KrayZi: Well we're finally back after a long hibernation.
Kao: Actually he was just too lazy to write this. Kept playing a game…
KrayZi: Well I can't help it if I like the game…
Kao: Whatever. KrayZi does not own the characters used in this fan fiction other than Yanoto and me… I still say that's wrong. Anyways, on to the fic.
KrayZi: Is this short enough everyone?
Wild Horse. Exe
Chapter 5: A New Member of the Family
Takato woke up. He looked dizzily around. His body felt so stiff and he hurt all over. He felt so light and everything seemed a lot bigger in this place. How long had he been sleeping? He looked around and suddenly realized that he wasn't in his bed at home. It looked kind of like a Hospital. He never liked Hospitals, especially the smell. It made him a bit woozy but he managed to right himself up.
Suddenly everything that happened came back to him in a rush. Rika's birthday, he had invited her to go watch the cherry blossoms bloom with him. The Trailmon that came, Rika went under a hypnotic spell and tried to kill him and Renamon. Her song. It was beautiful, she should sing more often. The Parasimon. It had controlled her the whole time and made her knock Renamon off the train and then tried to kill him. If Guilmon had not intervened, he probably would be dead. Rika getting captured. He Digivolved to Gallantmon to help her and rescued her. The Digital Zone. All the Parasimon came to invade the Real World. There were many. He was forced to mode change to Gallantmon Crimson Mode. He defeated the Parasimon and destroyed the Digital Field. That light coming at him was it that which put him in pain? He was taken by the light to this place that looked a lot like outer space. Those two people talking about him. As if he was an object. Guilmon. Guilmon… Guilmon was taken away from him. He had disappeared.
As a desperate attempt, Takato tried to feel Guilmon. He couldn't. He knew that Guilmon was alive. He still had a small connection; he could still feel a tiny speck of Guilmon's existence. But he couldn't find out where he was. Takato started to silently cry again.
"Guilmon… Where are you?"
Suddenly the door entered and a Nurse, a man and a child came walking in. The Nurse hurried to his side where all the instruments were to check up on his status. The man strolled up to Takato's side and pulled up a chair for him to sit in. The child stared at him curiously. The child then pulled another chair, sat on it and continued to watch Takato.
A Few Hours Earlier
Ranma had just finished all of his lessons when Yanoto came and invited himself into Ranma's 'house'. Ranma was currently watching another N1 Grand Prix with Axl on a Pet stand beside him that had the screen facing the TV. Yanoto glanced towards the screen and sighed. Ranma was watching way too many of these Net Battles. He knew that Ranma was a Martial Artist and loved being one but to watch these shows every chance possible? Ranma had to watch some other things too. But that wasn't the matter at hand right now. He had to talk to Ranma about the new arrival that had arrived yesterday.
"Ranma, how are you doing?"
Ranma didn't respond. Axl heard him and said again, "Ranma."
Ranma looked towards Axl in a questioning look annoyed at being interrupted from watching the one thing that kept his Martial Artist sanity in check. Axl motioned towards the door and Ranma turned to see Yanoto standing there.
"Hey Yanoto, how are you doing?"
"That's what I asked you Ranma. You should really try to watch something else."
"But there's nothing else to watch…"
"Whatever, but I have something to talk to you about. So switch off that TV and listen to me."
"Fine." Obediently, which the old Ranma would never be, he switched off the TV and turned towards Yanoto, "What is it?"
"There's another person who arrived like you."
"Like me? What do you mean? You said you found me in the alley outside right?"
"Not exactly… Actually I think that I should tell you about this. Ranma, this is strictly confidential, if someone else finds out that you know about this, there will be a lot of trouble for us. Got that? What you hear in this room must not be repeated anywhere else. Ok? Axl, that goes for you too."
"Right." Said Ranma, Axl nodded.
"Ok, the truth is, Yuuichiro and I brought you here, you weren't found in the alley outside, we have the technology to bring other people to this world."
"I knew it! You were lying!"
"You had a suspicion that I was lying?"
"Yep!"
"Well, anyways, you're part of a project that we're working on. You're not the only one we brought here. In fact, we have brought multiple other people over before. The reason we do this, is because everyone that can be brought over here seems to become some kind of superhuman in this world, either mentally, or physically in some way. Their capabilities seem to be much higher than ours."
"So you're telling me that I'm just part of a project? This is the reason I'm here?"
"Well not exactly… At least, not anymore… You see, Wily caught on to us early. He the started to bring people of his own into this world to first study them like we were and then make them his 'soldiers' as you could call it. So you see, it was now a great danger. The people that were brought over had power, power that could easily be corrupted and changed. We then had to either block all the ones that we could find or bring them here to our base. We already had others brought over here before that and when we started closing them up, we found that there were two that we couldn't seal. They were a rip to your world and another world. It seems Wily has been looking over those two too. But we got you before he did."
"So now, you're trying to keep me safe from this Wily by bringing me here? Ugh, my head hurts…"
"Just listen okay? Well, now the final rip was finally used up. We were able to bring someone else here too to keep them safe from Wily. But he's been unconscious for a day now. And he's still asleep. The doctors say that he should wake up tomorrow. I want you to come with me to meet him. Who knows, you just might make great friends with him."
"So… You brought us all here regardless of what life we had back home?"
"Well, it was either you give up your life or let the whole Universe and many different Dimensions face Destruction."
"Well, that I think I might be able to live with. My life back home kind of sucked."
"Really? I just might have to ask you about it some other time. Anyways, I'll come by tomorrow to pick you up, it'll be the time when you should have lessons with Alia but I think she would be happy to have a rest from teaching, she seemed very agitated lately…"
"Yes! A break away from her!"
Ranma, Present Time
Ranma looked cautiously at the other kid. He was the surprisingly the same age as he was, what chance was that? But his eyes, they looked haunted and downcast. As if he had lost all will to live. He realized that he had a life that he loved back from where he was. He was feeling really sorry for him. The nurse soon left the room and Yanoto broke the silence by introducing himself.
"Hello, my name's Yanoto Kiru and this is Ranma. Nice to meet you, what's your name?"
Takato, Present Time
Takato recognized this voice; he was the one that he heard arguing with the other guy who laughed horribly. This was the one who brought him here. This was the man who took him from Guilmon.
"You, you are the one that brought me here?"
"Well, sort of…"
"You… How could you… How could you do this! You took Guilmon away from me! You took my best friend!"
Takato lunged at Yanoto who was looking very surprised at him. But he was knocked away by a smaller form. It was that child that was beside the man. He lashed out with a fist to punch him away but his hand missed and the child grabbed it and threw him over his shoulder. Takato's eyes widened, a kid should not have been able to throw him like that. But then he realized it, when he had tried to attack the kid, his fist was small, like a child's. He looked down at them again. They were a child's hands. He was shocked. This wasn't real. This couldn't be real. It's not possible to be older one minute and then younger the next.
"Why the hell am I a kid?!"
"You mean you're not really 8 years old? Heh, you're just like me!"
"What? Ranma, you're not really 8?" asked the man as he stood up.
"Ummm," the kid, whose name was Ranma, let out a sigh, "Yea, I'm not really 8."
The man, Yanoto as he called himself fell back into his chair with a slump, "Impossible… Is this a result of bringing you over?"
"Actually no, I was already changed into a kid back in my world."
Takato stayed where he was on the floor, "What's going on…"
"It seems I have to explain this to you early…"
Yanoto the proceeded to tell Takato everything that he had told Ranma the previous day. After he told him about the world he was currently in though.
Next Day
Takato was currently moping around in the room given to him which just so happened to be right next to Ranma's. It was all so confusing, him needing protection? He would have been better off with Guilmon in his own world with his friends. They were able to beat the D-Reaper right? Besides, he doubted this Wily guy could have even touched him from another world. He sat down on the bed and fell backwards staring up at the ceiling.
He wondered if it would be possible to get Guilmon back if he went back home. He could go back home right? Ranma seemed pretty happy about being in this world; didn't he have anything that he wanted to stay with in his world? It's like he wanted to stay in this world. Who would want to leave their home behind and just live on as if nothing happened? He remembered him saying that he wasn't naturally a 8 year old either. How old was he originally? How did he become a eight year old for that matter? It's not like there's any possible way that he could have been turned younger unless there was something that went wrong went he was taken away from his home.
What about his friends? How were they dealing with his disappearance? He had already been gone a few days, surely his mom had called he police or something. She always worried about him. How could he possibly live on knowing that back home, everyone was worrying about him? Well, maybe not his teacher but everyone else must be worried.
He had to find a way back, a way back home, he couldn't stay here. Even though the one who brought him here good intentions, Takato couldn't help but stay mad at him for brining him into this new world. He had no idea how he became a 8 year old too. Was it because Guilmon was gone? It was possible. Guilmon had always been part of him.
Takato stayed in that room for two days and coming out only to get food to eat. But even that was kept to a minimum. Soon enough though, Takato came to his senses and decided to go along with it, until he could find a way back that is, as soon as there was a way, he was leaving.
Two Days Later
Ranma sat again bored in his and Alia's little 'Closet of Horror'. He was so close to happily dozing off but since he was the only student in class, he would be woken up as soon as he fell asleep; Alia was determined to make him suffer. He was getting worried about that Takato. He had hoped they could be friends since he really needed one that was about this new age. He didn't want to be alone again.
As if his wish came true, Yanoto came walking in with the new kid.
"Hey Alia, Ranma, Takato here is going to join in, do you need a bigger room or anything?"
Alia groaned and rested her head in her hands, "No just get another desk over here…" and she let out a big sigh.
Though Ranma was happy, Takato still was quite sad so Ranma tried his best to cheer him up by messing around with Alia which ended up with him always getting in trouble. Alia though, was now paranoid and was always on the watch out for Ranma.
Week Later
Ranma and Takato were currently talking in Ranma's room; it seems when Takato was moping around in his room, he had discovered a door that connected his and Ranma's room together. It was through the closet. Well, in Takato's case it was through the closet but for Ranma, it was through a door that looked exactly like the walls. He had managed to bruise his nose a couple of times trying to find it again. He had also asked why Takato had a closet but he didn't.
But right now, Ranma and Takato were talking about their old lives in their homes with Axl watching by the side. Takato talked very happily since he was overjoyed to be able to recall his past life's experience and share them with someone. Ranma though, didn't want to talk but was dragged into it by Takato. Takato was feeling better since he came and Ranma soon found out that Takato just had the weird ability to be able to make people do what he wanted by whining.
"Well, Digimon are Digital Life forms that take the shape of an animal." Explained Takato.
"So how the hell do you tell the difference from a bird and a Digimon? Wouldn't they look the same?"
"Umm, let me rephrase that. Digimon look like Digimon but different, like, for example, a normal bird is small but a Digimon bird would be gigantic and probably able to stand its feet and walk around. Digimon can also talk and they have their own world too!" said Takato happily as he discussed his hobby.
"Sounds like these Digimon of yours are a lot like Net Navis…" mused Ranma.
"Really? I've never thought of it like that… Net Navis… Hmmm, I wonder if having a Net Navi would be like having a Digimon… Now that I think about it, having a Navi is really like taming a Digimon. I mean, Digimon have Cards to boost their power and Navis have Chips that boost their power. They both also have a partner…"
"You've got something going there, maybe if you get a Navi, you'll be really good at it!" said Takato.
"Have… Another partner? No… I won't replace Guilmon! I won't!"
"No! I didn't mean it that way; Yanoto told me that with a certain program; Navis can be merged with another program to make a better one. Or add their powers or abilities to the program you want it to go to. Maybe if you do that with Guilmon as the base program, you'll have Guilmon as your Digimon AND Navi. Wouldn't that be cool?" said Ranma before Takato got too out of control.
"As long as Guilmon isn't replaced. Anyways, along with the story…"
As Takato got to the part before the whole thing with Trailmon started, although he skipped out on a few parts about him making WarGrowlmon digivolve to Megidramon, he started to slow down and started to get nervous about telling the story.
"Then Rika called me about my offer to go watch the Cherry Blossoms with me-"
"Wait, you mean like a 'date'? As in a real date?"
"Wha? No! No! Not a date! It's just that it was her birthday and her mother and grandmother told me to ask her about it. What are you so surprised anyways?"
"What age were you originally?"
"13."
"Well, it's just that I don't really understand the point of going out at such a young age… Also, I've never really been to on an official date before, at least, not one where I really wanted to go for myself and the other person for the same thing. Besides, do you like that girl anyways?"
"What? Rika? No way! She's way too violent! Anyways, continue on what you were saying."
"Well, I suppose it's only fair. Back in my world, I had this… curse that I really wanted to get rid of. No matter what though, I felt like it was impossible to get rid of. But then these Chinese Amazons came along and they claimed to have a cure to the curse. I always jumped at the chance to get rid of my curse. That's why I made so many mistakes in my life."
"What do you mean? You just wanted to get rid of something, how can you make a whole bunch of mistakes because of… Oh, I get it."
"Yea, whenever I had a choice between curing myself and something else, I always chose curing myself when I should have picked the other choice. So many things could have been avoided if I were to pick the better decisions. Relationships would be better; I wouldn't have so many enemies…"
"Enemies? Why would you have enemies?"
"I'm a Martial Artist and I'm the best of my Generation. At least, I was absolutely sure in my world. Now it's a new world and I want to explore it! I had enemies because they were either jealous or I did something to accidentally piss them off or I did it on purpose."
"Martial Arts? Do you think you can teach me? It would help to have something to take my mind off things…"
"Teach you? I'm not so sure. Maybe I can get you into a deal that Yanoto and I have."
"That would be great! Hey, before we get too far off the subject, what was the curse?"
"Curse? Uh… Err… Hey, look at that, we should go catch up to Yanoto before he leaves!" and Ranma left the room quickly avoiding the subject.
"What the… Hey Ranma! Get back here!" Yelled Takato as he got up and ran after his friend.
Axl blinked and looked at the disappearing form of Takato and Ranma. He thought about what Takato said about these Digimon. It sounded interesting; he would have to listen more. Too bad he couldn't move on his own accord. Axl then switched to Stand-By Mode.
Week Later
Obviously, Ranma managed to pull of the attempt on including Takato on his and Yanoto's deal. Takato of course, was not ready to have the same classes as Ranma since he was just a beginner. Therefore, Yanoto had to find more teachers for Takato. Takato barely managed to survive the Instructor's 'Wrath of Evil'. He was still a timid person after all. He always came back exhausted, tired and bruised. Well, since he was always bruised before going to his lessons, he had bruises upon bruises upon bruises upon bruises. But even though he was hurt, today, he was excited. Well, at least more excited than usual. For like Ranma on his day, Takato was getting a Navi.
As Ranma with Axl hanging on his hip in the Pet pouch led Takato to the same room where he had received his Navi, he attempted to explain everything Yanoto and X had told him on the day he had received Axl, of course, since Ranma didn't know much about technology, what came from his mouth was mostly some weird sounding things.
Now when they arrived there, Yanoto was already sitting there with X already in the computer. Yanoto was looking over two Cds in manner one could say was annoyed.
"Goddamn programmers… Ask for one and you get two… Waste of materials… Now the one Navi's abilities are split into two… Damn them…" muttered Yanoto.
"Hey Yanoto, I brought Takato here. Also, why the hell aren't there any signs around in the Hallways other than 'Lobby', 'Exit' and 'Bathroom'? Even those signs barely tell you where the rooms are, I tried to look for the bathroom after the sign but after going in the direction it said and then going left, then right, another right, going straight, another left, left again, and then right, left, left, straight, another straight, then left again and then finally another right, I was able to find the bathroom! What kind of sense is that?"
"Well, Ranma, you basically walked around in a circle. Anyways Takato, there was a problem when the programmers made your Navi and as a result, there are two Navis. No, you cannot have both so choose one and one only. The right? Or the left?" asked Yanoto as he waved the disk as he said them.
"Ummm… Well… Errr… I think I'll take the right one."
"The right one it is!" and Yanoto put the right disk on the table and put in the left disk.
"Hey! I said the right disk!"
"I know, you picked the one on the right, depending on which you picked, I would give you the other one."
"Why?"
"Things just work that way. Just go along with it. Besides, it's not like you can tell which is which."
"Fine. Hey, what's that?" Asked Takato as he saw the blue blocks.
Yanoto and X went through all of the explaining again. I'm not going to bother writing it down again. Go back and read it if you want.
"Yanoto, you forgot something again."
"Hmm? Oh yea! Takato, I forgot to give these things back to you. They're yours, they were found with you but we had to take them so you could get better. It's a pack of some weird cards, a pair of goggles and some weird electrical toy."
"What! My Digimon cards! My Goggles! My D-Arc! Great! Now I can find Guilmon!" and Takato put his Goggles around his head. Unfortunately, they were too big and they fell to hang around his neck.
"Yes, now back to the topic. About your Navi."
"Alright! Guilmon! I'm coming for you!" and Takato tried to run out the door but was stopped when Ranma grabbed onto the back of Takato's sweater.
"Come on Takato, let's get this over with first. I wanna see what your Navi will look like."
Takato sighed disappointedly, "Fine."
"Okay, now let's see… Oh my god… There's another screw-up."
"Why does my Navi have to have all the screw-ups?"
"Heh, sorry about that."
"Don't waste the materials kid; you don't know what they had to go through to make your Navi."
"Sorry…"
"Well, the problem is that your Navi's stats and colors have already been set."
"Is that a bad thing?"
"Depends, remember what I told you? What did you want the stats to be put to? They've been set to Intelligence and Special."
"I guess that isn't much of a problem… But I was thinking about putting it into Special and Speed."
"Do you want to have the other Navi then?"
"No, it's fine."
"Okay now we'll go get your Pet. Ranma, you stay here with X."
"Damn…"
"What's so bad about staying with me?"
"Well… I… Ummm…. I don't know."
"Then don't make such a big deal out of it!"
"Come on Takato; let's leave them to their argument. You really don't want to get in between them."
As Yanoto led Takato to the next room, Takato immediately picked out black Pet with red highlights.
"I don't know why I picked this one; it's just that I felt something wanted me to pick it…"
"Okay, now let's transfer your Navi to your Pet."
They walked back to the other room to find Ranma trying to tear X's Pet out of the machine it was in so that he could throw it and smash it on the floor.
"Yanoto! Help me! He's trying to delete me!"
"Ranma! Stop that! I don't know what you two were arguing about and I'm sure I don't want to know so stop that right now!" said Yanoto in a commanding tone.
"Yes sir…" said Ranma but in his thoughts were… Damn him… If he was back to normal, he sure as hell wouldn't have to obey anyone! But then again they did take him away from his old life.
"Alright X, download the Navi into the new Pet now."
"Sure, just don't order me around like that."
X's eyes glazed over with an empty look for a moment to complete the task. His eyes went back to normal soon though.
"Done."
The Navi's basic program then appeared in the Pet. Like Axl, Takato's Pet then opened many windows and doing something before shutting them all down. The Navi then began to take shape. As the Navi began forming, X asked Takato a question.
"Hey Takato, what are you going to name your Navi?"
"Hmm? Name? How about… Midi?"
"Hmmm, not as original as Axl and it sounds kind of girly, might not fit well since female Navis haven't been made yet…" said X.
Suddenly the new Navi finished its installation and looked out of his Pet. It was a Green Navi with White Highlights. It looked like any other usual Standard Navi but it also had a blue crystal on its chest and forehead. It also looked a bit younger. But then it spoke.
"Hi! How are you all? I don't know what my name is but I'm sure it's going to be great! Do you know what I am? I am a Navi with the specialty in Special and Intelligence! I can't fight that well but I sure can use a lot of special attacks and I'm also super smart! So who's going to be my operator? I'm really excited…" as the Navi continued to ramble on, X then made a comment.
"Actually… I take back that comment about the name Midi not fitting…"
Takato was speechless. Ranma was on the floor laughing. Yanoto looked amused for a while before he got annoyed and switched Midi off.
"Hey what do you think you're doing? Only my Operator can touch this Pet! Hey! Don't touch that…" and he then switched off and disappeared.
"Takato… Do you want to try the other? If you don't like this one it'll be fine…"
"Ummm… Sure."
"Hmmm… He sounds way too much like an original Navi
As the other Navi appeared, they saw that it was purple with white highlights. He too had a crystal on his chest and on his head but his face was almost stuck in an evil sort of grin.
"I don't know who the hell you people are but I know for sure that my name's Techno. Hell, you better hope that none of you will be my Operator; you all are way too wimpy. There's no way in hell that I'll listen to any of you. Heh, I bet that you can't even lift a rock and throw it over a house! You guys all suck."
"On second thought, I think I'll stay with Midi."
"Okay, I think it would be better too."
Yanoto then proceeded to turn Techno off.
"What the hell do you think you're doing? Screw off dude; don't get your greasy hands all over this Pet, because this is MY property! Hey! Damn… I'll get you for this…"
Yanoto then replaced Techno with Midi again.
A Week Later
"Alright class, partner up! We're going to have another Net Battling Lesson!" said Ranma's and Takato's teacher.
Someone then said, "Alright! I'm going to beat you Rick! Plug in! Shiningman. Exe! Transmission!"
"Shining… I'm Shining… If you shine then I'll Shine…"
Ranma looked at whose Navi that was. He felt kind of sick knowing that someone had named his Navi that. The Operator was a brown haired boy that was about 7 or 8 years old.
Takato looked slightly disturbed at what he heard coming from the Navi.
Since the class was now even numbered, they all had a partner. Ranma of course had partnered with Takato. During the week, Takato had discovered that Midi only liked to talk so much because he was very open. But after he had finished 'opening up', Midi had always settled into a more calculating personality, one that fit his intelligence very well. Ranma didn't like him very much since he was always reminded of Nabiki when he was like that. Right now, Midi was in that intelligent personality.
"Alright Axl, he doesn't know how to Net Battle that well so take advantage of that!"
"Hey! That's not fair!"
"Haven't I already told you? I think Net Battling is just a more strategic and intelligence based form of Martial Arts. Except you don't get hit, it's your Navi that gets that. So I've decided to treat it like Martial Arts. My school is the Anything Goes Martial Arts style. One of the basics of it is to take advantage of your opponent's weakness. You got that Takato? Because I'm going to beat you. Remember what I said Axl? Let's do it!"
After Takato had gotten his Navi, Yanoto had talked to Ranma and Axl about giving Axl a better speech pattern. For some reason, Axl had declined the offer and Ranma had decided to go with what Axl had said. He considered Axl one of his few friends on this world so he would help Axl in any way that he could.
"Okay Ranma, Midi and I will try our hardest to get as good as you and more. Alright Midi?"
"Yea!"
"Plug in! Axl. Exe! Transmission!"
"Plug in! Midi. Exe! Transmission!"
Takato thoughts did not drift towards Guilmon as much. After realizing that he would not be able to find Guilmon through his D-Arc for unknown reasons, he had decided to wait it out. He still hoped of course, he always checked his D-Arc before going to sleep. He still wore it on his side along with his goggles around his neck. But he would wait for Guilmon to come back. He would wait.
Somewhere Unknown
Guilmon stirred. He got up from lying down on the hard floor for a long time. He looked around. He seemed to be in the company of two others. He looked down at himself feeling different. Stronger. To his surprise, he was now black where he use to be red and black where he use to be black. The mark of the Hazard on his chest was there as always too.
"You're finally awake! Took you long enough. Don't go thinking that we were the ones that hurt you, we just found you like that."
That voice. Female for sure.
"Well we already healed you, what are you doing in a place like this? We know that you aren't from this world like we are." Asked the second, he sounded a lot like an animal by the way he spoke.
"Guilmon… Don't know…" he said confusedly.
"Your name's Guilmon? Well, are you lost?" asked the female concernedly.
"Guilmon must find Takatomon!"
"Takatomon? Haven't heard of him." Said the animal sounding person.
"Want to travel with us? We're looking for someone too. We can help each other out!"
Guilmon thought about it before agreeing.
"Okay, you should be fine now so let's start moving now."
With that, the three figures of a black dinosaur, a human, and an animal moved around wherever they were avoiding trouble but sometimes watching a few battles. They became very good friends because they would be wandering for a long time.
KrayZi: Looks like Takato's fitting in nicely…
Kao: But a bit too nicely…
KrayZi: Well sorry! I can't help it if I still can't make all this great emotiony stuff!
Kao: Meh. Just so some of you know, that part about Ranma thinking about how he wished he would be in his old body was because of some reviewers.
KrayZi: Yep, I didn't really like how this chapter turned out that much. I think it kind of sucks…
Kao: Just in case some of you want to know, Axl and X are taken from Megaman X series. Midi was supposed to be Middy but I liked Midi better since it doesn't look as girlish. No offence to girls or anything. Anyways, Techno and Middy were taken from Megaman Xtreme. Okay?
KrayZi: Now on to the reviews!
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Reviews for Chapter 5
To: Max Knight
Review:
Hmm...I haven't watched Tamer b4 but it seems interesting. Can't say much since it's about Digimon and I never watched it b4.
Some grammar and spelling mistakes. (It's they're not their.)
Reply:
KrayZi: Haven't watched Tamers before? That's okay; because there's not going to be much Digimon Tamers stuff in this. If there is, it'll be explained.
Kao: Thanks for checking it over but KrayZi's too lazy to fix them.
KrayZi: Thanks for reviewing.
To: needmore
Review:
yes..i did review them all
i'm relatively sure that Saito died VERY early on...i think he was born with a disease...oh well
ah yes..a classic BnG saga, the Light-o-matic all-purpose control device with easy-to-use, anti-matter based self-destruction core for his insane-inducing, mental trauma torturing time-traveling suit that fizzles without end (my attempt to mimic one of Dr. Light's manuals)
YEA for us...the entrance of the Digi-navis..
what point in the timeline does this fit in? Crimson mode is at the end and i thought the Digi-world was sealed away...
plus...doesn't Guilmon call Takato Takatomon...he calls everything with a "mon" (hope he doesn't change it to ".EXE" in the EXE world - but then there's the fact you killed him! murderer! killer of innocent, cute, fluffy maybe not mentally-impaired creatures)
Reply:
KrayZi: Yay! You read and reviewed them all!
Kao: Well, I know what to do about the Exe gang now.
KrayZi: Time travel… Gotta hate it.
Kao: Digi-Navis? Not really…
KrayZi: Well, the Digimon movies don't really fit into the Digimon timeline you know… They're kinda like an extra. Just take it as a given.
Kao: The 'Mon' is what makes things interesting between Guilmon and Takato. Also, it'll be fun making him call everything that and confuse the hell outta everyone.
KrayZi: Kill him? I never wrote that… It just seems like it but nope, didn't happen. Guilmon's my favourite Digimon in the whole Digimon series.
Kao: Thanks for reviewing. Sucks to have to keep writing that doesn't it…
KrayZi: You bet it does…
To: TheCentauress
Review:
Glad to review, even if this chapter was a 'gimmie'. I forgot one last detail on the Neko-mode: The charged shot evolves as the Navi does. In standard mode, Neko-blasto is a common housekitten in size/shape. It is a standard-strength blast or a 5-hit shield. At final evolution, it can take the form of 50 housecats for the shield or a great-cat for blast. The Navi's armor should reflect the change into Neko-mode, with the weapons slotted showing a similar variation, (Sword morphs into Tiger-claw gauntlets etc.) Post again ASAP! Ja!
Reply:
KrayZi: Yep, it was a Gimme, just explaining how Takato came into all this. I could have included that with this chapter… But I'm trying to get each chapter past 80 kb… besides, if I put them both into one, it'll take too long for me to update and I'm sure no one wants that. Oh yea, I'm gonna take your idea about the Neko-Mode and put it on the side, might use it. But I'll need to change it a bit of course. You don't mind that right?
Kao: Sorry for the long delay!
KrayZi: Thanks for reviewing.
To: Gopu
Reply:
KrayZi: Short review, short answer.
Kao: Simply thanks; we really appreciate any kind of praise.
KrayZi: Thanks for reviewing
To: Firehedgehog
Review:
update again soon...
... I'm one of your fav authors... cool... which fic... yatta... another fan who i like there stories too.
anyway, poor takato, sniff, why does everyoneseem to torture him in soemway in everyfic... like i do in soem way.
ja ne
Reply:
KrayZi: Sorry again for the delay!
Kao: Takato's character just seems to beg for torture… It's true you know…
KrayZi: Well not everyone tortures him…
Kao: Besides, at least Takato AND Guilmon makes new friends.
KrayZi: Thanks for reviewing.
To: phoenixmb
Review:
Great so far, too short to make any good reviews or opinions, but the plot has potential and it's getting better by the chapter. Shouldn't Ranma's PET be able to learn anything really quickly because it's a computer program? If so, can't Ranma teach it martial arts? Heh, that'd be rich seeing a PET catch a sword between two fingers... Oh well, keep at it!
Reply:
KrayZi: Well it's longer than most you know…
Kao: So he is improving… Darn…
KrayZi: I resent that. I'm gonna have to punish you.
A0: How are you gonna… Oh… Damn…
KrayZi: Ranma is slowly corrupting Axl with a few stuff from Anything Goes… You can see that when he makes that speech right before the end.
A0: Pet is the device which the Navi is in. They don't throw swords in the Net.
KrayZi: But who says that they can't?
A0: Thanks for reviewing.
To: Silverscale
Review:
Yet another amazing chapter you have made.
But what will happen when Guilmon and Takato meet Ranma?
Reply:
KrayZi: Thanks.
A0: You can see how Takato met Ranma.
KrayZi: Guilmon will be later. They all will meet Ranma and Takato at about the same time.
A0: Thanks for reviewing.
KrayZi: I don't believe it… I have 50 reviews after having 5 chapters! That's an average of 10 per chapter! Woo!
A0: Thanks everyone!
KrayZi: I now understand the joy that all the authors seem to have when someone reviews their stories… Now, keep reviewing!