Kaitoson here with chapter 16 of my fanfic The Ninja, the Ainu and the Arrogant
To dragonmisstress15-- Yes I do...cliffhangers rock so...yah.
Ok I think the reason I felt like stopping this was because I just wasn't spacing myself out enough...I was doing at least three chapters in a day and I couldn't keep up with that, so now I think I'll space myself out a little, so I'm sorry if you liked three a day but I can't keep up with it...who could...but I will not be discontinuing.
Disclaimer--I do not own Shaman King...but I want to...oh I want it I want it I want it
Here we go...
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The Ninja, the Ainu and the Arrogant
Chapter 16
Last time on The Ninja, the Ainu and the Arrogant Tempest's rage exploded and as a result his concentration was destroyed and due to that Chocolove was able to somewhat break free from his control and sacrificed himself so that Ren could land a deadly blow to Tempest...
Tempest--...Re...Ren...h...how could...You...hehe...good...hit...hehehe...good...hit...hehe...
Tempest smiles at Ren before crumpleing to the ground with a soft "Thud", Ren stares at him for a minute before nearly falling down himself due to his blood loss...then he looks behind Tempest at Chocolove who was still bearly standing...
Ren--Chocolove...I...
Chocolove--...It's ok...I...
Chocolove then falls with a soft "Thud"...
Ren--...Chocolove...I'm sorry...
Horo saw what happened and he takes a couple steps towards the others who were getting up at that point but after his sixth step Horo's eyes roll back into his head and he passes out before he even hits the ground...
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Not to far away in a house...
Voice--Master...Tempest Storrm has fallen...the battle is over...what should we-
Hao--...Never assume...Tempest might have been defeated but this battle is not over...aslong as the 'other one' is on our side...
Voice--...wha...
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As Yoh and the others got up and checked their injuries they noticed how bad off Ren and Horo were so start to go over to them when someone who should have been dead stood up...
Tempest--...Hmm...
Yoh--NO WAY!
Lyserg--But he's got a hole in his stomach...therse no way.
Ren sees Tempest get up but he knows something wrong...thered be no way he could have survived that
Tempest--...Hmm Finnally that stupid laughing moron died...now his body is all mine.
Ren--What?
Tempest--Your Ren right?...Hello it's god to meet you...my name is Kriner and I am Tempest's original spirit ally...before he locked me away in his mind...he knew one dayy I'd take over...that was the only reason I teamed up with him...BUT HE DOUBLE COSSED ME, TAKING ON NEW SPIRIT ALLIES BY THE POWER I GAVE HIM...
Ren--So...what...your here to finish what he started?
Kriner--...I hate him...why would I do that?
Yoh and the others come over but Indy and Faust go to Horo
Yoh--So...your not our enemy?
Kriner--...Hmm...I have no reason to kill any of you...and in this state if I don't leave and heal then I'll die too...but...hmm...he wanted all of you dead so I won't kill you...but you Ren...he wanted you alive so...hm I'll be back for you...right when I heal this body...I'll be back...
And with that he vanished.
Ren--...Great...just great...
Faust checked Horo's wounds and anilized that Horo, although hurt badly and lost a lot of blood, would be fine...eventually...
They dug up Chocolove's grave and replaced his body...a thing that bought them as much grief as the first time...Then they all got ready to go back to the inn when...
Zeneth--Well well well you all think it's over huh?
Htenez--Yeah we still want to fight.
Ren--...Yoh...just go and beat them...
Yoh--...Uh...you guys don't even have weapons...
Zeneth--So what...I WON'T BACK DOWN!
Htenez--YEAH!
'THUD' 'THUD'
Both are knocked out eaisily by Indy who snuck up from behind them and hit them with two fairly heavy pieces of a brocken tombstone.
Indy--Well...that was easy...they were never to smart...
Ren--Persistant idiots...they just won't leave us alone...
Yoh--Hey I have an idea!
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So when they finnaly get back to the inn the put Horo, who was still knocked out, in his bed so he could rest and they...
Zeneth--UNTIE ME FROM THIS CHAIR IMMEDIATLY YOU FOOLS!
Htenez--YEAH OR WE'LL KILL YA ALL!
Yoh and the others put them in a room and tied them to chairs and shut the door on them.
Yoh--Haha their kinda funny when their mad haha
Ren--Why did we bring them here?
Indy--...They'd just keep attacking us so this was the best idea...and you should be in bed...your still hurt...
Ren--I'm fine but...what are we gonna do with them?
Indy--Well I'd like them to die but...It's not really their fault...
Yana--...they...they...They wern't really the ones who killed me...
Indy--WHAT BUT YOU SAID...
Yana--It was their spirits...they brainwashed them...but...they think it was all them...and their still evil little...
Indy--But then...
Yoh--Well let's think about it tommorow...it's late and we've been through enough already today...
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Back to Hao's house...
Voice--Master...the boys have been taken...and Tempest's Spirit ally has disapeared...what do we do now?
Hao--...Hmm...my strength, although nowhere close to where it was is returning...soon I'll fight them...but first...I think it's your turn to show how good you are.
Voice--So...I should go by the plan?
Hao--Yes...Infiltration...gain their trust...but don't fail like Cindy did...she was being mislead so I had my doubts...but you...you know who and what I am so you are fully on my side...so...don't fail me Zeto
Zeto--No master Hao...
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End of chapter 16.
Ooo will the plan work this time or will Zeto fail like Indy?
Next chapter up soon so hold on.
