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The Wall That Naru Built
Chapter four
Sword of Steel, Heart of Broken Glass
A/N we all know that she has also beaten Keitaro much like Naru but there was something different about it. Could a trained swordsman be weaker then a violent untrained brat? I don't think so then why did Naru send Keitaro through the roof and away with her punches but Motoko couldn't do it with a sword? Is she weak or is she holding back? This portrayal of Motoko is probably different then what you are used to but this is the way I think she really thinks. She is nothing like Naru and in the end, you will know exactly how different she really is.
And then there was Motoko Aoyama, heir to the god's cry school of swordsmanship and a sword master herself at such a young age. She is also another one of the abusers of one Keitaro Urashima. But there is a difference A BIG DIFFERENCE between her and the violent Naru.
She had seen a side of Keitaro that Naru couldn't see. A warm compassionate man that loved each of them deeply but she also saw a weak and spineless man with the signs of being somewhat perverted who wouldn't put his foot down on what she saw as flagrant abuse towards him by one Naru Narusewega. She could have easily stopped it herself but she wanted him to do it. To become the man that she always wanted him to be. The man that she could call her boyfriend had he turned his back on Naru.
She became so frustrated with him that she would strike him with her sword attacks because it was becoming so difficult to change him into a man that she could really admire and because of that, she held back from using the full force of her sword techniques. When she saw Keitaro finally put his foot and end his relationship with Naru, she didn't show much of any emotion then but inside she was happy inside. She knew that he had finally took the first step in being a man and put his foot down on her abuse.
That he had finally gotten tired of being used as a punching bag and she believed that he was looking for a girlfriend who really loved him. A girlfriend that wouldn't beat him and hurt him physically and emotionally and that surely wasn't Naru. She wouldn't stop her vicious assaults both physically and emotionally and she couldn't see the man that Keitaro could become. She couldn't see the warm compassionate side of him that was hidden behind the clumsy perverted image that was projected in front of his good traits.
She could see that and she has been trying in her own way to bring the good traits forward and make the boy that Keitaro is into the man that Keitaro could be. She knew now that it was time to confess to him what she had hidden for so long. It was time to confess to everyone and especially Keitaro what she had wanted for so long. Even if she would not be the girl that Keitaro would call her girlfriend but it wouldn't matter because knowing that had a place in Keitaro's heart as his friend would be good enough for her but she really wanted more then to just be his friend.
After Shinobu and Kitsune had gotten up and said what they needed to say, she knew it was her turn.
"I had wanted to say this for a long time now. I had thought you were only a spineless cowardly pervert when I first met you but as I got time to know you better and it was then I realized that there was an another side of you. A warm compassionate selfless side who would do anything for each of us no matter what the cost to you. I had grown to love that side of you but you were persistent in staying weak and cowardly and I wanted you to take a stand and stop being Mr. Rollover but someone who wouldn't allow others to control ever aspect of your life. When I would strike at you was because I have gotten so frustrated with you and I knew you could do it but you kept being so cowardly that sometimes I lost my temper and struck at you but unlike her I felt terrible after I each time I struck at you. When I first saw you take a stand and stop allowing Naru to abuse you like she does all the time I thought that this was it. This was you taking your first step in becoming a man I and admire, respect and love with all my heart. I now want to say this because I have been holding this feeling in for so long and now I must confess what I really feel for you, Keitaro.
I . . . . . . . . I . . . . . . . love you, Keitaro Urashima. I love you with all my heart and soul and hope that you share the same feelings for me. I don't know if you all understand me but this song will show how I really feel." Motoko said.
I am a little bit of loneliness
a little bit of disregard
handful of complaints but I can't hide the fact that everyone can see
I'm not perfect
I am what I want him to want, what I want him to feel
It's like no matter what I do, I can't convince you, that the love
he shares is real.
So I let go, watching you, break his heart like you always do
face away and pretend that he can't feel it
But I'll be here 'cause he is all that I got
I can't be the way I was before
don't turn your back on me bitch
I won't be ignored.
Time will tell if you are right or wrong
Don't turn you back on me
I won't be ignored
I am a little bit insecure
a little unconfident
Cause you don't understand I do what I can
but sometimes I don't make sense
I am what you never wanna say but I 've never had a doubt.
It's like no matter what I did, I can't convince you for once just to hear him out
So I let go watching you break his heart like you always do
face away and pretend no one can see it
But I'll be here 'cause he is all that I've got
I can't be the way I was before
don't turn your back on me bitch
I won't be ignored.
Time will tell if I am right or wrong
Don't turn you back on me
I won't be ignored
NO!
HEAR ME OUT NOW!
YOU'RE GONNA LISTEN TO ME, LIKE IT OR NOT!
RIGHT NOW!
HEAR ME OUT NOW!
YOU'RE GONNA LISTEN TO ME, LIKE IT OR NOT!
RIGHT NOW!
I let you treat him like you always do no more
don't turn your back on me bitch
I won't be ignored.
I can't believe
what you just did to him
what the hell were you thinking girl
you are such a monster
Time will tell if I am right or wrong
Don't turn you back on me bitch
I won't be ignored
I can't believe
what you just did to him
what the hell were you thinking girl
Time will tell if I am right or wrong
Don't turn you back on me
I won't be ignored
The wall is still standing but two more much larger cracks have formed.
END
next chapter
note changed 8/11 I have decided to put Naru's piece at the second to last chapter. I now realize that it would flow better then having her say anything at any earlier time.
Instead of that I will write
The Dark Side of the Red Moon Kaolla Su says her piece
song used for the parody breaking the habit
A/N the pairing has been decided
as for the pairing I have already told you but I am going to let you figure it out.
And it is not Keitaro and Naru for he is not going back to . . . That person!
Please Read and Please Review I would really like to hear your thoughts on every chapter of this story.
I have not abandoned Love Hina: Evil Edition for all readers of that story and if you haven't yet I highly recommend reading it for it is a very good humor fanfic for any Keitaro/ anyone but Naru fan.