardrobe, already set up by servants, she pulled out a silk hazel gown. It had dark brown stitching all over it and was very pretty. "This one is perfect."

Sienna and Marienne put the dress on Kel and did up her hair. They said that it was so she could have a good first impression.

As Kel walked onto the courts she tried to find some of her old friends. She spotted Neal nearby and went over to him. Neal met her halfway and mischievously smiled. "Come to meet your old friends, eh?"

Neal escorted her to the section where he was standing earlier. He had been watching a duel between Esmond and Merric, which was now over.

Neal brought Kel over to them saying, "Friends, may I introduce you to Keladry of Mindelan, a new lady at court."

"Kel?" "Why are you a lady?" "When did you come back?" "I MISSED YOU" "So… it's the Lump. Come back to bed another dozen boys before getting married. Bet you can't find a husband, slut."

Kel smiled politely. "Good-day Joren." She turned away and then perfectly punched him right in the stomach. "Good-bye Joren. And by the way, never call me a slut again. Neal, shall we go to the library. I didn't see it earlier."

The boys watched her and Neal leave; they were amazed.

As Kel and Neal entered the library, they were bombarded by two figures in dresses. "Kel… the ball is tonight!!! We have to get ready come on!!"

So how did you guys like it…. Too original too much… too boring… too short?????

Pleez review pleeez…… ilu

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