Kay, just to refresh your memory...I'm 15 years old, THIS IS MY FIRST STORY and as such I got my first flame. Although I do appreciate flames, don't flame me if you don't have any constructive criticism please! If you hate the story just b/c, then don't read it. You cannot just tell me this... Kiyana DubaRD
2006-11-01
ch 2, anon.WAT DA HELL IS UR PROBLEM? U GOT SOME DAMN ISSUSES U NO U MY SON BUT THIS STORY IS KINDA WACK SO U SHOULD TRY HARDER NEXT TIME BECAUSE U HAVE THE POTENTIAL TO WRITE LOVELY STORIES BUT THIS ONE WAS NOT GOOD AT ALL ! LOVE KIYANA My story is wack so I should...yeah very constructive! Please don't flame me unless there is criticism that will help me, not just to bring me down! Of course there are other 25 lovely reviews that I treasure and keep very close to my heart. They make me feel warm and fuzzy inside, they're my inspiration to keep going!(dramatic I know, but is it helping to make my point?) Thank you for the reviews! yall are great!!! I'm so proud of myself!

Chapter 4!

Inuyasha could barely hear her breathing now and figured she had finally gone to sleep.

'About time' he grumbled to himself taking the ridiculous shirt off.

The cool of the breeze entering through the window relieved his body of the perspiration that just refused to cease, man was he ever grateful. Feeling the need to loosen up his muscles, he turned and stretched out laying on his back. After hearing a few popping and cracking sounds coming from his bones, his hands came forth propping his head up. Finally, he cleared his throat ready to close his eyes.

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Kagome just lay there, not even breathing.

'Kay, just close your eyes, if you close your eyes he can't see you.' Getting ready to turn purple, she finally took a breath as quietly as she possibly could. 'Ok, Kagome for God's sake grab hold of yourself and grow up!'

She slowly opened her eyes and was shocked by what she saw, she couldn't get herself to blink or close her mouth for that matter.

'I hope there's no flies around…'was her only thought.

There he was, in all his hanyou glory. That same stubborn jackass looking like a…god. Her eyes glistened acknowledging how gorgeous he truly was. It had been so long since she had a chance to tend his wounds, due to the fact that his strength had greatly improved and with his the ability to heal much faster she just wasn't needed anymore. She hadn't been able to see or touch his body in what seemed way too long. The 16-year-old baby face had faded away leaving behind a mature 18-year-old one with a great definite structure of his jaw. The soft illumination breaking through the window was more than enough help, allowing her to see perfectly the man before her. With the way he was laying, she had the chance to admire JUST about everything. As if taking his shirt off hadn't startled her enough, she couldn't help but notice that his red boxers were dangerously low.

'Those boxers aren't helping at all with my mind.'

His face was turned slightly to the right away from her so she could easily gape at the outline of his solid profile. He had stretched out in a way that every time he took a breath, his well-toned muscles twitched and her fingers itched to run over them just at least once. He looked so rough yet his skin told a different story with smooth sparkling sweat all over his body, and with gold tan that matched his golden eyes. Oh those golden deep pools could drown you if you stared into them for too long, not to mention his beautiful silver mane.

'Kami, happy pure thoughts…white bunnies in a lily field, butterflies of every color making pretty patterns, Inuyasha's fangs softly caressing my neck- bad Kagome!'

Whine. 'It's so hot in here. Ugh, I have to stop this, my body is burning up…specially the lower part- I blame Miroku for this, been around him too long! Actually, this is Inuyasha's fault if he wouldn't be so fucking…now his foul mouth! Great, just great…Inuyasha's potty mouth that I would just love to kiss' She took in a deep breath.

'No, stop it. Ok, I'm gonna turn around and face the ceiling and then I'm gonna close my eyes and go to sleep…yes, that's exactly what I'm going to do.'

As hard as it was, she tried to get her mind off Inuyasha and go to sleep. After a while she finally succeeded…kind of.

She got to go to sleep all right, but she didn't exactly get her mind off of him…

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On the other hand, Inuyasha hadn't been able to go sleep either. He kept having this odd feeling as if someone was staring at him. He opened his eyes. All he saw was the dark ceiling with just a little light to illuminate the room from outside. Sitting up to see if anyone was there, his breath stopped in the middle of a yawn and soon after shaking his head. Still thinking he must be wrong and another one of those stupid dreams, he rubbed his eyes and got closer. There was Kagome…in her bed…. With not clothes one…that is except for intimates. Wait, what?!

He probably sat there for what seemed forever, trying to process if what he was witnessing was real or a cruel trick from his mind. Had he been so annoyed by trying to go to sleep that he finally had in fact gone to sleep but was dreaming about going to sleep and then a fantasy decided to join along? 'Whoa…major brain freeze' He wanted to touch her to be able to believe she was real, let his claw gently feel her satin skin. Then again, this may actually be a gift from the gods since he really does deserve some kind of reward for killing all those damn demons…if anything the gods were delayed. She looked…wow, she-she looks, DAMN IT.

'Kagome, what are you doing to me woman…'

She laid on her side; her face slightly tilted towards him, her long legs close together, the left hand smoothly touching her hip while the other was close to her inner thigh. The cover was obviously not wanted, had been rejected and thrown at the foot of the bed. The only thing keeping her from his hungry eyes were a white tank top that might as well have been nothing since he could have memorized exactly where her curves started and ended, that's exaclty how tight it was. There was also a piece of lacy cloth, hiding her from him.

'So I guess my question was answered…but that looked nothing like bokzers.' This was tiny and oh he was thankful for that.

She literally took his breath away. Her skin glowed of purity and something was shinning, no sparkling, from her round breasts…it was a red cherry figure.

'Wonder if they taste as sweet as cherries…' He quickly wiped the thought from his head scolding himself asking what the hell he was thinking, although he had a pretty good idea. This was Kagome, and…and…

His demon blood was beginning to pulse, he had a say in the matter too damn it. As if talking to himself wasn't bad enough, or even answering himself, he had to argue with himself too!

He was soon taken out of his productive fight against HIMSELF by Kagome's soft whispers. She was sleep talking? What had she said? Damn it he didn't hear her!

'See, this is all your fault-So just shut up, beat it'

'Like hell, since when do you tell me what the hell I do and don't…where do you get off ordering me around when you can't even make up your own mind about what you want!'

'I'm not having this argument with you and that's none of your concern'

'Growl…Oh SHE IS my concern, even if you're too stupid to see it…that's what I'm here for though, to make up for your ignorance- you weakling.'

'Shut up! She just fucking said something again…Damn it. What the hell are my ears good for if I can't use them for important things like this! I can't decipher a damn thing she said'

A low moan escaped Kagome's full lips.

Giving up on trying to figure out what the hell she was saying, he turned his gaze to her ragged breathing, how her breasts seemed to rise and fall so quickly. He was hypnotized.

'Snap out of it, you fool! What the hell is making her act this way?'

'WHAT the hell WAS she thinking bout?!'

She opened her mouth again, taking in air to let her voice say the answer to their questions…

After hearing their answer all that could register through the empty space was-

'WHAT!'

'GROWL'

Hope yall liked it and so0o sorry it's been so long! I've been reading The Crucible(anyone read that?) It's a pretty good story, but it ain't that much fun when you have to do an essay that will count as 4 test grades on how John Proctor defends the theme of the story! something about humanity and personal integrity and cease of existence! yup yup...so0o thank you for all the wonderful reviews!

One other thing, I won't lie...I like reading lemons, I really do. I don't think I will be able to get myself to write one though...as soon as I even consider it I turn red! lol So if anyone has any advice for that please let me know, cause if yall don't mind, I wouldn't mind letting this story have a lemon either.