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The Wall That Naru Built
Chapter Five
The Dark Side of the Red Moon
A/N I apologize for the long wait as a case of writer's block and a great deal of time was then spent working on my new fanfiction forum which left almost no time to work on any of my ongoing fics. If you want to visit and possibly join this forum just click on my name and then click on homepage. It will bring you to my forum called BZ Fanfiction Forum which is a place for fanfiction writers, original fiction writers, lemon fiction writers and also a place for experience artists to show off their creations and a place to chat with the current and future members and discuss just about anything one can think of. My forum current has 49 members but I am always looking for new members so take a look as I will post works in progress there before getting posted on fanfiction dot net.
Story notes: Well this chapter is dedicated to Kaolla Su and paints a side of her that is rarely seen in the anime or in fanfics. Many people see the carefree happy Su but there is another side of her that while there is not seen by many. In the anime, she treats him as a friend in the beginning but as time passes she starts to see him as a brother she never had. A man who unlike her brother could accept her for who she was and a person who only wanted for to be happy and that is when she sees him in a different light.
And then there was Kaolla Su.
To many she seemed one who just didn't care for her future or thought much about it or anything important for that matter but few really knew who she really was. She really had thought long and hard about what she really wanted to do but she wanted her friends to be happy and be there with her as she took the steps to making her dreams become a reality but now she wasn't so sure anymore.
She would play with her inventions and accidently hurt Keitaro with them but she never meant to do harm to him but she wondered if she was to blame? As a princess to the kingdom of Mol Mol and a future heir to the throne it would appear that there wasn't a thing that she would ever need that she couldn't find but there was one thing that she lacked in life. She wanted someone to accept her for who she was and not push her to be someone else.
Her family didn't like how she acted and they didn't accept her and it hurt her deeply and she ran away from everything that one could want in search of someone who would accept her for what she was. She wanted someone who could be the brother she never had and even though the person she called "brother" loved her but wouldn't accept her for what and who she was and tried to push her to be more adult like and she would have none of it but when she first met the man everyone called a perverted lecher and a loser, she saw something in him that the many of the others couldn't see. She saw the warm and caring side of the man who's name is Keitaro Urashima. They became fast friends and grew close but it wasn't until the moment that he had told her that he wanted her to be who she wanted to be and he accepted her for who she was and expected nothing less. Even though she never shown it, the thought that there was someone who could be the brother she always wanted.
A man who would never push her to be anything more then what she wanted to be. A man who loved her as a close friend who would always be there for her and help her to do whatever she wanted to do in life but now things were changing and for the worse because of what Naru had done to him but she wondered if her use of her inventions and the pain they caused was one of the causes for the change in Keitaro.
She became confused at why he had grown so distant to everyone. She wanted to know the truth and to clear her mind of this confusion that had been brought upon her by Keitaro Urashima's actions. She never thought what she did was hurting him but now she wasn't so sure anymore and she would open her heart to all and express what she wanted to express and say what needed to be said.
As she saw Motoko and Shinobu say their piece and then she saw how little she knew of the people she called her friends. It was now her time to say what she had wanted to say but until now.
I didn't know how to express what I had wanted to say for a long time but now I have found the way to truly express what I have been thinking for a while now. Through this song, I hope that I can say what I wanted to say and express what I have thought for so long to all of you.
This song title breaking my heart and parody of breaking the habit
I saw it all
It hurt me to no end
it's breaking my heart again
you all assume
that I am just a silly little girl
you have no idea what goes through my mind
I don't want to be the one
that hurts him anymore
'Cause inside I realize
that I'm the one confused
I don't know why she fighting again
or why he had to scream again
I don't know why she instigates
and says things that are so mean
I don't know how it got this way
I know it's not all right
So you're breaking my heart
you're breaking my heart
again
watching my friend
get hurt by her once again
I try to block out all of the sounds
it hurt much more
than anytime before
I had no way to explain how I felt
I don't want to be the one
that hurts him anymore
'Cause inside I realize
that I'm the one who may be at fault
I don't know why she fighting again
or why he had to scream again
I don't know why she instigates
and says things that are so mean
I don't know how it got this way
I know it's not all right
So you're breaking my heart
you're breaking my heart
again
Naru's hated by us all now
and she's the one at fault
I'll never let her hurt him again.
And this is how it ends
I don't know why she fighting again
or why he had to scream again
but now I have some clarity
to show you what I mean
I know now how it got this way
I know now that it's not my fault
So you're breaking my heart
you're breaking my heart
you're breaking my heart
no more
and the wall still stood but another crack had formed.
END
the next chapter will focus on two characters this time. Kanako Urashima and Mutsumi Otohime. And is titled heart ripped from the inside out