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Chapter 4: Jack the super hero
She then heard people clapping, and saw Elizabeth, Will, and Jack clapping. "You guys heard me?" she said as she blushed a little. "Yes
we did luv, and you sang very beautifully if I may add." Said Jack. "Yeah were did you learn that song from Chil?" said Elizabeth. "I
wrote it one day after one of Richard's daily beatings. Most of the songs I sing I wrote and some I've learned from other people. "Said
Chili. Then Elizabeth noticed that Jack was staring at Chili. "Oh Will I forgot to get my… BAG in the galley." She said as she linked arms
with Will. "But darling you didn't…" But was cut off when she elbowed him and saw her eyes pointing towards Jack and Chili. "Oh, OH
I shall accompany you to get your bag Elizabeth." Said Will as they headed out. "Gezz, there weird." Said Jack. "Yeah they are huh? But
they look really happy together." She said glumly. "Yep they do. Luv why don't you just leave Richard and runaway?" he asked as he sat
down on the bed next to Chili. "You don't think I've tried Jack?! I've tried so many times before, but he some how finds out that I'm
leaving and ends up capturing me and beats me up. "She said. "Oh, it must be really tough for you to be married to a stick like
Commodore Carson." He said. "Having to impress people, having to follow rules, and make a false front of happiness as if you loved
being rich and everything." He said. "Yeah, how do you know that captin… I mean Jack?" Asked Chili. "I had your type of life before all
this." He said as he waved his hands about the cabin. "You did?" she asked now listing more intently. "Yeah when I was about 10 or
so…" but he was interrupted when he heard glass breaking. "Oh no, Elizabeth better not be burning all of me rum." He said. "I'll be back
in a minute luv." He said as he closed the door and left. Chili just fell back on the bed and sighed. She then closed her eyes and began to
hum the song she had just sung earlier. She then heard the door open. "What took you guys so…" she stopped when she saw it was not
Jack but Richard. "What…what are you doing here?" she said in a shaky voice. "I," he said as he bolted the door closed, "Have come to
take you back." He said. "Well I don't want to go back" she said. "I ain't asking you I 'm telling you to." He said as he grabbed her by
hair. "If I can't have you Chil nobody can!" he said as he throw her to the floor and began beating her up once again.
The Galley….
THUMP!!! "You Guys hear that?" said Jack. "Yeah" said Will. "Yeah me too." Said Elizabeth as the three looked around the room.
Then they heard someone screaming. Then Jack noticed the scream was familiar some how….It was CHILLI'S SCREAM!! "Richard!"
Was the first word Jack blurted out until he made a mad dash towards the stairs. "Richard?" said Elizabeth puzzled. Then both of their
eyes widen in horror when they both said in unison "Richard!" as they too headed a mad dash to the stairs. When they got to the top they
saw Jack trying to open the door. "Did you open it yet?" asked Elizabeth. "Oh yeah Lizze, I opened!" said Jack sarcastically. "Okay so
you didn't open it." Said Elizabeth. "Wow you finally noticed." He said as he kept on trying to open it. "I will go get the authorities." said
Will. "I'll accompany you Will." Said Elizabeth. As they ran to go get the authorities, Jack kept trying to figure out a way on how to open
the door.
Inside the Cabin
"STOP RICHARD!!!" Screamed Chili over and OVER again, but the more she screamed the harder he kicked. "Nobody can save you
now Chil!!!" he said. When Chili thought he was saying the truth and was about to give up and go with Richard, but then who is to burst
through the door? None other then….Jack the super hero! (JK: p or am I?) "Commodore you forgot your party favor!" he said as he
punched him and knocked him out once again. He then scurried over to Chili. "Are you alright?" he said with a hint of worry which he
didn't even think he could worry about a girl. But he just shrugged it off. "Yes I'm fine." She said as she stood up, with Jack's help, and
groaned. "Let's get you into bed." He said as he put her on his bed. As he was about to check the damages he felt Chili's warm hand on
his wrist. This seemed to send a warm, trickily feeling up his spine which he had never felt before. And without warning Chili had kissed
Jack on the check and said "Thank you, Jack," and she put her hand on his check, "my super hero." And she then feel into a blissful sleep
as she left the world with a very confused Jack and slipped into the world of dreams where Richard and Richard's spies did not reside.
Just her and her new super hero.
Yayy 4th chapie! Sorry it took me so long to update it just school can be such a pain in the ass!!! Oh and tell me if you guys liked the ending or if you thought it was crap. Anyways I hope that you guys like this Chapie! REVIEW!!! PEACE OUT YA'LL: P