A dangerous love,an odd couple
(A/N this is my first fanfic, so im sorry its gonna suck. the story is about a young otter, who is now in charge of holt braveheart, the holt her father was head of. She falls in love with a fox with an unbelievably colored coat,who has a brother more evil than Vulpiz, the king of hellgates!Bad feelings begin brewing in the holt, fueled by a jealous male otter, and ... a pygmy shrew with a giant sword and hate of all animals not "woodlanders"?! I cant do the pygmy shrew writing, so sorry. Also, i so badly want reviews, i don't care if their all flames! Also, this chapter is only giving a little bit of knowledge on the characters.)
Amber Stormtrench, the only child of Seagill Stormtrench, leader of holt braveheart, kneeled over her father in the last moments of his life. With tears in her eyes, she asked her father, "what will i do without you?" he replied, jokingly, "well, for one, you could lead the holt." they both laughed after that. It was evident that they were descendants of brookflow, or "brooky" as most people had called her, in her time. He said, more seriously, "you really do have to take control of the holt. I really don't want young kilta to take over, i really don't trust him." she merely nodded her head at that. As his life started fading, he said, "you know, your eyes are just like your mothers." upon saying that, he died. She dried her tears and left to announce the news to her holt.
Sirerio, or Seri, a fox with ruby fur around his body, and sapphire fur on his tail, was running for his life, chased by a pygmy shrew with a sword as long as him. he called out, "how can you lift that bloody thing?" the pygmy shrew, who's name was Zerk Slappahsword, yelled out "shut up! I gonna kill you, for what you did to my family!" Seri yelled back, " I've never even seen a pygmy shrew before you started chasing me!" realization hit Seri like a bolt of lightning. His brother! That evil fox killed anything that got in his way, except Seri. "it must have been my brother! He kills everything in his path!" he yelled, doubting that Zerk would believe him.
Zerk was chasing the fox relentlessly. His thoughts turned to his family, as the fox said something about his brother.He had been out fishing to feed his family, which included him, his wife, their ten kids, his aunt and uncle, and his five brothers and sisters,who had no children. He had caught three small trouts, fifty shrimp, a baby pike, and two ancient graylings, so old they couldn't fight back.
He was bringing the pike and shrimp up the hill, when he saw a fox, who looked exactly like Seri, coming out of his house with a bloody sword, and his house was starting to burn. He checked inside, and saw that everyone was slaughtered brutally. He cried a little, then grabbed a sword that was above the mantle of the fireplace, and set out for revenge.
Kilta, a power hungry, lustful, vain otter, was after the title holt leader. And he would either kill or trick, or seduce into getting what he wanted. And he now wanted two things: amber as his wife or lover, and to be leader
(A/Nsorry Kilta's past was so bad, but it is my FIRST fan fiction, so its bound to suck badly)