A New Hell
Altered course
Thoughts
Demon/Inner Self
"Speech"
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, or get any profit from writing this story. I do this for my own purpose of having fun.
Authors notes: ha really sorry about taking so long I wasn't to convinced on continuing this story sense no one asks and not many fans so
It just took me a while after the whole things over I'm going to redo it any ways but yeah I wouldn't mind getting some advice on what to change or how to lead the story I've already have in mind on getting Naruto like one date and then saving the world but your guys idea could change that so later
In Tsunade's office
Tsunade was sitting in her office reading over the damage and injuries acquired in the Kyubi's second coming from two days ago. Over half of the village was in ruins and the villages' population was at an all time low. "He" had still not awoken from the day the Kitsune had taken control of his body.
Tsunade still couldn't bring her self to call her adoptive little Ototou Naruto, not knowing who was left inside and unwilling to insult his name.
But her tears had finally stopped and all she could do now was worry. Her orders were already given and all she could do was wait; the wind nation was sending over troops to protect the village, Konoha's fastest runner "Gai" had been sent to Kirigakure to enlist the employment of the legendary bridge builders to repair the city, the new memorial stone was being planed out by the higher-ups who were too damaged to help the village with physical labor, and the new hospital was up and running after Taicho "a.k.a. Yamato" Tenzou used his mokyuton to rebuild it. Which in turn put him in the hospital from chakra depletion"
And she merely sat and waited for news on hey younger brother.
Later at the hospital
Lying in the hospital was the infamous "Kyubi kid". Covered in bandages tied and sealed to the mattress he slowly woke up giving a small groan – he wasn't the greatest morning person even with his energy.
Finally opening his eyes he sat up and stretched - unknowingly burning the seals and snap the belts on him. "…why am I in the hospital?" thinking out loud he asked in a deeper voice then usual
Naruto turned to his thinking pose and thought back to how he got in the hospital in the first place; drawing a blank he looked around for some signs of life, where he found a happy sight.
"HEY SAKURA-CHAN hey why am I-"
Before he could finish she had already dashed away from behind the door looking terrified
But being Naruto he didn't really notice and just got up to get dressed.
Soon after a quick message to the Hokage. Tsunade came waking in to the room with 3 ANBU and a face so stoic she could give Hiashi a run for his money.
Naruto… didn't notice
"Oh hey baa-Chan! Um why am I here?"
Without the twitch that usually accompanied "baa-Chan" she ignored his question, and sat down giving only a small hello, and look that reminded Naruto of Konoha's usual ignorant populous.
Naruto, not liking to see his precious people give that stare grew more serious
"What's wrong?"
"…"
"Ba… Chan?"
Unmoving again the slug women just sat there.
It sounds like Naruto, his voice is lower sure, but they are his mannerisms… and… and he doesn't look "entirely" different… this job sucks I need a drink.
Going on for a few more minutes she just rubbed her temples frustrated.
"Did I do something wrong?" he asked slower then usual
"I don't know yet…"she said causing him to slump in worry "do you remember the past few days?"
"Last thing I can remember is training with Kakashi-sensei and Yamato-taichou why?"
"It's hard to explain but that was three days ago but for now, how do you feel?"
"3 days sense when does it take that long for me to heal?!"
"Stay calm." she stated angrily "I will explain after now how do you feel."
"I… I feel great it's as if… as if my body is being healed constantly by the fur balls chakra an-"
"How about mentally?"
"What?"
"Your thoughts do feel distraught or feel strange"
Taking a longer pause he gave the question a little more thought "I feel pretty relaxed, its hard to explain, but it's kind of like having a weight off my shoulders... kind of the opposite of how I felt when I trained with the Kage bunshin's."
"You seem a bit more observant then usual"
"I'm just answering your question. What are you trying to say?"
(sigh) the stress on the caused from the Kage-bunshin training Hatake explained was caused from taking in so much knowledge at one time, so inversely its natural to assume that Naruto's mind is more at rest… its not struggling causing an increase in thinking capacity, I wonder what happened.
"What happened while I was unconscious?!" he asked a bit more frustrated
"(bigger sigh) The last I saw Naruto before the incident you were worried because your seal had made a dramatic change and according to a few villagers Sakura told Shikamaru-san and Neji-san about the Kyubi
Naruto's eyes were about to fall out of his head when he screamed "WHAT! WHY-"
"Naruto-"
"WHY DID SHE TELL THEM HOW DID THEY REACT IS THAT WHY IM LIKE THIS?"
Red Chakra was now forming around Naruto as he more and more worried. Taking notice the ANBU got into taijutsu positions preparing for a battle
"(Slap) STOP AND LOOK AT YOURSELF!"
Showing a face of regret he quickly apologized, but the demonic chakra remained
"I need you to calm down"
"Okay but-"
"Calm down. Now." Don't you even notice your chakra?"
Naruto looked down at his hands and for his body to revert back to normal
In a defeated hushed voice he apologized "sorry" followed by a mumbled "it's the foxes not mine"
"…"
The ANBU got back into a more restful position but remained tense
"I'm sorry its frustrating your not telling me what happened and-"
"And until I'm sure you're not Kyubi, and that you should be told you won't be told…"
"(Gasp) YOU THINK IM THE DEMON FOX? BUT ITS ME NARUTO!!"
"Well I'm glad that's settled (psh). Just because you tell me you're my Ototou doesn't mean you are him there isn't any proof."
"But, it is me! If… if I wasn't Naruto, it wouldn't hurt so much to have you see me as the demon…" "I'm Naruto, I'm still human even if there is a demon inside me" he paused right after and looked down at the floor almost ashamed of what he had said rather then of his baa-Chan. "You can at least call me "Naruto" to acknowledge it's partly me in here…" giving a fake grin at the end
(/ AN: if you don't understand that line its very subtle "Tsunade still hasn't referred to him out loud as Naruto"/)
There was silence as Tsunade fought back her surprised face
'That face… he always had so much confidence it seemed, but right there he looked as though he was trying to convince himself of his humanity'
"Well any ways "Naruto" you being here is not related to Shikamaru-san and Neji-san it's a bit more serious then just friends"
"…" knowing it was pointless to ask what it was he was just quiet
"We will get to that but first I want to see your seal"
Giving a nod he pulled up his shirt and tried to focus his chakra
"It –it won't work"
Finally an ANBU spoke but in a hushed voice
"Does this mean it really is the Fox demon?"
Naruto growing more worried responded "no I-I just can't mold my chakra at all I can feel it moving through me I just cant control what the chakra does right now its like its not mine."
Tsunade closed her eyes and started to think as Naruto continued to attempt to control some chakra at least.
"Naruto I want you to try and draw out some Kyubi energy but as little as possible"
"HOKAGE SAMA IS- IS THAT WISE YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT-
She turned around giving a stifling glare to the ANBU
"Don't second guess me right now or ever for that mater I'm the Hokage for a reason"
"But… Kakashi and Yamato said that would make me weak Ba-Chan?" Naruto asked a little worried
"Its ok that's not how it works and there are more important things to deal so with just do it"
Giving a nod on her word Naruto closed his eyes and went into his mind to confront the Kyubi.
In the sewers of Naruto's mind
At first glance the corridor Naruto stood in would have looked no different then usual dark desolate dingy one as always, but being there so often over the year's Naruto noticed a few important changes. For starters the piping on the walls was never so numerous or large you couldn't even see the walls there was so much metal, and the whole room was flooded from god knows what.
Over the years the pipes had grown bigger as my chakra grew and ero-sennin explained it as my chakra coils growing. But they never grew this fast and I NEVER grew new ones … what's happening to my body?
So Naruto continued to look for the Kyubi and then after what felt like an hour "even though it was only a few seconds in the real world" Naruto reached the cavern the Kyubi was contained in where he came to an even bigger surprised
"WHAT THE HELL!"
Naruto could now see all the new pipes had come from the Kyubis "cage" as they now were everywhere sticking out of the floor every which way as if just hit by an earth quake. The air above Naruto was covered with a thick red hurricane wind coming from seemingly nowhere being pushed back by an even more massive cloud of Silvery blue wind - which he could only assume were his and the Kyubis chakra fighting for dominance. Leaving a ton of questions to be asked there was one that was the most confusing.
How was the blue wind not only bigger but winning?
But the biggest shock was the gate and seal…
Let me rephrase that what USED to be the seal and gate
The gate was gone without a trace along with the seal… all that was left was Kyubi laying acwurdly on the ruined floor. The fox demon was on the ground looking almost sick only showing he knew Naruto was there with a small laugh.
"What did you do to me?" Naruto asked in a threatening tone
"…"
""What the hell did you do to me Where is the damn cage!"
"(Groan) (mumble) (mumble)"
"ANSWER ME YOU GOD DAMN FURBALL"
"SHUT UP Kami… your giving me a damn head ache"
"Like you even believe in god I'll show you who to laugh at" he yelled angrily
The Kyubi got up tiredly
"You already won so shut up."
"What?"
"Don't you remember?"
"NO I can't and this" (motioning to the room around him) "is probably why! You got a lot to explain hair ball"
"(Kuku) ok well as long as I'm leaving I don't see why I can't tell you. I was just worried you were already feeling better after what happened I didn't want you to ruin my fun"
(A.N.) REMEMBER THIS IT IS IMPORTANT
Not giving a damn about the Kyubis cryptic message Naruto goes back to the discussion at hand "First off where is the cage"
"You're the cage moron"
"YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN"
"Ha well I tore it down"
"How Though"
"Well the seal can be altered but chakra of the "sealer" or your own is required to do it"
"Makes sense."
"Yeah"
"Then how did you do it?!"
"Well the sealer is dead kuku so I had to use yours b-"
"How?"
"IF YOU'D WAIT I'll explain" (cough) "Now your chakra naturally grows from fighting off my own but apparently you had to much you grew too fast for your own good and flooded your body with chakra. Your chakra would eventually just float out of your coils till it filled your entire being. Which it did and by lowering my chakra out put yours was able to flood the seal which I was then able to change and unlock"
Naruto looked angry and a bit confused but he got enough of it to move on
"So what happened I take it you got out… how much damage?" sounding depressed
The Kyubi gave a wicked smile and started walking closer to Naruto and then with reminiscent happy voice answered Naruto
"Oh no I sadly was to much of a sadist –god forbid it possible- so instead I took control of your body and destroyed most of your village which is why I'm still in the this meat bag of a body for now"
"(Choke)" in a scared voice "how much damage did you do!" yelling now
"Ha-ha haven't seen it yet? Ah so sad it really was glorious"
"TELL ME" Naruto ran so fast to the injured demon it seemed he had used the Yodamines Hirashin. Now holding Kyubi by the neck he continued to yell. "HOW MUCH DID YOU DO"
Naruto's noticed his arm felt the same sensation as he had in the hospital room, as if it was growing stronger and stronger as he held Kyubi by the neck. It was nearly intoxicating but he was to frustrated an just blocked it out
"Ha seems the power you took is still working" HAHA
"What are you talking about!" he barked
"Look behind you" the demon responded giving another evil grin
Naruto looked back just to shut him but was horrified when he sot it. Then and there on his body were 5 blonde fox tails coming from the base of his back. Dropping Kyubi in the shock Naruto stared at his hands in fright and then ran to a puddle to see his reflection.
"Wha- what is this?"
"Ha I did say you "won" and that is the price you paid to take back control of your body. Your entire life you were called a demon a monster you thought you were luckiest kid on earth just to be treated human. Ha well now… you aren't human" a smile growing bigger on the foxes lips
"I'm… not… I'm not even human anymore...?"
"That's right (the devilish grin growing larger) you are now A 5 tailed Fox demon and in a mater of time you will be the new Kyubi bet your looking forward to it"
"Is there a way to stop it?"
"Oh course" Naruto's face lit up "but…, why would I tell you this is the ultimate suffering you're going to be a real demon and everything the villagers ever said will be true? Prepare for your new hell kit hope you can live up to my legacy Ha-Ha-Ha!"
"Even if I am a demon I will never be like you! I still have my huma-…"
"Humanity? Ha. No, No you don't… do you? You're a demon; you're going to be the monster you fought so hard to prove you weren't."
Naruto fell to his hands and knees crying babbling to him "no… I can… but it's not fair… why me…"
"ITS NOT FAIR!"
Kyubi was now laughing on the floor rolling
In the real world
"ITS NOT FAIR!"
At that a humongous shock wave of red chakra exuded from his body throwing the ANBU and Hokage into the hospital wall as if they were pieces of paper
Even after the initial explosion the wind from Naruto had not died down yet and they were still being pushed against the wall
Naruto was now floating a few inches off the ground cringing in pain obviously from the insane power coming forth from his body. His claws had come forth along with his fangs. Holding his sides he started to rip at his skin to distract him from the rest of the pain.
Tsunade's motherly instincts started to kick in as she used chakra to stick to the floor and walk to Naruto. Many Jounin's in the hospital were trying to reach the room but with the hurricane of chakra it was impossible to move unless they had Kakashi level chakra
She came close and finally hugged Naruto and pulled him into her for a tight hug to calm him down disregarding the pain of his chakra and claws she continued to hold on and repeat his name
"Naruto… Naruto please control yourself… I'm here for you I can help in your pain please stop Ototou"
Naruto then started digging his claws even deeper as he screamed from a new pain. He wailed into the air unable to control himself as what looked like bones started from his pants. One after another they slowly stacked on one another till it took the shape of spinal column then; it suddenly stopped until another bone column came out and followed this process until there were finally 5 spinal cord tails from his back which soon after started to grow a golden fur with white highlights.
And there he laid cringing in his new hell of a world in pain