Kao: This chapter will start around the middle of the Movie of Digimon. It cuts off from the original story line and starts off in our way.
KrayZi: Which Goggles and Dino-Boy? They're T & G! Yes it's obvious, Takato Matsuki and Dino Guilmon!
Kao: Dino Guilmon?
KrayZi: Well it sounds better than saying 'Takato Matsuki and Guilmon'…
Kao: I guess you're right… Anyways, the Movie it splits off from is Movie No. 6, 'Digimon Railway Express!'
KrayZi: We'll be using the Dub names since we're use to that but we kinda prefer the Original…
Kao: There's no Dub for this Movie so we're using the Japanese one as reference.
KrayZi: God, I'm so lazy… I'm taking a lot of this chapter from the movie itself…
Kao: Like usual, we don't own anything except for the things we mentioned earlier.
KrayZi: Like I said, these next Author Notes will be shorter. We showed ??? the first chapter of the story and he kinda went into shock so we kinda kicked him out...
Wild Horse. EXE
Chapter 4: The Digimon Network Express
"Rika!!" yelled the young boy as his friend rolled of the top of the train. He scrambled forward and managed to grab her hand before she fell completely away. Now, she was swinging in the wind and all that was keeping her alive was our Goggleheaded boy and his Dino anchoring him to the train. The boy gritted his teeth in effort.
"Takato!" shouted Rika, she was looking very worried about where she currently was.
Suddenly the front of the train started shifting. The Locomon then said as its parts moved,
"Locomon Digivolve to… Grand Locomon!"
Takato glanced at the newly evolved Train Digimon. His lack of attention towards holding Rika almost costed her life. He managed to grab her hand again. Suddenly Rika said something.
"Let me go! If not, the two of us will…"
"Idiot! I know!" Interrupted Takato as he screamed at her, "Why must you always be like that? Don't give up!"
Guilmon grunted in effort from holding both of the children's combined weight.
Suddenly, an injured Renamon opened the window under and a little behind Rika.
"Rika." said Renamon.
"Renamon!" exclaimed Rika as she glanced back.
"Hurry up and grab her Renamon!" said Takato as he winced from the pain his right arm was in.
Soon enough, Renamon grabbed onto Rika and pulled her into the window as Takato let go of her and was pulled back towards the top of the train car by Guilmon.
When Rika and Renamon were safely back in the car, Rika grabbed onto Renamon for a just the briefest of seconds, when she let go, she had a fading blush on her cheek. Suddenly the car trembled and Rika and her Digimon Partner fell over. Takato and Guilmon were also knocked off their feet from the top of the car.
"He's trying to cut us off!" realized Rika as she ran towards Grand Locomon.
"Wait a minute Rika!" exclaimed Renamon as she doubled over clutching her shoulder as she realized how much pain she was in.
"Let's go Guilmon!" yelled Takato as he also ran off towards Grand Locomon. Guilmon merely nodded and ran off after Takato.
EXE World
"Whoa, another one already? Too bad Yuuchirou isn't here right now… Oh well, I'll just do it myself."
Yanoto then set up everything that he would need.
Digimon Tamer's Real World
As Rika ran into the next car, green tentacles came out of nowhere and grabbed her effectively trapping and capturing her.
Takato just reached the car where Ruki was pulled in and saw her feet getting dragged in.
"Rika!" he exclaimed worriedly. He jumped forward onto the roof of the next car.
"Help me Takato!" yelled Rika worriedly as she was dragged back farther and quicker into the car and through the remaining ones.
Takato ran across the roofs of the cars until he reached the second closest car to Grand Locomon. Rika was already taken to the top of Grand Locomon where and Parisimon was sitting on the Train's head.
Takato then dropped down and ran the remaining distance inside the cars. When he reached the end, he jumped forward just as Guilmon jumped forward from the roof of the car. Takato then said the key words of Mega Digivolution.
"Biomerge Activate!"
EXE Lab
"Whoa, look at that Yanoto!" exclaimed X as he read the readings they received from the mysterious anomaly.
"Wow, the readings are pretty high, not as high as Ranma's were but it's holding steady at that height..." Replied Yanoto as he read the readings.
"I think we'll be receiving a new friend soon." Stated X.
The Digital Train
Takato held his D-Ark to his chest as it exploded into data of light. He felt his clothes get turned into data as well leaving him naked but not for long. Guilmon came up behind him.
"Guilmon Biomerge to…"
The two beings then fused together to create a Knight with white armour and a red cape. His Hazard symbol on his chest glowed for a few seconds. Then his hands glowed and turned into the Lance and Shield.
"Gallantmon!"
Gallantmon landed on the Coal Cart that was connected to Grand Locomon. The Parasimon laughed mockingly as it held Rika tightly in its tentacles.
"Let go of Rika!" screamed Gallantmon as he rushed forward.
"Takato!" yelled Rika as she was held closer to Parismon's eye.
The Parasimon blinked and said, "This guy looks tasty." Before it brought its other tentacles up and sent them towards Gallantmon.
Gallantmon merely slashed his Lance as they reached him destroying a few and brought his Shield up. He then was able to get up closer to the Parisimon and brought his Lance back to attack.
The Parasimon brought Rika in front of its body to attempt to use her as a shield. But Gallantmon just changed his attack point and hit the tentacle that was holding Rika. Rika was blown back by the wind and was barely caught by Renamon who had just arrived behind Gallantmon. She then freed Rika with a swipe of her claws.
"Renamon." Said Rika gratefully.
"It's all because of Parasimon." said Gallantmon as the Parasite laughed mockingly again,
Rika and Renamon looked up at him.
"He had taken control over Rika and Locomon. But it was because of that we could listen to her beautiful song." Rika blushed a bit at those words.
Gallantmon the brought up his leg and kicked the Parasimon right in the eye. Greenish yellow liquid which was probably its blood was sent everywhere. The Parasimon tried to hold onto the Knight's leg but it was slashed by the Lance sending more liquid everywhere.
"This is in appreciation of Rika's song. Here you go!" stated Gallantmon as he pointed his Lance at Parasimon.
His Lance then briefly glowed white. "Royal Saber!" screamed Gallantmon as stabbed the Parisite in the eye. The Parasimon exploded but not completely. It was now lying uselessly on the train. But even though it was deleting, it still laughed mockingly. It then suddenly started speaking from the mouth that was behind the Parasimon where its butt should have been.
"I did it! Grand Locomon, you will keep running forever!"
It then suddenly shot a greenish white, thick string straight to the top of the Digital Zone. Suddenly many more Parasimon came down from the top of the Digital Zone, they were hanging down by a green string coming from their mouths. Many were coming down to the Real World. Many landed on the streets and started terrorizing people.
"Locomon's purpose of running away as to save himself in the Digital Zone!" said Gallantmon.
"And then, more Parasimon will be able to come to the Real World" realized Rika.
"To link and invade the Real World!" finished Gallantmon.
"We won't let you do that!" yelled Rika.
"Biomerge Activate"
Rika held her D-Ark close to her chest as it was turned into a bright light of data. Then her clothes were stripped away and turned into excess data. Then Renamon came up behind her.
"Renamon Digivolve to…"
They then became a female Digimon dressed completely in a form fitting black with her long, white hair flowing out behind her. A staff then formed in her hand.
"Sakuyamon!"
Suddenly, Mega Gargomon came up from behind them. Gallantmon and Sakuyamon both landed on the left or right shoulder.
"Let's stop him at the Digital Zone!" Exclaimed Mega Gargomon.
The Giant Machine then flew forward on its rockets towards the Digital Zone. When the Green Giant landed, both smaller Megas leapt off his shoulders and landed on the ground. They immediately started deleting the Parasimon.
As soon as possible, Mega Gargomon opened all of his laser and missile ports.
"Mega Barrage!" he screamed as all of his weapons started shooting and deleting many Parasimon. Even though he deleted many, many more kept coming, there were too many.
All that landed on the ground either rushed towards Gallantmon, Sakuyamon or off to terrorize many different places and people. Gallantmon and Sakuyamon were kept under heavy attack by the Parasimon.
"They just won't go away!" muttered Gallantmon.
Suddenly a light formed at the top of the Digital Zone and rocketed down. A figure wearing a red scarf was flying down.
All three protectors of the city looked up at it.
"It's coming!" exclaimed Gallantmon.
It then landed on Mega Gargomon's shoulder and promptly said, "Hi everyone!"
"Justimon!" said Mega Gargomon gratefully.
"Ryo?" said Gallantmon.
"Hmph." Rika then turned away to concentrate on the battle again.
Justimon quickly jumped into the fray and started helping out. "Thunder Clap!" screamed Justimon as he slammed his robotic arm into the ground. The ground broke apart underneath the Parasimon and sent great bursts of electricity into the Parasimon deleting them.
"There are just too many!" exclaimed Justimon.
"This is impossible." Answered Sakuyamon.
Suddenly a Parasimon managed to land a controller on Justimon's back.
Gallantmon managed to slash it off with his Lance before he was entangled within many Parasimon bodies and tentacles.
"Gallantmon!" yelled Sakuyamon as she tried to help Gallantmon. But she was quickly stopped by many Parasimon bodies and tentacles too.
All four were trapped in the Parasimon's clutches.
"We'll never lose…" started Gallantmon from under the mass of tentacles, "We will defeat you Parasimon!" he then screamed as a bright crimson light shown from within him.
Yanoto's All Alone Other Than X
"Holy crap! The readings aren't able to go THAT high! These are even higher than Ranma was able to get and it's STILL holding steady!" shouted out X.
"Jeez, maybe we should get a fan in here, it's really starting to heat up…" muttered Yanoto.
"Pay attention you idiot!"
"Feh, you're no fun."
Tamers
The light shredded all the tentacles and Parasimon holding him. The crimson light then shot up towards the sky like a bullet and then suddenly stopped. Inside the light appeared Gallantmo- no, not Gallantmon, He was encased in Red and outlined with yellow. He had eight white wings sprouting from his back too. He was…
"Gallantmon Crimson Mode!" shouted the Holy Knight.
Ryo and Henry gasped while Rika said, "Pretty…"
A double sided sword then appeared in front of Gallantmon, he grabbed it and flew straight into the Digital Zone. He flew as high as he could while charging up his sword.
"Quo Vadis!" shouted out Gallantmon CM as he threw the sword up in a blaze of crimson light to the very top. Suddenly even quicker than it went up, it fell back down and smashed the very bottom of the Zone. The crimson light then enveloped the whole city and deleted all of the Parasimon and releasing the other Digimon. Gallantmon CM then flew down triumphantly.
Suddenly a De-Digivolved Locomon came up behind them, he promptly said, "I have to hurry, I have to keep running!" and he went right into the quickly disappearing Digital Zone.
EXE
"No! We're loosing hold of this one! The reading lock is disappearing!" exclaimed X.
"Impossible!! That can't be happening! Start up the transporter! Now! We can't afford to loose this one, it might be our only chance to get it and it has a strong reading too!" screamed Yanoto.
X's eyes glowed as he activated the machines. A familiar beam of bright white light shot up and again broke the roof before going who knows where.
"We should really do something about that, it's getting annoying." Muttered Yanoto as he knew he would have to help out with fixing it.
To the Unfortunate Takato
Suddenly the Digital Zone stopped disappearing. Instead of slowly disappearing or even stopping, it started to slowly build back up but at the same time changing colors to a deep crimson red. After changing colors completely, it shot right back up into what it was before. Everyone there gasped at the sight.
"What? No! We deleted the Parasimon! Does this mean there's something more we have to delete?" gasped Justimon.
"Well you and the rest of us better hope that there's another reason for this, none of us are in any condition to fight." Stated Sakuyamon looking at all four of them. All of them excluding Gallantmon CM were bruised and battered and hurting all over.
Gallantmon CM however seemed to be in an even worse condition, Sakuyamon glanced at him. He was looking really tired, like he was completely drained but he wasn't De-Digivolving. That was good right? She soon realized that it wasn't.
Takato suddenly felt a sharp pain from the deep pits of his stomach from inside his sphere in Gallantmon CM. He gasped and fell over, in reality, Gallantmon CM's double sided sword clattered on the ground as he dropped it. He then gasped and fell over painfully. He was on one of his hands and knees and holding his stomach with his free hand.
"Takato?" said Sakuyamon worriedly, she moved closer and kneeled down beside him to look at him.
"Takato's not feeling okay." Growled a feral Guilmon from with Gallantmon CM.
"What? Do you know why?" asked Mega Gargomon.
"No. I'm not feeling what he feels right now. I asked Takato but Takato didn't answer." Growled out Guilmon again speaking properly in his Mega form and because of his concern for Takato.
Again Takato felt the pain from inside the sphere and gripped the ground harder and harder cracking and breaking the concrete from under his Digimon hands.
Suddenly, a bright white light, easy to point out appeared out of the crimson pillar that once was a Digital Zone. It started out small but got bigger and bigger. It sped faster and faster towards the group.
Justimon jumped towards and perfomed his Justice Kick to try and defend his friends but no results came. The light just seemingly went around his leg and kept heading straight for Gallantmon CM.
Mega Gargomon next stepped forward and placed his giant body in between the light and Gallantmon CM and Sakuyamon who was starting to stand up. Again, nothing happened, the light went right past due to its quick speed and came closer to Gallantmon CM.
"No!" whispered Rika from within her sphere.
"I will not let you pass!" said Sakuyamon to the light.
The light did not make any indication that it heard her or could even respond. It just kept going. Sakuyamon brought up here force field and tried to hold against the light. This time, the light was stopped, but not for long. The area that the light was touching started to start phasing in and out until it finally disappeared then followed completely by the rest of the shield.
Gallantmon CM screamed once again and turned back into Gallantmon.
The light then started to move erratically. Rika went up to attack it but the light didn't even waver, it went straight through Sakuyamon and kept moving towards Gallantmon at first still erratically but soon straightening out.
At last, it reached Gallantmon. Like when all the Parasimon where deleted, a bright light washed over the whole city but was instead, white instead of red. The light blinded everyone but quickly disappeared. Like what happened on another world, Gallantmon was there no more, even his sword was gone. Nothing remained.
EXE
"We did it." Cheered Yanoto.
"And we didn't even need Yuuchirou's help!" stated X.
Suddenly a beep alerted them both snapping them out of their happiness. Yanoto looked down at the panel.
"What the… Something's happening; I can't seem to bring it completely through, something's blocking it."
"I think something doesn't want us to bring this one through…"
"Hey… Our readings are fading! There are too many disturbances! We need to re-lock it back on our target!"
In the Light
Gallantmon was currently encased within a crimson ball of light that was speeding its way through somewhere. To where it was going, he didn't know. Soon he realized he was slowing down. Not as in a sudden stop, but in a small but gradual way. He didn't know what to do; it could be his freedom or his death. He didn't know what would happen if the light were to stop. Was he going to some place where an evil person trying to destroy the world or something like that? Or was he needed somewhere?
"Takato… Stop thinking of questions… It hurts…" said Guilmon weakly suddenly breaking the silence.
"Ok… Guilmon…." Answered Takato. All these questions indeed did hurt.
Digital World
Something caught the attention of a certain bird sovereign. It was a small but annoying energy in his quadrant. It was moving incredibly fast but it was certainly moving Northwest in a curved fashion. Zhuqiamon then sent Makuramon, the Monkey Digimon, to investigate it.
As Makuramon caught up to the speeding disturbance, he saw that it was merely a red ball moving very fast. As he neared it, he was electrocuted by the ball and he fell behind a bit. When he got back up, he still had electricity crackling through his body.
Takato and Guilmon
Gallantmon felt himself being shook up a bit. There was something outside of this place. Something he wanted. He felt some kind of energy he needed. He tried to draw it to himself but couldn't. He repeatedly tried but failed.
"So you like it that way do you? Take this! Primal Orb!" exclaimed Makuramon
As the attack smashed against the side of the energy, the attack was merely destroyed and changed into data which was absorbed into the Energy.
Gallantmon felt the energy again. He tried to bring it to him and was successful. The rush of energy was exhilarating. He didn't know what it was but he needed more. He was able to feel where the source of energy was coming from this time. He caught it and was able to draw even more energy from it.
To Makuramon
Suddenly the Energy changed its direction. It was headed straight for Makuramon. Makuramon tried to get out of the way but suddenly was surprised when the Energy shot a red beam at him and drew him nearer to it. As he neared it, he felt some of his Data being taken faster and faster. After a few minutes of struggle, Makuramon felt himself struggling to stay in his Ultimate form. He managed to get out of the Energy's hold before he lost his form.
The Energy seemed satisfied and sped off in the direction it was previously going. Makuramon collapsed and rested on the ground for a moment before getting up and going back to Zhuqiamon to tell him what had happened.
"And do you know what it took?" Zhuqiamon merely said as he was told what had happened.
"Much of my Data. I fear the consequences of such an act.."
"I see. Whatever it is, it is out of my range of authority since it has reached the Baihumon's Quadrant, the West Quadrant. It also seems that it is moving faster and faster now."
The Energy was able to pass through the Western Quadrant and into the Northern Quadrant with no interruptions other than the occasional Digimon that got in the way and was deleted and the Data absorbed by the Energy. It kept going faster and faster around the quadrants until it had reached the Southern Quadrant again and passed through it once more. Still, it kept going faster and faster in a clockwise motion around the whole Digital World. When it appeared in The Southern part of the Digital World for the fourth time, the guardians were able to figure out that it was moving in a spiral getting closer and closer to the center of the whole Digital World. The place where Digital World was connected to many Worlds.
There was simply no way they could stop it. It was moving too fast for any Digimon to chase after it. They had tried to set up a trap for it but it had simply deleted it and absorbed the Data. There was no way but to simply watch it gain its goal.
As the Energy reached the center, a pillar of golden light shot down right into the center coming from who knows where. They finally found out why the Energy was spiralling around the Digital World. It had been building up speed just for this moment. It had gained all that speed just to be put to use for this very moment. The Energy circled around it a few times before shooting up around it circling it still the whole way. Eventually, it turned and went right into the light and shot straight up, faster than anyone or anything could see. The golden light faded away and disappeared. Nothing happened after that. No destruction, no 'end-of-the-world' thing, no big figure coming down from the sky, nothing.
Gallantmon
He was still sitting in the same place. He still felt the same. He still was alive. He didn't know what had happened but a sudden rush had caught him off guard and did something to him. He didn't know what. Suddenly, the light in the ball faded a bit. Just enough so that Gallantmon was able to see exactly where he was. It was a place of midnight blue and black. Just a space of emptiness except for the colour. The colour and many dots of light. He could see a beam of golden light attached to the front of the red ball and it seemed that he was being pulled by it. He saw that it reached into one of the dots of light. What those were, he didn't and would never know, yet.
As he reached the light and was sucked in, the red and golden light seemed to almost completely fade. He was in a place with many blue, purple and yellow blocks with a random lightning surging through once in a while. He felt a little tingle, like something was pulling him in one direction and something pulling him in another direction. He looked around. He saw that he was still surrounded by the same crimson ball attached to a golden light but there was also a purplish black light attached to him. Where the black was touching changed the red to black. Takato did what anyone would do when seeing an evil looking thing trying to take over a good looking thing. He panicked.
"Aaaah!! No! No! Bad black light! Bad black light! Go away! I don't like you!"
Gallantmon then tried to kick it. His left leg froze up for a second and he was shot back. He was slammed against the back of the ball hard. He looked down at his leg. Where it was silver was slowly being taken over by black and where he was yellow was being eaten away by a purple. His red was slowly darkening into a darkened bloody looking colour. Where the colour changed, glowed a purplish black glow. His left leg was slowly being corrupted.
Guilmon then said, "I feel funny…"
"Guilmon no!" yelled Takato inside his sphere.
Yanaoto and X
"Well we're through the hard part, sending people through worlds is hard. It's also annoying" commented Yanoto as he glanced at the very noticeable hole in the roof.
"Well don't relax yet, it seems Wily has caught on."
"Wily? How the hell did he find us? Didn't I put on the safety lock? I remember I did! I did it right before I started the whole procedure!"
"Umm actually that was the time we brought Ranma over. You forgot this time."
"What?! That's impossible! I clearly remember that I did it this time too!" Yanoto pointed to the lever which would have shown that the Safety Lock was on triumphantly.
Both looked to it. A sudden breeze went through the room from the hole in the roof.
"Whoops."
"Told you."
"Well anyways, there's nothing we can do about it now, we'll just have to knock Wily off."
"Right. I'll turn on the communications and hacking devices on now. I'll distract him while you hack, got it?"
"Right."
Gallantmon
The corruption had reached his knee. He was yelling and smashing his right foot against the 'good' looking light to try and fix it. It did no good. He kicked at it with his other leg. Now was a time for more panic. His right foot was now glowing yellow and it was slowly reaching up. Now his right leg was slowly being covered by the yellow light but staying the same colour while his left foot was being corrupted and glowing with a blackish light.
"Crap…"
Suddenly, something finally happened that was not done by him. The golden light twitched and a view screen appeared. It was angled in a way that he couldn't see it. A voice came from it.
"Wily, screw off."
Another view screen appeared but this time from the darker beam. It was also in an angle so that Gallantmon couldn't see.
"Hwahahahah! As if I would ever listen to you! You and that pathetic organization!"
"God, you don't need to yell. The communication devices don't suck that much."
"Hah! I know your technology! It was always such a low technologic advancing rate! You people always had to go the 'goody-two shoe' way and create your technology yourself! Well you'll never gain any advances that way! You have to take what you can get and use it for yourself!"
"Stealing from other worlds? Now that is the lowest you have ever gotten Wily."
"Stealing? Oh no, think of it as… borrowing. Hahahahahahaha!"
Gallantmon cringed at the laugh. It was awful. This guy had to work on his laugh, it just didn't work. You were supposed to be afraid of the laugh, not be afraid your eardrums would burst.
"Well, you can't have him! We won't let you take him!"
"Hah! I'll take him right from under your nose! You even forgot to put the Safety Lock on. That was the first step you were suppose to do! And you forgot? Your stupidity amuses me! Hahahahahahaha"
Another cringing, god he hated that sound.
"Well it's too late now! You've already lost your hold! Who's stupid now?!"
"What! No!" Suddenly his voice turned calm, "Well, like any other villain, I must say this and then do it. If I can't have it then neither can you!"
Indeed, the blackish light had disconnected from the red ball and was disappearing. But before it did completely disappeared, while it was still in range, it shot a even bigger light that surround the whole ball that Gallantmon was in making him scream in pain. It felt like he was being eaten away by some unknown thing. His corruption was working on him faster and faster.
Gallantmon screamed.
Yanoto
"Dammit! I don't know what to do! What the hell do I do when there's a goddamn virus in him that I don't want! I can't plug in anyone either! Dammit!" Yanoto screamed in frustration.
"Calm down Yanoto, there's nothing we can do but hope that whoever it is can make it out alive!" said X worriedly as he watched Yanoto.
"Calm down?! You're asking me to calm down when there's nothing I can do but watch him slowly turn Viral!? Dammit X! You know me better than that! I can't let him die! Not like this!" tears started to trickle down Yanoto's face as he seemingly lost all will, "Not like him…"
A curious Co-Worker heared Yanoto's screams of frustration and walked in.
"Having trouble Yanoto? Maybe that'll teach you to not do everything by yourself."
He was a man wearing a pair of glasses with work goggles strapped to his head; he was wearing a green outfit with white stripes and was carrying a rather large pack around that was full of electronic gadgets.
" Douglas! You gotta help me! You know about the whole damn project right? Well I tried to bring someone over but Wily interfered and screwed him up! He's turning Viral!"
"What? Help? Project? Wily? Viral?!! Crap where's the controls?!"
Frantically, Yanoto pulled poor Douglas roughly to the controls and yelled at him to do it quickly or the guy would die.
"Right, right, I hear you… Jeez, calm down…"
Yanoto started off on another fit about calming down.
Gallantmon
Gallantmon couldn't see anything. It was too dark. Last thing he remembered was the corruption getting towards his head when a bright light had shined down upon him. It felt warm, comforting, peaceful… But the corruption just felt so right, so natural, like it was already part of him. He wanted to go to that peaceful feeling but something in him wanted to stay with the natural feeling. He pulled and twisted and finally managed to get away. He felt a lot lighter, and less bigger. Like a big weight had been taken off him. It felt so good, like he would always be happy. Like he would have no evil things inside of him. Like a Virus. His eyes shot open as he came to realize something.
Just as he realized it, like someone else before him he started to convulse painfully there. Nothing was right anymore. Something was being torn away from him, something that he had just gotten a year ago. Something that had always been by him since that fateful day. He needed it back. He wanted it back. He had to take it back.
"No! Give it back! Give It Back! Give Him Back!"
He began to resist the peaceful feeling and try to go back to the natural feeling.
Douglas
"There, I managed to fix the corruption. It should work now. Wait, what the… Crap!"
"What the hell is the problem now?!"
"It's trying to resist! Like it wants to go back to being Viral!"
"What? Why would it do that?"
"The hell should I know? But I'll get him back; I'm not the top programmer for nothing!"
Indeed Douglas was the top programmer and did manage to get it back. A light behind them inside the tube began to glow. Something appeared there.
"Hmm, something is wrong, are you sure those readings you got from earlier are correct? Because the ones we're receiving now are nowhere that high."
"I'm sure Douglas, let's get it outta there."
Takato knew it, he had failed him. He had lost him. Not like the day he made him go wrong. This time he really lost him. He had disappeared. He cried and whispered, "Guilmon…" and fell asleep from his sadness.
KrayZi: And cut it off right there!
Kao: I feel so bad… I feel sorry for Takato so badly…
KrayZi: I know what you mean… These emotional things are hard to write… I should get more practice…
Kao: So… Sad…
KrayZi: … Shut up Kao.
Kao: Snifle
KrayZi: Jeez Kao… It's not forever… It's just like Ranma.
Kao: It's so Sad!
KrayZi: Anyways, here are a few things to tell you, I followed the movie exactly but I cut out a few parts where there weren't Takato or Rika. Also, I followed the Movie exactly; go see it for yourself if you like. I kinda liked it but it could have been longer than just a normal episode… Also, I'm really enjoying writing. Right now, I'm sure that I won't be writing many Digimon stories if I ever do that is, because there are just too many damn Digimon!
Kao: Now to the reviews… Tell KrayZi if you don't like him putting what you said next time you review.
(If you don't want to read the review replies, skip to the end, there are a few notes down there. If you DO want to read a reply to your review, just press 'Ctrl+F' and then type in the name you reviewed under.)
Reviews for Chapter 4
To: TheCentauress
Review:
Nice chapter. By Ranko-type I meant that as Ranma matures, the magic will link him and his Navi where when he's male, the Navi will be female and vice-versa. The Neko-idea is that if the Navi takes that form, the standard blaster morphs into a claw-blaster configuration - four mini blasters positioned between the knuckles, which form claw-shaped blasts that can be used as a blade-type attack or fired off singularly or as a group. Charged Neko-blast forms a feline shaped blast that is a limited-intelligence entity, like a stunted Standard Navi. The Charged Neko Blast can follow simple instructions and be used as a shield, but only one at a time; creating a second causes the first to act as a homing blast.
Reply:
KrayZi: I already have an idea for 'Ranko' and also, there are no such thing as 'Female Navi" yet since they haven't been developed. Sorry, I also already have an idea about his Neko stuff but that idea about the Neko-Abilities are interesting.
Kao: Thanks for reviewing again!
KrayZi: I thought you were off crying.
Kao: You expect me to cry about that?
KrayZi: … Good point.
Kao: Thanks for reviewing.
To: Silverscale
Review:
A wondeful chapter you have made keep it up.
But I got a question.
I've never heard that name before so I wonders who he was in megaman and why you named ranma's PET that.
Reply:
KrayZi: Since you don't know who Axl is, I'm guessing you don't know that he's the 'mysterious new character' in Megaman X7.
Kao: Axl is a Red Alarm person that wants to go help others or something like that…
KrayZi: X doesn't want him to live the life of a fighter so he tries to discourage him from fighting which causes a lot of fights between them or something.
Kao: Frankly, he hasn't played X 7 before either, that's just all based off on what he's read. Feel free to correct him.
KrayZi: I've had a reason for many things in this story that are hidden off somewhere, little foreshadowing and the works. Don't bother looking for it, you'll get bored loooong before you actually find it.
Kao: It actually just foreshadows something that's Waaay beyond this chapter and the ones after it. So there's no point in looking for it, you'll forget it later when it is brought up anyways.
KrayZi: Thanks for reviewing.
To: Uzumaki901
Review:
Hm... I thought it would have been amuzing if u added something like:
"Damn... If I was in my old body I woulda kicked your ass..." Ranma muttered.
"What was that?" the sword instructor asked.
"Nothing."
Heh... Anyways, Hope you update real soon!
Reply:
KrayZi: There are a lot of things that I thought of after I read many reviews, after I finish this story though, I might go back and revise it all…
Kao: We updated… A week later. We should really try to write more… But it is better than most other writers, right?
KrayZi: Thanks for reviewing.
"Okay Axl! Run up and try to punch that damn Navi! Ugh, now do a round kick! No! Not like that! Fine then! Jump and kick'em down! Argh! You're not supposed to be shot down like that! No! Axl! Do a back punch before turning! No! What the hell are you doing Axl! Gah! Roll out of that hold! What the hell Axl! Listen to what I'm saying!"
-Quote from Wild Horse. Exe, Chapter 4
To: Firehedgehog
Review:
great chapter, keep going. your writing is getting better each chapter.
Reply:
KrayZi: Holy crap! I can't believe one of my favourite authors actually reviewed my story!
Kao: Note, he forgot to put you in his favourites list.
KrayZi: OMG! OMG! OMG! WTF!!
Kao: As you can see, he's really giddy now. So I'll say this for him. He's basically writing this story to get some ideas out of his head that's been circling around in his head. So he now needs to clear them all out or get a brain transplant. He's also writing this story just for practice of writing stories. Thanks for reviewing.
KrayZi: OMG! OMG!!!
To: Max Knight
Review:
Wow,I played Rockman.Exe before and was stunned to see this fic.
It's weird when Ranma isn't doing the fighting though.
Try letting Ranma train Axl in the Anything Goes so he could be like him.
I look forward to your next update.
Reply:
KrayZi: Yeap, I've played it too but it was the English one… Wish I could read Japanese…
Kao: Yea, he's not doing the fighting now. He can't, he's stuck outside of the Net World until he can find a way in.
KrayZi: Axl is a foot soldier or something with a firkin gun, do you think he would let go of his Axl Bullet that easily?
Kao: But his copy ability would come in handy…
KrayZi: There is a reason why he's a Standard Navi and not an Original Navi like X.
Kao: Thanks for reviewing.
To: Kuno-Baby
Review:
Okay. Must to update fast. Nice story.
You do know that for a lot of people Ranma being uncursed automatically degrades the quality of the story?
Reply:
KrayZi: Of course I must, I think I'll settle down to about an update once a week or something… Of course I know it degrades the whole story, the original was pretty much centered around his curse…
Kao: Taking that curse away would take away the whole base of the original series.
KrayZi: That's why his happiness isn't gonna last.
Kao: Actually he just took it away so that it would be easier to write this part about him meeting everyone and stuff. If I made him still have the curse, then he would still be looking for a cure and therefore, be always jumping at any idea about getting cured and also lead to him being not able to think properly before making decisions.
KrayZi: Basically, this is a story of Ranma growing up in a better way.
Kao: Thanks for reviewing.
To: Light02
Review:
Sense you got X and Axl (From Rockman X7 incase most people don't know) in and I'm guessing Zero is gonna be the Tamers Navi
Reply:
KrayZi: Zero? Heck no, then what would happen to Guilmon? Do you think Zero, of all characters would settle with Takato as his Operator? Guilmon and Takato have a bond, remember? But it seems I did something to that bond…
Kao: Besides, I have something in store for Zero when he and Ranma meet. Which basically already happened twice, you would know that if you read it carefully. The second time is more obvious but not the first. Think 'nerkima'.
Kao: Thanks for reviewing.
To: fatboy
Review:
oh plz don't make proto zero i hate it when ppl do that. give proto a sheild this is a good fic the good fic YATTA
Reply:
KrayZi: Blues (Protoman) as Zero?! Who the hell did that? I already have an idea for Enzan (Chaud) and Blues. Plus all the other kids of Rockman. Exe… Here's a hint. Love Hina and promise. If you don't know anything about Love Hina then you'll have to wait.
Kao: A shield? Maybe…
KrayZi: Thanks for reviewing.
To: needmore
Review:
...i don't understand japanese...so i can't read the manga (unless you can provide a scanlation site/place for me)...i just know some stuff from the manga
how do u know there's gonna be plot .. holes... unless that means you're gonna...AH what is wrong with you - you're planning for plot holes? faints
and yes, i have heard about "Bob and George" - its in my fav link and i read it quite often, Ran - the loveable commie cheap self-replicating robot - idea came from that
nice chapter...update soon...and i needmore!
Reply:
KrayZi: First off, thanks for reading and reviewing all of my chapters I've done so far. You did review them all right?
Kao: Anyways, I also don't understand Japanese… But the Rockman. Exe manga is coming out in English dubbed but the script is basically the same. It's just the names and places that changed.
KrayZi: Well it's not really a plot hole but the ages will be really messed up…
Kao: It's because of this, there's something that'll happen to Ranma that'll really stunt his age growth.
KrayZi: But I just found out that Saito died 'young' or one of my sources say… So I'll be messing around with the ages a lot. Right now, what I've got planned is that Netto is right now 3 years old. Messed up yes but that means that Saito now dies 'young' and at a age where Netto wouldn't possibly be able to remember anything about him.
Kao: Actually, he doesn't understand the meaning of plot holes that well…
KrayZi: Go Ran! His ability to come back to life is so funny… Zero Ran… Cataclysm… or something like that…
Kao: As to all those who don't know what I'm talking about, look for 'Bob and George', it's a web comic with Megaman sprites. Down right hilarious.
KrayZi: I also chucked the idea bout this being a side story out, it didn't make much sense to me. Thanks for reviewing.
"You can access different functions by varying the amount of pressure, duration, and frequency of button presses. To access the main menu, lightly tap the button…"
"Wait, why not just have more than one button?"
"For simplicity of use, naturally. Now, access the main menu, tap the button lightly twice, then slowly tree times, the twelve times at medium fast…"
20 minutes pass
"…but whatever you do, don't press it really hard or you might activate the auto self-destruct"
-Quote from Bob and George: The Comic Strip 'You'll never look at Megaman the same way again.'
End Reviews
KrayZi: I suppose you can leave now. Either review this, read on when the next chapter comes out or review. Pick one.
Kao: Don't you dare click that little 'X' button! If you do, X will kill you!
X: Don't you dare bring me into this!
Kao: O yea? What can you do inside that little PeT of yours huh?
X: I can call X from the X series! Hey! X!
Other X: Hi I'm X.
X: No, I'm X!
Other X: I'm X!
KrayZi: This'll go on for a while, let's run before they notice us.
Kao: This idea of two of the same people from different universes was supplied by Bob and George with no permission. Don't sue us please.
KrayZi: Yes we are shameless advertisers for the greater comic... Or good…